Progression ft ShiVi (updated part 9) *COMPLETED* - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It was beautiful ❤️

Waiting for more

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing concept 👍👍


Great start 😍😍😍


Cont next part soonish🤗🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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PART 2


Prafulla and jagat arrive at pandya niwas.


Jai somanth suman ben.

Suman-Hn jai somnath aaj yaha kese?

Prafulla- Kya suman ben aap ab beti ka ghar h toh kbhi bhi aa skte h na!!😁

Suman- Aey kagadi!!

Jagat- Voh suman ben aaj maan hua aane ka toh aa gye or bht din ho gye h ghr suna suna h toh socha raavi ko bhi lekr chle jate h thode din ke liye ap apko takleef na ho toh!!

Suman- Acha thik lejana, Raavi sun

Raavi- Ji kaki,

Tu samaan pack krle tere mausapa teko lene aaye h!

Par kaki achanak se kch bt h kya, koi glti hui kya merse??raavi said in hesitation.

Nahi nahi idr aa( she come) she put her hand on her head.. yeh jo jagya h na tujse bht pyar krta h yad aati hogi na teri isliye chle ja thode din. Agr teko jana h toh ja vrna thik che.


She looked at mausapa and maasi who want to spend time with her!!

Mei chli jaungi kaki kch din hi toh bt h- raavi said with a forced smile.


Raavi is feeling restless ans nervousness but wonder why??

She must be happy but why she is not??


Raavi started packing his essential and found shiva's vest in her bag which is accidentally kept with other clothes.

She reminds of the night whn shiva is shirtless whn she entered the room, his body ,abs ,biceps everything is making her weak...she controls herself and give this vest to him!!

She came back to sense over some noise and start taking step towards the cupboard, she turned and found shiva there..

Tu..tu yha ky kr rha h..

Tu kha ja rhi h muje bina bataye!! Shiva said by pulling her waist closer to himself

Raavi is feeling uncomfortable with their proximity..

Acha yeh bta mere bina reh legi tu???

Haan reh lungi koi shaq nahi h!! She said in confidence

Acha!! He smiles..

He comes closer to her neck, she can feel his breath..

She closed her eyes and whn she opened he couldn't find him ..

"Yeh kya tha" she exclaimed


Raavi is all ready to go but she want to meet shiva once, everyone is here expect shiva.


Aey gaumbi shiva kha h bula usse, phone kr!! Suman said

Maa voh shiva kisi zruri kam se somnath ke bahar gaya h or vaha network nahi aata..raat ko late aayega!!


Raavi felt so bad after hearing this, she now not even hear his voice!!


Raavi on the way try to call shiva but because of network issue she couldn't make a call.

Shiva ek baar network wali jgh pr chle ja taki tuje bta du ki mei ja rhi hu!


Shiva on the way to home "Bhot late ho aaj toh, voh chipkali chudailo ki tarah naach rhi hogi poore ghr m" he smiles😊

He entered from the window because its too late and he usually does it!

He found krish their- aye gadhede tu soya nahi

Nahi voh tuje khane ke liye bolna tha na isliye


Shiva by himself "voh ghadedi kha gyi aasmaan nigal gya kya"


Agr tu bhabhi ke baare m soch raha h toh mei tuje bta deta hu voh ghar pr nahi h.


Ghr pr nahi h kha h itni raat ko- Shiva asked scarcely

Aree aree kyu preshan ho raha h chetak pr sawar mt ho bhabhi apne ghr gyi h mtlb mama-mami k pas voh aaye the unhe lene!


Shiva disappoint after hearing, its feels like his most precious things is taken away from him!!


Chli gyi or muje bataya bhi nahi, krish tu toh muje call kr skta tha na

Kra tha hazar baar , message bhi kiya tha tuje pr tu toh h hi....sry mtlb tu kbhi message dekhta hi nhi h toh ism meri kya glti h- krish said and left


Shiva takeout his phone and yes there are many messages but his eyes only fell on one message which is addressed by the most beautiful name "Raavi"




Hey this is second part hope u liked it all and thankyou so much for all the love on first part💖

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Posted: 4 years ago
#14

Loved it ❤😍


Now they will miss each other

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Aww Raavi was imagining Shiva

He is going to miss her or even going to meet her at Mama Mamis place

Loved this part, please continue soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
#16

Beautiful update 💘❤️

Waiting for next

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Posted: 4 years ago
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awwww this is really amazing

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I'm unable to like the post for some reason 😕

But lovely update! ❤️

Both ShiVi will miss each other.. waiting for the next one!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow I love the title

Now that’s is highly progressive and I am in love with progression always

Loved the kick start part

Would love to read more

Update soon dr

Much love

Jen

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 3

"Shiva mei ghr ja rhi hu tuje toh somnath se bahar hi rhne h na tu reh ek kam kr tu na jungle m chle ja vse bhi bandar toh tu h hi na. BYE!!!"

Shiva come in room, he is feeling restless, All his tiredness sleep went away.

He just want to meet his chipkali once.

"Shiva kya soch raha h tu kahi or dhyan de kahi or dhyan de"

On the other hand

Raavi is feeling the same.

Stupid, idiot, gadha,fool pta nhi message bhi dekha hoga ya nahi..

Mera farz tha message krna meine kr diya..

"Kya farz" raavi remember wht she said

She turn off the light and get on her bed.

Here shiva is checking his phone in a hope to receive some message but no message received.

"Ab kya muje hi krna pdega kya" shiva by himself

"Tu so gyi kya"

Sent, seen but no reply

"Acha teek h na manta hu glti hogyi muje tuje btana chahiye tha"

Seen but no reply

"Aey gadhedi itna bhav kyu kha rahi h tu mere aane tk ka wait ni kr skti thi milkha singh bnkr bhagne ki bht jldi thi ky tuje?"

Seen but no reply

Shiva now irritated but he manage to calm himself as much as possible.

Now he decide to call her not voice...video call

He called her...she declines

He again called her...she did same and this pattern follows till 3-4 times.

"Bhootnath tu krta reh try nahi krne tujse behas muje" she said

"Yeh chudail bhi na bht ziddi isko sabak sheekhna hi pdega"

This all scene furious shiva he went out of his home, start his bike and went ahead towards mami house,

In the middle of night, the street night are creating more aesthetic to dark night and his thought about raavi, he is loving it ❤

He stand the bike and looked at the window, it was opened and the curtains are blowing due to pleasant winds.

He climb with the help the pipes to reach the window.

"Yeh kya kr rha h tu shiva ab choro ki trh harkarte kyu rha h"

By the time he reached while murmuring this

"Chl shiva ghr chl is gadhedi ko subah sabak sheekhana"

Just as he was about to turn back, wind blows the settling curtains on sides, he catched some glimpse of her.

Without realising anything, he is now entered in room, he is just mesmerized with the view he is watching from his eyes, it is so aesthetic💫

She was sleeping like a baby, so calm, peacefully and beautifully💓

He create some space and sat beside her, his eyes were filled with affection and greed to grab her against his geniually, he wanted to tell her how much attraction he has towards her.

He slightly put the strands of her hair behind ear.

She grabs his wrist, he fumble with hesitation what if she awake

She will definitely kill him without any regret!!

He tried to unfree himself from her grab but her holding is strong enough to let him stay at her place.

Shiva give up and lay with her

"Aey gadhedi kyu h tu esi, tuje mana kra tha mt kr yh sb dur reh mujse...bola tha na ki meri feelings ki PHD krke mere maan ke department mei tuje jagah nahi milegi fir kyu aa gyi tu yaha"

"Chipkali tera zehar na mere sar pr chad gya h" he smiled with satisfaction on his face.

RAAVI,

"Muje na kuch feel ho raha h kch dino se pta ni kya h mtlb mei janta hu ache se kya h pr yeh kese hua yeh smj ni aa rha h??

Tu mere samne hoti h toh tujse nazare nahi hata pata or jb tu mere khareeb aa jati h na toh dil bht zor-zor se dhadakne lgta h, maan krta h apne hatho se tere baal sawaru, teri in badi badi gaheri aankho mei doob jau, tere hotho se apna naam sunna chahta hu.

Tujse ladai krne ka preshan krne ka haq sirf mera h or kisi ka nahi , agr kisi or ki wjh tere aankh mei aansu bhi aajaye na toh mera khoon khaulne lag jata h, mera bs chale toh us insaan ko jaan se maar du!!

Tu muje chahiye har pal mere pa, tu mujse dur mt jana or sochna bhi mt vrna m ladunga kiske sath, kisko "pyar" se dekhunga.

Tu mujse dur jati h na toh m reh nhi paunga, ek din bhi nahi hua abhi ,dekhle tere pas aa gya

Tera shiva sirf tera"❤







Hey everyone this is part 3 i hope you all will love it💓

Whatever is coming ahead is interesting so fasten your seatbelts


-S Verma

Edited by S_Verma - 4 years ago

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