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Posted: 17 years ago
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Aha! En thalai vedikka povuthu! Suspense thaangale!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#92
Suspense mellai suspense... aiyooo

Urrmmm netra has to wait
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Edited by netra_rama - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#93
ennayaa indha Rachel konjam confuse pandraale 😕 suspense thaanga mudiyalai giri....cum soon 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#94

Chapter 12

Freshers' day was scheduled for a Saturday evening, twelve days after FYs started college. This was actually delayed since the seniors began their classes one week late.

'Enna professor innikku jagajodhiya minnareenga?'

'Inikku collegela freshers day.'

'adhu pasangalukku thane, vaadhiyaarukkuma?'

'joke mm? ha ha ha hee hee hee ooh ooh ooh….. podhuma? Time aachu kilambunga.' Valli took her bag.

They got into the car. Sendhil started the vehicle and turned on the AC to full blast. She reduced it to minimum when he was looking the other side.

Within few minutes he turned it to full cold. Valli felt like sitting inside a freezer and started to reach out to the switch when he caught her hand and placed it on the manual gear selector. He cupped hers with his left and maneuvered the lever. She forgot the car AC and warmed up to the driver AC. He made no attempt to mask his victory smile. But the Air-conditioner knob was not fated to be in 'good health' during the rest of their journey, for the cell phone started ringing repeatedly and the driver became busy pressing the call and end buttons, much to the frustration of his co-passenger, which she directed towards the knob, followed by him and then her and again him and it went on….

They reached her college; she got down and walked around to his side.

'Evening 7 varai programme irukkum. Neenga vandhu kootitu poveenga thane?'

His cell phone rang again and with a wave he sped away. She stood there until the car disappeared from her sight wondering whether he heard what she just said. Two other pairs of eyes were watching them at the same time from different places. One belonged to Aravind and the other to Yonus.

The students were in no mood for classes, some lecturers were obliging but others chose to ignore all signs of denial and carried out their duty better than any other day. And the students continued to remain in their own world refusing to acknowledge the presence of the teachers.

Sendhil walked into the conference hall where many men and women holding equal or higher positions in the department had assembled for an important meeting to discuss the increased drug trafficking in the state and the associated brutal murders that were happening in large numbers.

The DIG began, 'munnellam masathula 2 kolai nu irundhadhu ippo varathula 10 kolai nu nadakudhu ellam bodhai marundu sambandapatta kolaigal. Ivanga eppadi kadatharanga, enga padhukki vaikaranga nu theriyalai. State muzhukka niraya idathulerndu operate panranga ndra alavula puriyudhu. Inge adhigama bathikka padaradhu college pasanga mattum than nu ninaikirome, illai inge school kuzhaindaigalukku kooda indha pazhakattha erpaduthi vittaraanga. Idha orediya thaduthu nirutha mudiyalainaalum, perumalavu kattupadutha ella muyarchiyum seiyanum. Idhukkaga inge irukkara Commissioners, Superintendant of Police ellarum avanga ellaikku utpatta thani padai amaichu udane velaiyai arambikkanum. Idhukku veli udavi ethanai thevai padumo ellathaiyum eduthukunga – private investigators, informers, social workers, general public etc. Adhai thavira colleges, schools inge ellam poi vizhupunarchi erpadutha social groupskku namma department othuzhaippu kudukanum….'

At the mention of college, Sendhil thought of Valli, carlerndu erangumpodhu enna sonna, appo purinja madiri irundhadhe? Cinema ponum sonnala illai mall ponum sonnala? Should call her and check up. But he never found the time.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Chapter 13

Sendhil entered office of Third Eye Private Investigations, 'Vaa Senthil, eppadi irukke? Valli eppadi irukka?'

'Nalla irukkome. Neenga eppadi irukeenga Vishwa? Amam ungaloda right handai parkanum parkanum nu 3 vaarama sollittu irukken, aala kannuleye kaata maatengareenga, naan avanai onnum muzhingidamaaten.' Sendhil winked, Vishweshwar chuckled.

'Appadi ellam onnum illai Senthil, avan sondha vishayama Prince Rajendra collegela irukkaan, onnai udane vandhu paarkka solren.'

'Prince Rajendra collegea? Valli anga than velai paakara.'

Vishweshwar smiled, 'Theriyum Senthil, avan sonnaan, iru ippave naan avanukku call podaren'

Aiyoda naan kooda Vallikku call pannanume Sendhil dialed her cell. It was switched off, she must be in class. Enna sonna? Oh edho programme irukkunu sonnale.. He was about to send a message, there was an incoming call. Then he forgot about messaging.

'Innikku DIG meeting irundhadhu Vishwa, konjam unga help thevai padum. Adhan nerula parthu sollittu polaamnu vandhen.'

'Nichayama.. unakku illadhadha, pazhasu edhaiyum naan marakalai', Vishweshwar's thoughts went back in time.

After twenty minutes, Sendhil shook hands with the Boss who was named Vishweshwar and left.

It was 4 in the afternoon. Nivedha began to feel restless. Classes onnume nadakalaiye, indha pasanga sattham thaanga mudiyalaida saami….ennakku mattum sakthi irundha modhalla indha Veena vai oomai aakiduven… Yaarukku venum freshers' day oldies day ellam? Atleast roomukku pona konja neram thoongalaam. The moment this thought came to her mind, she put her books inside her bag and left the college. But the school hour traffic was heavy and it took her nearly an hour and a half to reach her area. She was just two buildings away from the hostel, when she spotted Rachel in her pink Soujanya silk, jathimalli strands, getting into an auto. Nivedha called out, but Rachel did not hear her. Rachel didn't come back this early from office and the two friends had no secrets between them. Her curiosity overcame her severe headache and she stopped another auto and asked him to follow Rachel. Rachel's auto stopped in front of a new apartment building and Nivedha realized she had come here before, for the survey. The display on top of the lift showed 3 and Nivedha took the next elevator to floor 3 and sure enough she found Rachel's sandals in front of a door. The door was not properly shut and she could hear voices inside. Nivedha hesitated a little before opening the door to see them walking hand in hand to the sofa, the furniture which Nivedha had helped Rachel to choose. They turned around at the sound of the door opening- Nivedha and Rachel let out stunned cries at the same time; Rachel because she did not expect Nivedha and Nivedha because it was him, her blind rose. He stood there expressionless, looking at the two women.

'Nivedha…Nivedha… enna pleasant shock? This is Vaibhav, he works for the ……… Nivedha… Nivedha…aiye iruppaa… naan solradha……' , Nivedha ran out of the apartment crying.

After the call from his Boss, he had immediately gone to commissioner's office to meet Sendhil and the two had a pleasant talk. At the end, Sendhil had invited him home in the evening and in turn he offered to bring Valli from the college for which Sendhil thanked him profusely.

Nivedha looked ravishing in the peacock-lime saree. He couldn't decide if the saree made her look gorgeous or the fact she wore it made the saree look beautiful. Her conditioned hair was clipped at the top with a matching butterfly. She wore the necklace and the ear rings he had sent her. She had a fancy bracelet on her right and a watch on the left. She glided towards his car, a captivating smile on her face. He got down from his beige esteem and waited for her to come near him. He took her hand and helped her into the passenger side of the car. She got in gracefully. He closed the door and walked to the driver's side.

'Nivi, kittathatta moonu varushama un pinnadiye irundhirukken, adhan indha rendu vaarama kannamoochi aadi unnai alaiya vitten. En mela kovama? She shook her head.

Moonu varushama? Neenga yaarunne ennakku theriyadhe. Ungalai oru thadavai kooda parthadhe illaiye?

Aama, parthadhu illai, aana naan unnai oru naal kooda parkaama irundhadhu illai, theriyuma?

She widened her eyes in surprise.

He held out a beautiful emerald ring …. His cell phone rang. He looked at the passenger seat, it was empty.. oh dream sequencea? With a grin, he answered his cell.

Rachel was hysterical, 'Aravind… Aravind…. Nivedha enga pona theriyalai… hostel leyum illai… enakku bayama irukku…' she ended with a sob.

'enna solre Rachel? Inga innum functione mudiyalaiye.'

'Aiyo Aravind ava college vittu eppavo kilambitta…'

She must have left when he had gone to commissioner's office; 'iru naan udane varen.. enge irukke… enna nadandudhu vivarama sollu.'

As Rachel narrated, Aravind Krishnasaami, the right hand of Vishweshwar, drove his car like a mad person and completely forgot about Valli, who was now walking straight into the hands of Yonus Latheef, waiting in the Head of Department cabin with an ugly smile.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#96
Aachu ambuttu than 😃 ,

idhukku mela 'kazhuthai nerikara' emoticon IF la kandu pidichalum ennala oru vaarathukku onnume mudiyadhu. 😆

Thanks for the continued encouragement 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#97
haiyya i am first again,appadi kathai ippam konjam puriyuthu

but 1 week break is too much giri 😛

i know AC will come & save valli 😉
Edited by nallu - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#98
Enakkum innikku konjam karthala pozhudu pogalai 😆 😆 😆


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Giri, super selection par. You know wat, while i was reading ur stories, i did imagine Pritiv as Arvind and Prakash raj for Senthil 😉 Woh, thanks for the other pictures.... 😳

😲 2 chapters up already? Ur fast naa..... So the next 2 chapters will be up this evening right 😉😆..... 😍 Uuhhuu netra can see giri staring at her "inniki evele chapter kudete, netra veke innum venduma"....😡😆

Edited by netra_rama - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
vow wonderful episodes.....giri apt character selection yaar.....waiting 1 week is impossible.....worried abt valli....nice pair.....nothing bad shud happen 2 her.

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