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netra_rama thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Jas, i was cracking my brain last night figuring this sentence out, how did you do it?? PM me naa 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: netra_rama

Jas, i was cracking my brain last night figuring this sentence out, how did you do it?? PM me naa 😉

WRONG FORUM 😡 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Vimarsanam seidha anaivarukkum meendum en nanri😊

Chapter 7

Nivedha kept the roses in a transparent glass vase and lay on the bed clutching the crypto in her hand- may be she expected enlightenment in her dreams. Rachael looked at her.

'Enna paper adhu kaila? Love lettera? Ippavaachu nalla ponna mariniye. Kudu kudu naan parkaren.' She seized it from Nivedha and looked at it, 'puzzle a, mmm… interesting', she sat down with paper and pencil. Nivedha closed her eyes.

' yei, Nivedha….. Nivedha yezhundiruppa……', She opened her eyes with difficulty to see an exhilarated Rachael dancing, 'Naan kandu pidichitten… pidichitten.'

Nivedha looked at the table clock, 'rathiri 12.30 manikku enna dance idhu?'

'Naan puzzle ai solve panniten.' Nivedha became alert and took the paper from her.

'Vedha! Idha yaaru anupinanga?'

'Parcela peru illai. Anegama Nikhil than irukkum.'

'Good night sweety'

'Night Raech'

It drizzled lightly in the morning and the weather was lovely.

'Enna madam enna rose vecchikaporeenga, white or red?' Rachel winked.

'Nee thane solve panne, neeye vecchukko.'

Nivedha sat with a polite smile, listening patiently to a non-stop Veena.

'Ivalukku vaaiye valikaadho?' she wondered.

A boy named Arul from an Andiyur village school, came upto her shyly,

'Nivedha, neenga state board schoola thane padicheenga?'

'amam'

'neenga state fourth rank a?Naanum fourth. Indha varusham ore oru 4th rank than. Edho kozhappama irukke.'

'Naan school final mudichu moonu varusham mela aachu', Nivedha said in a small voice and sensed Veena gasping. Arul went back to his place happily. Nivedha instantly felt alienated from her classmates. The session started.

During the recess, they were informed to collect the practical journal books from the book stores. There was a heavy rush and the queue extended outside. It took Nivedha and Veena almost twenty minutes to reach the counter.

'Akka, rough record book kooda vanganum.'

'indha akka sokka ellam…..' she stopped when Aravind brought the record books they requested.

Aravind shocked her by making a receipt in the name of 'Akka'.

She burst out, 'enna kindala panreenga?'

'Illaiye. Adhane unga peru. Ithanai neram inga vandha unga class pasanga ellarum appadi than sollittu irundhanga', Aravind said innocently.

'Mama, avanga peru Nivedha', Veena volunteered unnecessarily.

'Avanga akka, naan mamava? Idhu innum mosam.'

Nivedha glared at him, snatched the books, threw the money on the table and stormed out.

'Enna thenavetta solran. kozhuppedutha rascal!'

Aravind came running behind her, 'Madam, oru nimisham nillunga. Neenga FYApp Science thane? Ennakku theriyum, irundhalum confirm pannikiren. Unga fianc indha cover ai kudukka sonnaru.'

Though Nivedha was taken aback, she took it from him and hurried back.

'Oh classla niraya vambu nadakka pogudhu', Veena rubbed her hands gleefully and ran behind her.

I know you wouldn't care to dare,

And not so wise to let Rachel wear

Nivedha's heart beat faster, 'Aiyo… Rachel pathi yaarukku inge theriyum? Idhu mirattal madiri irukke'

When Nivedha called Rachel, she was busy preparing a balance sheet. 'Raech… are you ok? Thalaila rose irundha modhalla kuppai thottila podu.'

Rachel – 'En thalai poo pathi solra rendavadhu aalu nee.'

'Appadina?'

'Konjam neram munnala ennakku 'poovai thooki podunu' oru message vandhadhu.'

'Adhe numberukku call potten, switch off aagi irukku, nee jakiradhaiya iru, enna seiyalaamnu evening discuss pannuvome.'

Nivedha went back to Aravind, ' indha coverai yaaru unga kitte kuduthanga?'

He looked at her in surprise, 'Fiance sonnene'

'Engitte kudukkama, en unga kitte kudukanum?'

'Nalla kelvi. Kaalaila stores pakkathula romba nerama oruthar ninnuttu irundharu. Visarichadula therinjukitta vishayam idhan- Unga mobile reach panna mudiyalaiyam, oru velaiya indha pakkam vandhadhala inge wait pannaraam. Aana dideernu vera avasara velai vandhiducchunu thavichittu ninnutu irundharu, paavama irukkenu naan help panren nu sonnen.'

'Can you describe him?'

His description never fitted with Nikhil or his vehicle. Nikhil did not own anything bigger than his Suzuki bike, let alone a beige esteem.

Edited by giriadimai - 17 years ago
jasunap thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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good going giri. i was wondering when the next chapter is coming!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Woh, suspense after suspense... 😊 So interesting... Rachel got sms about the flower too heh?? Now netra is breaking her head to figure out who it cud be 😡 😆 😆 Giri, aiyo aiyo, tonight Vinod is not gonna sleep. Im gonna make him read this and maybe he can guess 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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poor vinod...make him read it early. it is only 7 chapters...so he can get to bed on time too...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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super chapter giri 👏 👏

suspense mela suspense 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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super O super giri 👏 👏 aduthu enna 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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This kadambari is too much. How can you acturally draw a crystal butterfly.
Nice work Giri. Has all the masala for a movie script.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏

Giri excellent - just caught up with all the chapters -
your style of writing is good. Nivedha - a very nice name.
I am extremely curious to know as to how u are going
to bring this all together - great going Giri 😃

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