Shivi FF: Distance Makes Us Stronger Part V Pg 16, Update 2/5 - Page 10

The first half was just ❤️. I don't know if we will ever get Shiva that would be this helpful. I love how you included the part about him looking after her comfort during her time of the month. There's different kind of intimacy to that and ITV would never show it.

The second half was hilarious. My stomach's aching from all the laughter of today's episode+ this. Raavi toh side shirt utarne par agayi! Don't blame her. Make pe chauka Marna issue Kahe! Poor Shiva looks so sh, but finally gave in.

Will Krish's entry reveal that he's real and not Dream Shiva or will he go hide and disappear until tomorrow? I just can't wait for Shiva's confession and Raavi's dream to finally coming true!

Omg im super excited for next part pliz update soon ❤❤❤❤

this was really good! loved the end where they both confess.. wondering if shiva will manage to escape or if he will be revealed!

Shiva saying "I was so moved I moved from the bed to here" really cracked me up 😆

You've written ever bit of it perfect❤️❤️. I could imagine every line while reading😝 Please continue soon, don't make us poor souls wait for long🥺

The Show and then you guys with your Imagination... pure bliss... this is like „Shiviland“ hahah

It was all so so so good.

Even though there were better moments but for some reason, what cracked me up was:

Shiva rolled his eyes, "Yes, I was so moved that I moved from the bed to here."

Raavi kya character hai yaaar♥️♥️♥️

Awww, Shiva is playing along ... genie... and want to confess in his „real“ avtar, hahah

Thank you so much and keep Writing, so talented you are :)

This was sooo goood...

Aaawww Shiva just played along...

I can’t wait Raavi..😂😂

Cant wait for the next chapter...

Raavi and Shiva❤️

one doesn't forget to praise herself and the other giving a sarcastic answer

This makes me want to see that before marriage har todne wala scene.

Aur Krish,vai sahi entry li hai.🤪

Now will Shiva hide from Krish ya Krish will play along on Shiva's signal

Loved it

Waiting for next

Killing meeeee ☺️ I’m going to faint from all the blushing that came over me while reading this 🙈

And his reaction when she asked him to take his shirt off 🤣🤣🤣 I don’t think anything else could get that reaction from him!

And the part about Raavi gossiping with her friends (the mosquitoes 😂), was so apt for her! 😂

pretty sure he’ll say something like this when we get to see him interacting with her friends

"I feel the same, too." He placed a gentle kiss on her forehead, and Raavi couldn't help but feel like she was over the moon.

AWWWWWWWW 😍

Cant wait for Raavi to realise it’s the real Shiva 😂 How better to get her to realise that introducing Krish in 🤣♥️

Write sooooooon, Aviiiii! ♥️

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

The first half was just ❤️. I don't know if we will ever get Shiva that would be this helpful. I love how you included the part about him looking after her comfort during her time of the month. There's different kind of intimacy to that and ITV would never show it.

The second half was hilarious. My stomach's aching from all the laughter of today's episode+ this. Raavi toh side shirt utarne par agayi! Don't blame her. Make pe chauka Marna issue Kahe! Poor Shiva looks so sh, but finally gave in.

Will Krish's entry reveal that he's real and not Dream Shiva or will he go hide and disappear until tomorrow? I just can't wait for Shiva's confession and Raavi's dream to finally coming true!

I really wish they did show such a thing on ITV. Periods are something many individuals go through, and since ITV is mostly targeted towards female/family audiences, it should be de-stigmatized. But I guess that's the point of fanfiction, and quite honestly, Shiva seems like a softie who would do such a thing for the person he loves.

I'm so glad you thought it was hilarious! I was writing up all of this last night and was hoping no one would cringe with the direction the story turned to. I'm a softie for ShiVi romance, so I would do anything to see them on the screen and be happy/bickering!

Shiva's confession, unfortunately, will be in the last chapter of this story. I'm trying to build up their scenes so the romantic confession becomes that much sweeter. It's also why I didn't have Shiva say "I love you" back to Raavi. I wanted to save that moment. But then again, writing romance is tough, so hopefully all of you will like it enough and not cringe/roll your eyes

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

this was really good! loved the end where they both confess.. wondering if shiva will manage to escape or if he will be revealed!

Shiva saying "I was so moved I moved from the bed to here" really cracked me up 😆

Not going to lie, I cracked up while writing this line, and I really hoped someone would appreciate my dry humor, so I am so glad you liked that dialogue