Shivi FF: Distance Makes Us Stronger Part V Pg 16, Update 2/5 - Page 8

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Raavi poured her heart to shivaa unknowingly. Whay will be shiva reply

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Posted: 4 years ago
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You got me, I really was not expecting for you to go in that direction. But now I'm also really excited to read Shiva's reaction!!!


Beautiful update!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: raindropsroses

Thank you so much for these! These are like major bites of Shivi to gorge on while we wait for their mini bites on TV 🙈

I was trying to write some FF myself and realised how difficult they are to write. Hats off!


YYYYEEEESSSSS!!!!! Have to echo @Foxii, please do write. Reading all this fanfiction on the forums has been such a treat ❤️! Every single last one of you here (I want to tag every member here, but I know it'll be impossible) is amazing!


To be honest, I was never planning on posting this like ever. The first part just sat on my desktop and eventually I was like, "Why not?"


In fact, I don't think any of you know just how different the original version of this story was. It was only supposed to be 2 parts (3 max). But after reading all the wonderful and lovely comments, I couldn't help but prolong it. I'm introducing other characters (Krish will appear next chapter, surprise! And I'm hoping to write in Rishita as well (determined to make you guys like her)).


Just know @raindropsroses, if you ever do publish a story here, I will send all the love and kudos your way ❤️!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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On another note, for those of you who periodically read this thread and read my comments, I do have an ask for all of you. Romance is definitely not my forte, and I'm determined to make Raavi and Shiva's wedding anniversary be the best it can be!


Feel free to shoot me suggestions on how I can make this anniversary day better through my inbox or in this thread itself and I will try my best to include it (and tag you) in the chapters coming up!


I want this story to be our story as much as possible as we wade through this family drama.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#75

Agree with everyone here. Please do write. We can't ever have enough if ShiVi. And like milkcakejamun said, I also promise to send love and well wishes to your story! :)


@milkcakejamiun, So happy that you changed your original decision and will make it longer! (Rishita Wala colgate smile!)😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
#76

Well written work @milkcakejamun. Precise flow and grammar. The premise is interesting as well. I have no problem with the slow burn passion.😉 Keeps it interesting.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#77

Thank you for all the love, you guys! 😍 I’m going to proof read today and I should have the story up by the evening at max ♥️


@milkcakejamiun @Mountains_Lakes @Foxii

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Yay! And congratulations on Groupbie promotion! Just in time for all of us to enjoy your story 😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
#79

@milkcakejamun, I got an idea for their wedding anniversary scene as I was seeing the episode. You may have already thought of it, but would love for them to rebew their vows/get remarried in temple for their second anniversary with just them two. Make this new beginning memorable for them and whenever this day comes around in future, it's this wedding that they think about vs the first one.


That's the most my creativity will flow. Definitely not a writer.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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🥺as always your update is beautiful!!

Raavi’s feelings all coming out all at once, can’t even imagine Shiva’s happiness at this time ahhh♥️🥰

So so beautifully written♥️

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