Shivi FF: Distance Makes Us Stronger Part V Pg 16, Update 2/5 - Page 11

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Foxii

The Show and then you guys with your Imagination... pure bliss... this is like „Shiviland“ hahah


It was all so so so good.

Even though there were better moments but for some reason, what cracked me up was:

Shiva rolled his eyes, "Yes, I was so moved that I moved from the bed to here."


Raavi kya character hai yaaar♥️♥️♥️


Awww, Shiva is playing along ... genie... and want to confess in his „real“ avtar, hahah


Thank you so much and keep Writing, so talented you are :)


Lol, that was my favorite line too! I'm so glad you appreciated my dry humor (since I bled a little bit of my own personality while writing this)

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Posted: 4 years ago

Love it!

It totally works for Shivas Character.


He would deliver these dialogues so well :)

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Posted: 4 years ago

This was such a beautiful update!! I finally got the chance to read it and it made me so happy. Wow, it truly felt like I was reading something that actually happened in the show.

The way Raavi tried to take his shirt off😆. And after today's picture, my imagination is running wild.

Oh krish, is he the reason she'll realize it's not Dream Shiva ?

Thank you so much for updating. I do enjoy everything you've put out !

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Posted: 4 years ago


A last mein kya tha? 😡

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: .Rangeeli.

Love it! <3 Read all chapters in one go:)

hey na..i too read it in one go....❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

When are we getting the next part♥️?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Foxii

When are we getting the next part♥️?


I can't say a definite date. I'm slowly chipping away at writing the chapter, but school has been giving me projects 🤢 that have essentially been taking up too much of my time. Hopefully, I should have something posted within 10 days since I can't write as much as I would've hoped to this weekend 😭

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun


I can't say a definite date. I'm slowly chipping away at writing the chapter, but school has been giving me projects 🤢 that have essentially been taking up too much of my time. Hopefully, I should have something posted within 10 days since I can't write as much as I would've hoped to this weekend 😭


Please don’t stress yourself, you‘ve given us so many updates... with OS in between ♥️


Thank you for that.


It will be worth the Wait I am sure :)

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful story , read all the parts in a go

Waiting for next

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Posted: 4 years ago

This was the first story I had read on shivi!!!


You literally won hearts by this story!!!


The dream sequence was perfect!!! Basically it was typical of raavi!! Loved the dreamy confession!!


The story had Humour along with romance!!


Wonderfully penned down!!!


Write more!!

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