Crystal Pattaampoochi - oru mini thodar - Page 8

Another breath taking chapter filled with suspense.Thanks Giri.

when r u posting the next chap can't wait 😉

Thanks again everyone.

Chapter 8

Nivedha was sitting on the bed with Rachel, when Nikhil called.

'Enga irukke Nikhil?' There was desperation in her voice.

''Right now I am in a restaurant in Juinagar. Eppadi irukke Nivedha? College nalla padiya pogudha? Navi Mumbaila mazhai, veliye adhigam poga mudiyalai. Mmm unna parka innum 2 vaaram irukku' , he sighed.

She heard hindi conversations in the background.

'Ore sathama irukkenu ketten. College is fine. Sari nee parthukko, naan phoneai vekkaren, good night bye.'

'Poru, poru… en unnoda kural vidyasama irukku?'

She hesitated whether she should worry him. But when he kept on insisting, she briefed him about the parcels without mentioning the roses.

'College la seniors unna rag pannaranga pola irukku.'

'Irukkalaam', she said cautiously wondering how Rachel fitted in this.

'Nivedha, unga appa kitte vena naan pesi help kekkatta?' there was genuine concern in his voice.

'Naane parthukaren Nikhil', she said stiffly and disconnected.

Rachel tried calling the number again, but it remained dead.

She suddenly lit up, 'Nivedha, ennakku oru friend irukkaan, avan moolama indha number vecchu atleast SIM card yaaru vanginanu kandu pidikka try pannalaam.'

The sunrise brought another parcel with a mobile phone. Nivedha switched it on and dialed Rachel, who jumped up crying, 'adhe number'

Later Rachel's 'friend' confirmed that the SIM was registered under Nivedha's name.

'Ennadi ellam dead endla poi mudiyudhu?'

Nivedha laughed nervously, 'vilayattu jaroora pogudhu. Naane avan vazhiyileye poi enna nu parkiren.'

'Avana illai avala?' Rachel said mischievously.

'Endi pudusa gunda thooki podare?' Nivedha laughed.

'How will you make contact?'

With in a week's time, a local flower vendor became richer by Rs.250 for a silly college girl's fancy for white roses and Nivedha became the 'Roja akka' of the FY students. When 'loda loda vaai' Veena confirmed the nickname originated from the book stores, Nivedha wished she had a third eye.

Jeevarathinam opened the door to let in his house boy.

'Enna latea vandu irukke karuppa? Amma thittitu irukkaanga. Veetula cleaning mudinjapuram , car ai nalla kazhivi vidu.'

'Saringayya'

Yonus alias Karuppan went into the house.

'Parava illai, aalu surusuruppa irukkaan. Niraya velaiyum katthu vecchittu irukkaan. Pozhachukuvan', Jeevarathinam thought to himself.

Half an hour later, Yonus went to the market looking for hardwares to fix a leaking tap in VP's kitchen. He heard the siren of a police car and turned around casually to see Sendhilvelan seated in the front seat and an ugly smile spread across his face.

Chapter 9

Zee Studio aired Baby's Day Out for their 10 pm show on Saturday. Sendhil sat on the couch and had his arms around his wife who was leaning on him, shaking with laughter. Her enjoyment was infectious and it brought a smile to his face which continued to remain there until the end of the movie. As far as he could remember, he had not sat this long in front of the TV, let alone for a movie. He pressed the off button on the remote with his left hand. She stretched her legs on the couch and rested her head more comfortably on his lap, still shaking. Gradually her laughter subsided, but her silent tears continued to wet his pajamas even long afterwards. An unexpressed sadness filled the room and he sat there silently stroking her hair.

Yonus waited in the darkness looking at the two-storied house. He checked the equipments in his pockets. There was light coming from a room in the upper floor. Apparently the occupants were watching television. He eyed the sentry, who seemed young and vigilant. He waited patiently and saw the light go off upstairs. The main gate creaked open. The sentry took a stroll outside to the nearby tea shop. He silently let himself in via the compound wall and swiftly went to work.

The creaking of the rusted main-gate woke up Sendhil, 'Chey enna oru nuisance, gnyabagama kadhavukku ennai podanum. PC tea kudikka porana…' He closed his eyes and imagined the PC walking and started counting the steps………'onnu… rendu... moonu……………… idho kadai vandacchu…. periya boilerla thanni paal kodichittu irukku… thoppi table mela vekkaraan……. keezhe oru thuli kooda sindaama, moonu moonarai adi uyarathilerndu eppadi tea aatharan?..... PC kaila tea glass… urinju urinju oru cup tea ai 150 vaaiya kudikaraan………. kaali glass table mela vekkaraan..…. thoppi thalaila maati aachu…. ezhundu panta sari seidu…….veetukku thirumba nadakka aarambicchu… onnu rendu… moonu…….….' Sendhil was drifting in and out of his sleep when the gate creaked again.

Yonus hid himself under the car and waited until the sentry came back. After few minutes, when the sentry visited the bathroom at the back of the house, he slid from under the car and got up. The 'monkey spanner' fell on the concrete pavement. He stopped breathing and took a quick glance around the house, picked the tool and jumped over the wall stealthily and walked into the darkness.

It could have been minutes or hours, the AC never knew, but the sudden metallic sound woke him to full alertness. He started to get up, but sensed the burden on his lap. He gently lifted her head, stood up and laid her back on the couch. His legs were numb and he hobbled to his room window. The guard at the entrance was no where to be seen. He climbed down the stairs as fast as he could and opened the entrance door and hurried to the main gate. The road looked deserted. He called out for the sentry, who came running from the back side.

'Sir', he saluted.

'Enge poneenga? Yedho irumbu vizhunda sattham madiri irundadhu?'

Both of them went around the house together with a torch but did not find anything unusual. 'ennamo sariyillai……' He went back inside pressing his legs.

He woke up at 7 in the morning. Lemon tea was ready on the table. He could hear Valli's soft singing in the kitchen.

'Innikku naan than samayal seiya poren.'

'Romba thanks… I will go and give finishing touches to my four hours effort.' She replied to his questioning looks, 'question paper set pannittu irundhadha solren.'

He pushed her out of the kitchen.

'Sir',

'Vida maatangale', Sendhil walked outside to see his driver, Anand standing with a worried face.

'Sir, car oda brake system la yaaro kai vecchu irukkaanga.' His suspicions were turning right after all. ' evanellam ediri…. idhula evan senju iruppaan?'

His mobile rang and Valli threw it to him. He listened with no expression on his face.

'Ethanai vettu kaayam vizhundu irukku…. mm mm…. location correcta sollunga….. appuram forensic expert Kuttiyai vara solli sollunga. Naan oru arai mani nerathula varen.' He suddenly remembered something and ran outside, 'Anand…. romba long shot than… irundhalum car ai yaarum thoda vendam… kai regai edavadhu kidaikudhanu parkalaam.'

He made a mental note to ask Kutti to come to his house.

'Appurama amma engeyanum veliye poganumna kootitu po.'

'Saringa Sir'

He went back to his wife and gave her a bear hug from behind and nibbled her ear.

'mmmmm…… irunga naan guess pannaren…. veliye velai vandhacchu… pona eppo varuveenga nu theriyadhu….. samayal ambo sambo than…'

He whispered, 'how lucky I am…. Ethanai sharpa irukka en pondaati !'

She sighed, 'poi ready aagunga… naan quicka edhavadhu seiyaren.'

He had lather on his face when she suddenly entered the bathroom, took the razor and offered to shave. She went on her work expertly and when he closed his eyes feeling pleased, she shaved off one side of his pride-moustache, threw the razor down and ran out laughing.

Ten minutes later he came down ready to leave. She guffawed at his minus-moustache appearance and placed a plate of pattis on the dining table, 'hindi pada hero madiri irukeenga.' He shrugged and opened the sauce bottle and before she anticipated, emptied it on her four-hour effort.

Woh, great chapters yar. I liked the part where both gals were planning to find out the sim owner, n bang, the sim goes back to them and its registered under Nivedha's name 😲 😆 😆

Now, netra is geting curious and curious. Yaar Avan?? 😍 😍

vow romba nalla irundadhu giri 😃 i can very well connect myself into Senthil's wife character........too gud 👏 .....waiting 😆

Giri has deep insight into marriages and would make a great counsellor.
The web of mini plots continues to be weaved with awe and mystery.....GIRI the SPIDERWOMAN

wow giri this Senthil -valli chemistry is too good

suspense mela suspensa 😆

I love the story. Sorry da I always try 2 memorise myself to read dis fan fiction but, I tend to forget. I promise I will read. The post will be late as I aint good at reading tanglish LOL! 😆

giri thonginadhu porum...come back continue with your fiction!