Progression ft ShiVi (updated part 9) *COMPLETED* - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing update👏

Very sweet and cute update 💓

Waiting for next

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Lovely update 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩



Kash raavi jaag rhi ho😅😅😅

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Gosh it was so sweet. Make ravi hear his feelings please.

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Outstanding 😍😍 hell excited for the next

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PART-4


Raavi woke up first and shocked after finding herself in shiva's arms, she ungrab his wrist

"Yeh....yeh kese or meine iska hath.."

She try to sit but strands of her hair is under shiva's biceps.

"Ek yeh iske biceps itne strong ab kese nikalu, zor se kheecha toh drd muje hi hoga or iski neend khul jayegi"

"Kitna acha lg raha h shanti se sota hua" her tongue slip again.

She is on the way but suddenly shiva woke up, their eyes met, they r so close that their nose r touching each other, shiva wnna kiss her, raavi steam his intention and break the contact.

Shiva careful take out her strands, he hold raavi's hand and pat raavi cheek with care

"Good Morning Raavi"

Raavi is clueless about what had happened yesterday why he is behaving like this, she collect all her strength n manage to ask

"Tu yaha kya kr raha h, kb aaya or tu mere....mtlb tu kyu h yaha??"

"Gadhedi tere pas hu mtlb tujse hi milne aaya hounga na, or jo bhi hua na usm teri hi glti h na tu itne bhav khati or na mei yha aata" shiva said

"Bhav kon mei pura somnath janta h raavi bhav nahi khati smjha!!" Raavi said in anger and get up from bed

Shiva grab her arm and pinned her against the wall, there is no space left between them.

Raavi is getting affected by their proximity but didn't want to show it.

"Shiva chod muje, pagal ho gya h kya"

"Phele yeh bta bt kyu ni kr rahi thi or kyu aayi yha? Ab tuje lekr bhi ni ja skta maa ne bheja h na tuje ek bar mujse puch leti toh ghis nhi jati tu"

"Btaya tha na tuje tera call ni laga toh usm meri kya glti h, or vse tuje kyu itna farak pd raha h independence day h tera 1hafte tk enjoy kar!!"

"Raavi" mami scream 'uth gyi kya'

Masima aa rhi h shiva chod, he ungrabed her

"Tu ja yaha se" raavi said in fear

"Aey gadhedi mami se toh milne de"

"Chup reh tu ruk" raavi left the room.

Here shiva is observing her room. His eyes fall on the childhood photographs which is hung on the wall..he started remembering memories ❤

"Yeh diary!!yeh toh vhi h na jism yeh roz likhti h dekhta hu"

Nahi shiva yeh iski personal diary h dekhna nhi chahiye pan agr nahi dekha toh pta kese chlega yeh bare mei ky sochti h , dekh hi leta hu"

He hold the diary and just when he is about to open it, raavi grab it.

"Aey bandar kya kr rha h itne bhi manners nahi h kya ki dusro ki personal chez nhi dekhte!!! Tu ja yha se ab" raavi said in nervousness

Shiva adore her once, soti hui bht pyari lagti h he said with wink😉

"Iske muje compliment kiya sach mei" raavi by himself

Shiva left the room and reach the pandya niwas

"Aakhir kya likha hoga us diary me jo voh chipkali muje padne ni de rahi h"

Shiva- dhara scream

Kha tha tu puri raat ghr pr toh ni tha or ab aa raha h? she question him

"Voh bhabhi....mei bahar gya tha" he said with hesitation

"Hn hn sab jante h kaha gya tha" krish said in naughty tone

Tu fir bola- shiva dhara warned him

"Acha shiva shaam ko na kanta kaki ka function h tu bhi chlega thk h"

"Nahi bhabhi muje kahi nahi jana aap log chle jana"

"Haan bhabhi chdo isse hm toh mje krenge or vse bhi raavi bhabhi bhi toh aa rhi h na" krish said

Shiva eyes widened after hearing this

"Raavi bhi aayengi pr ab toh meine mana krdiya h kya kru???"

"Shiva muje kch bakwass nhi sunni teri tu chlega bs" dhara left after saying this

"Ji bhabhi" *inner now he is dancing thankyou bhabhi*

At function-

"Yeh gadhedi itna time kyu laga rahi h kha reh gyi"

Ky hua shiva kisiko dhund raha h??? Hn ra...he realise that krish is asking him

"Hn voh rajeev ko aaya nhi voh abhi tk" shiva added

"Acha acha" krish said in suspicious tone

"Tu jata h ya nahi"

"Hn ja rha hu na tu phele peeche toh dekh" krish said

He saw a pretty lavender lehenga complementing the skin tone very well💜

To add more charm jewelry and accessories are added with open hair and minimal makeup!!

Binding is shining as crystal, kajal is as deep as the sea and pink lips with smile...enough to kill anyone.

This whole scene is so aesthetic that he couldn't take off his eyes, his staring game is witness by all.

He only manage to speak one word"Raavi"

She come and stand in front of him

"Ghur kya raha h khayega kya"

"K..kya" coming back to senses

"Ghur kya raha h makeup khrb ho gya mera, oh no ab m kya kru shiva kese dekhu"

Shiva pulled her by waist, raavi shocked by his actions she smiles a little as now she is used to it somewhere is started liking all these.

"Dekhna hi h na tuje toh dekh"

"Kaha"

"Meri aankhon m dekh sb dikh jayega or pta bhi chl jayega" he said in seductive voice

He wanted to make her read all his feelings.

They shared a cute long eye lock❤

"Ab bas bhi kro bht ho gaya" krish said in teasing manner.

They came back to reality, raavi left in awkwardness.

Now its time for some dance 💃

Shiva hands slips over raavi bare waist, hand in hand they both started dancing.

No dialogue passed their is continous eyelock throughout the dance,

Shiva plays with raavi's hair which create butterflies in her stomach 🦋

Their sizzling chemistry increase the temperature of the venue 🔥❤

"Chlo ab gift ceremony shuru krte h" kanta kaki said

"Oh No!! Mera gift" said raavi

"Kya ho gya kyu chila rahi h"

"Shiva mei apna gift ghr pr hi bhul gayi ab ky kru"

"Gadhedi, ruk m jakr lekr aata hu tu yhi rukna or kisi ko kch mt btana thk h"

She nodded in reply!

Shiva get on the bike and soon reached the mami house.

"Yeh chipkali bhi na kch na kch gadbad toh karti rhti h akal ki dushman "

" kha rkha hoga gift ab" he started looking for gift in room

"Voh raha" he signs towards the table

"Chal bhai tuje hi lene aaya tha mei, teri malkin toh tuje bhul hi gyi thi" he laughed

Just as he about to turn again his eyes fall on diary

"Yeh diary!!chlo dekh hi leta hu"

Without any further delay he opened it.

He smiles by looking at small photographs and quotes written by her❤

He turned the page and shocked!!!

As if someone tie his nerves he couldn't breath and don't able to hold it..

The diary fall on the ground,

His eyes filled with tears and anger.

All his insecurities active again which he digged few days back!!

He punched the hard on the wall, he is completely disturbed, he again look at diary and left the room furiously!!

"RAAVI💘DEV

👿

SHIVA "






Hey lovelies❤

Hope you like this part tooo....


-S_Verma

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Posted: 4 years ago
#26

Amazing update👏

Loved Shivi's moment❤️

Shiva got angry after reading the diary😭

Waiting for next

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I'm falling more n more for this story. ❤️

Now that Shiva has seen her diary, I'm excited for the upcoming moves.

Waiting for the next chapter.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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PART 5


Yeh gadheda aaya kyu ni ab tak, so toh nahi gya!! Nahi esa toh ni hoga call krti hu"

Here shiva is riding the bike furiously, he is fluming in anger, tears are falling like rain droplets.

He couldn't see anything expect that who make his heart broke.

"VOH GADHEDI ABHI BHI DEV SE"

This thought stunned him again.

Raavi call him but he decline.

"Yeh bhootnath call kyu ni utha raha h" said confusingly

She again call he decline and this time he throw his phone away.

"Yeh iska phone kyu switch off ho gya kahi yeh kisi problem m toh nhi h na" said raavi

"Krish" she call him

"Ji bhabhi"

"Voh m na ghr ja rhi shiva ab tk aaya nhi, agr koi puche na toh bs boldena ghar gyi h thk h!!"

He nodded in reply

Shiva is sitting on the tree where he usually comes when he is upset!! But this time he is broke..💔

His memories with raavi flashes in front of eyes.

Its difficult for him to resist that the girl he loves, is not in love with him, she is still living with her past!!!

"Raavi, kyu kiya tune esa, tuje smj ni aa rha kya kuch, kal hi toh tuje apne dil ki btayi thi! Tere samne khuli kitaab bnkar khada hu kyu nahi padh pa rhi h tu muje"- shiva said pouring his heart out

Meanwhile raavi reach the home

"Shiva shiva kaha h, upr so gya kya?? Kha h shiva?" She come in room but found it empty

"Yeh kaha gaya , gift bhi yahi h"

Her eyes catch the diary which is fallen on the ground.

"Yeh diary neeche kese??" She come closer to it to hold it but stunned to see that page..

Yeh...page.....!!!

"Shiva ne yeh page dekha, bandar mana kara tha na mt padhna, kyu h tu ziddi shiva ab kaha dhundu tuje??"

Krish call raavi she pick up

"Bhabhi sb ghr ja rhe h apko bula rahe h"

"Krish sun tu jaldi yaha aa"

"Pr hua kya??"

"Tu aa mt btati hu jaldi"

Raavi -krish reach the venue,

"Tum dono kaha the or krish tu yeh raavi ka bag kyu lekar aaya h??"dhara said

"Voh dhara di, mei ghar vapis chl rahi hu apke sath" she said firmly

"Aey champak yeh kya bol rhi h abhi toh ek hi din hua h na fr kyu jana h tuje vha vpis" masi said angrily

"Masima please muje mt roko *muje shiva se milna h* muje sbki yad aa rhi h isliye ja rhi hu dhara di- goumbi chle ab" said raavi

Saaru che, they both smile

They reached home, raavi is waiting for shiva

Dhara arrive-

"Raavi shiva kaha h bht der ho gyi tuje btaya tha kaha gya h"

"Nahi di mtlb voh bahar gya h muje bola tha usne aap sojao m hu yaha" said raavi with forced smile.

After 1hours continously waiting for him she tired and fall asleep.

Shiva is feeling restless now, he don't know what to do now, he know truth now

"Should he go away from his family??"

"Should he break all ties with raavi??" No no he loves him

"Should he free raavi from this forced relationship??"

All this thought make him mad, he fall from tree, no pain is bigger than that he is feeling right now!!

He get on his keens, "Raavi" he screams and started crying louder!

He is feeling to low, it feels like his body has no soul, its only a dummy which is alive at present.

He stood up and went straight to wine shop n started drinking without any limit..

He drunk more than his capacity, he now barely can stood on his feets.

But now he is feeling too light feather, as if all his weight from head has been craved out.

He reached home at midnight knock the door,dhara came and open the door, shocked to see him like that..he is not in his senses, he is standing with the help of door.

"Shiva tune drink kri, pr kyu"

Shiva see dhara and tried to hide from her, "he silenty shift and run towards the room.

He see raavi sleeping, he come and sit beside her.

"Ra...raavi tu yaha kb aayi?? Chl acha h aa gyi ab m tuje kch bol raha hu sunle smjhi"

"Kya nahi sunna chahti....kyu??"

"Sahi kehte h log kuch toh farak dikhta hoga na??" He said emotionally looking at her face in a hope to get some reply.

He see raavi hand holding a pen, he take it off and see the diary.

He open it to check what she is writing but unfortunately that open which made him like this. He become furious again.

Raavi awake and see shiva, she sense something is fishy and soon come to know that he is drunken.

"Shiva esi bhi konsi aafat aa gyi jo tune drink kari voh bhi itni halat dekhi h apni??" She said furiously

Without saying a word he left the room and was about the step outside the gate, raavi grab him, he falls in her arms.

"Shiva andar chal kahi nahi jana tuje"

"Chod raavi jane de muje tu soja" try to free himself.

Raavi takes him in the room.

He fall on the ground raavi is in anger why he do this..

"Shiva kya h yeh sab tune kyu kri drink pagal ho gya h kya tu ruk abhi btati hu tuje"

Shiva see the diary on his side, raavi comes with jug and pour the water on his face.

He stood up and started to come in his senses little bit.

He hold the diary and show the page to her,

Raavi is shocked and in guilt to realise that she is responsible for shiva's condition.

"Shiva tuje yeh diary nahi padni chahiye thi tuje mana kra tha na meine" raavi said

"Kyu agr nahi padta toh tere raaz kese pta chlte muje"


This statement shocked Ravi!!!




Hey everyone!! I hope u all r doing well..show some love on this part too!!!

Next part soon❤

- S_Verma





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Posted: 4 years ago
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Now how will ravi clear his insecurities.loved it.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awsome update ❤


What will happen next 😒

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