Sunn Mere Dil (GEO) #6 - Wahaj Ali, Maya Ali, Usama Khan, Hira M - Page 7

Originally posted by: kuhelidebbarma

Really impressed with the episode...but tbh I dont understand the complaint of slow pace..because when I was watching Jaan E Jahan I saw more unnecessary scenes and less leads SS than this show..!!

If you want Tere Bin type of fast romance than this drama is not for you,SORRY

It is an emotional kind of a story so the storytelling has to be a bit SLOW..!!

Exactly neither Haseeb nor KRQ does TB/IM type shows

Originally posted by: kuhelidebbarma

Really impressed with the episode...but tbh I dont understand the complaint of slow pace..because when I was watching Jaan E Jahan I saw more unnecessary scenes and less leads SS than this show..!!

If you want Tere Bin type of fast romance than this drama is not for you,SORRY

It is an emotional kind of a story so the storytelling has to be a bit SLOW..!!

I think JEJ was more of a slow burn. Slow burn is fine where story unfolds gradually. In SMD, slow burn story toh hai (which is fine) but the main issue is the slow pace which is contrived and not organic and added by the director. When I say slow pace of SMD, I mean:

1. slo-mo scenes. Watch some of Sadaf and her fam scenes at 1.25x pe (like the one in this episode where her mother is lying on the takht and Sadaf is sitting next to her, and a call comes on her mobile). It looks like you are playing a scene at 1.0X. In contrast, if you watch some other scenes (like office ones) at 1.25x, you can tell it's being sped up.
2. voiceovers of lines we just heard. For example, in this episode, there's a 41-second scene of Amaar sitting in the car and it's a voice over of Humsha and Sadaf's dialogues that we heard a few minutes ago.
3. extra looong pauses. For example, after Humsha said the image line, there was a pause of 53 seconds when the camera just lingered on Humsha and then Amaar.
4. repetitive scenes. In particular, Humsha & Amaar kept talking about same thing over & over in this episode. Before too, we see again and again long-drawnout sequences that give same info we already know (the CID investigation of Sadaf, the doctor visit, etc.)

Slo-mo scenes, repetitive scenes and voice overs, and long pauses are what I mean by slow pace. JeJ mai yeh sab aisa nahi tha. You can have slow burn story jo ahista ahista khulti hai but a slowburn story can have normal pace without these tactics Haseeb is using in SMD to stretch the episode lengths.

A crisper pace and tighter edit (all of which is achievable in post) would have made this a much better watch.

Originally posted by: kuhelidebbarma

I didn't find it that SLOW may be because I found more unnecessary scenes in other dramas..but yeah the dragging can be avoided!! Emotional love stories thodi slow hoti hai so that when main track starts you feel the connect. Anyways let's see

Originally posted by: hypnotoad

I think JEJ was more of a slow burn. Slow burn is fine where story unfolds gradually. In SMD, slow burn story toh hai (which is fine) but the main issue is the slow pace which is contrived and not organic and added by the director. When I say slow pace of SMD, I mean:

1. slo-mo scenes. Watch some of Sadaf and her fam scenes at 1.25x pe (like the one in this episode where her mother is lying on the takht and Sadaf is sitting next to her, and a call comes on her mobile). It looks like you are playing a scene at 1.0X. In contrast, if you watch some other scenes (like office ones) at 1.25x, you can tell it's being sped up.
2. voiceovers of lines we just heard. For example, in this episode, there's a 41-second scene of Amaar sitting in the car and it's a voice over of Humsha and Sadaf's dialogues that we heard a few minutes ago.
3. extra looong pauses. For example, after Humsha said the image line, there was a pause of 53 seconds when the camera just lingered on Humsha and then Amaar.
4. repetitive scenes. In particular, Humsha & Amaar kept talking about same thing over & over in this episode. Before too, we see again and again long-drawnout sequences that give same info we already know (the CID investigation of Sadaf, the doctor visit, etc.)

Slo-mo scenes, repetitive scenes and voice overs, and long pauses are what I mean by slow pace. JeJ mai yeh sab aisa nahi tha. You can have slow burn story jo ahista ahista khulti hai but a slowburn story can have normal pace without these tactics Haseeb is using in SMD to stretch the episode lengths.

A crisper pace and tighter edit (all of which is achievable in post) would have made this a much better watch.

I got what u r saying..but I feel geo tv and producers are at fault here..geo tv shows are always like this..just imagine they dragged a thriller drama like khaie in between for 5-6 episodes which was supposed to be very crisp and tight..the channel and production are at fault here..they just want to increase the no of episodes

JEJ was also dragged according to some people because leads didn't have scenes in between for almost 10 episodes

Humsha is acting more desperate than Ammar. Even he told her not to do sifarish for him.

Both episode and teaser trending at 36 and 37 respectively

Originally posted by: Rashi23

Both episode and teaser trending at 36 and 37 respectively

Is it trending in pakistan? Its not trending in India..!!

Loved Bilal in today's episode. The way he unconditionally trusts Sadaf while Amaar & Humsha don't trust her.

Looking forward to Sadaf & Bilal's conversation in tomorrow's epi. It seems Bilal will take Zaviyar to the US.

Humsha and Amar's scenes are not working for me. Humsha, as a character, seems pretty irrelevant so far, and Amaar is plain boring. Also, Usama needs to work a bit more on his acting skills. He seems very dull

Pace of the show is definitely an issue

Originally posted by: 2RsFan

Exactly neither Haseeb nor KRQ does TB/IM type shows

kya dinnaa gye hai ab TB and IM type k shows criteria ho gye hai .

people will disagree but writing was this one is far better than them . still this is criticised and those are hailed . it has flaws no doubt .

Originally posted by: kuhelidebbarma

Is it trending in pakistan? Its not trending in India..!!

It's trending in india.