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Nadia

@naddiya26

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Briyanikidaig
Excellent 👍🏼
Keep it up

i want a detail comment

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Jiyagulabi_26

@Jiyagulabi_26

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: naddiya26
i want a detail comment

Kitna detail chahiye😆

Ok I loved the command u have on ur writing, indeed a tight grip👏

Loved the banter of asfi lol he's too cute when he's angry😆

So geeti & Dr.haroon will be Cupid here too😉

Yeh Dil maange more btw.

Mujhe romance chahiye😉

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Jiyagulabi_26

@Jiyagulabi_26

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: -JollyJabeen-JB
OMGGGFFFGF THIS WAS SO BRILLIANT. I want to comment on sooo many things but I don't know where to start!!!!😆

I love all the dialogues you added. So realistic and cute!!! Thank you for the English as well, hehe. "Kabse wait karaha tha. Dil toh charaha tha ki aap ko yaha chorke chala jao"😆 Haha poor dr Zubiya. Fgs Afsi.. he is so jokes😆😳 Total blush blush !!!! Absolute cutey.. it's so cute man. The way you described Zubiya lightly sobbing and then Afsi unable to take it. This guy, honestly❤️

"Subhanallah Pakistan kitna khoobsurat hai" and the "Yahan ke log bhi" !!!!! Do you seriously want me to faint or something??? SOOO MANY FEELS, SO BEAUTIFUL haha!!!!☺️ and dr Zubia turning her phone off. LOL LOL LOL i love this😆

AWWW GEITI is so cute man. I love how Afsi casually handed Zubiya the phone and took a selfie too.😆 The way Zubia started checking on him too, sooo friggin sweet. Love it man.. seriously. This is tooo cuuute.

Pleaae continue sooon🤗

Hehehe yahan k log bhe😆

Asfi is same in serial n here too😆

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Aatra..

@Aatra..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Hailaaa!! this is super cute, our dr.shab is super adorable 😆 he keeps teasing her

Dr.Zubi is clueless about so many things 😉 innocent, isn't she?

Did I mention how much I love Dr.Haroon and Geethi, they are like huge Asfiya shipper 😆

I can visualize every single word, this is so so beautiful 😳

Just keep writing it and of course give us some lovey dovey asfiya ☺️

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Nadia

@naddiya26

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Aatra..
Hailaaa!! this is super cute, our dr.shab is super adorable 😆 he keeps teasing her
Dr.Zubi is clueless about so many things 😉 innocent, isn't she?
Did I mention how much I love Dr.Haroon and Geethi, they are like huge Asfiya shipper 😆
I can visualize every single word, this is so so beautiful 😳
Just keep writing it and of course give us some lovey dovey asfiya ☺️

i am closer to the show, I made Asfia sick. In show it is other way around

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Jiyagulabi_26

@Jiyagulabi_26

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Plz update chap 3 .

Yeah zubiya is sick in serial whereas asfi is sick in os.

BTW in serial too the camp shown now.

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-JollyJabeen-JB

@-JollyJabeen-JB

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Briyanikidaig
Plz update chap 3 .
Yeah zubiya is sick in serial whereas asfi is sick in os.
BTW in serial too the camp shown now.

Kaun patta creatives may get an idea from Nadiyya??? Or Nadiyya might secretly know what is coming up on the show😉

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Jiyagulabi_26

@Jiyagulabi_26

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: -JollyJabeen-JB

Kaun patta creatives may get an idea from Nadiyya??? Or Nadiyya might secretly know what is coming up on the show😉

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_Tabs_

@Tabsfully

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Wow. loved it.

hopefully we get a scene like this 😆

thanks for the PM

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Nadia

@naddiya26

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Briyanikidaig
Plz update chap 3 .
Yeah zubiya is sick in serial whereas asfi is sick in os.
BTW in serial too the camp shown now.

ya same same hogaya