new FF~~~ Nenjukkul Peidhidum Maamazhai~~~Part 13 posted pg 17 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sathya87

Lovely update ..raji and karthik's parents bonding is very touchy...

.What is in that pen drive??/


Sathya...
even i don't know... haven't seen it yet...
will definitely include in the story...

as of now... since all of you were disturbed to read Karthik's absence...
i continue with their love journey without including the present situation...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the PM pa...
Karthi ippa illa nu ninaikumbodhu romba kashtama irukku pa...
Karthi amma appa, Vishnu Lakshmi ippadi yellarum raji mela affectionate irukuradhu nalla irukku...
Keep rocking...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 9

Karthik gets a burger and some noodles and sits beside Raji who was
sincerely eating from her lunch box without looking around. Karthik
smiles and starts eating. A few minutes later...
Raji: Karthik...
Karthik looks at her and asks "enna?"
Raji: Thank you...
Karthik: edhukku?
Raji: nethu neenga avvalo dhooram pesalai nnaa naan innaikku inga
vandhirukkave maatten...
Karthik: naan thaan nethikke sonnene...CA Final year students ah
thaan inga eduppaanga... nee thaan exceptional ... enakku therinju..
nee mattum thaaan first attempt la ye join panni iruppe nnu thonudhu...appadinnu ... adhaiye thaan Mr.Gupta sonnaaru... illaiyaa?
Raji: mmm... aanaa ippo innum tension adhigamaa irukku...
Karthik: edhukku?
Raji: recruit pannadhoda silent aah vittirundhaa OK... ippo ellaar munnadiyum announce pannittu... naalaikku inga nadathura weekly test la sariyaa perform pannalainnaa evvalo asingamaa irukkum???
Karthik: ippadi ellaamaa yosippe?
Raji: thappaa yosikkirenaa?
Karthik: appadi sollalai... edhaiyaavadhu yosichu kavalai pattukitte
irukkanumaa? free yaa irukka mudiyaadhaa unnaala?
Raji: naanaa? kavalai padarenaa?
Karthik: ippo nee pesinadhukku enna artham?
Raji: just thinking aloud...
Karthik: adhu sari...
Raji keeps quiet and continues to eat. Karthik finishes his lunch and
asks Raji...
Karthik: Raji... fresh juice edhuvum venumaa?
Raji: venaa...
Karthik: OK...
Karthik goes to the counter and gets his coffee. In the meantime Raji
finishes her lunch.

Raji is seriously lost in her thoughts... Karthik finishes his coffee and
calls her but she doesn't respond... He calls her again...
Karthik: Rajiii...
Raji: mmm...
Karthik: enna yosanai?
Raji: onnum illai... vaanga polaam...
Karthik: oru nimisham ... ukkaaru...
Raji: sollunga...
Karthik: enna tension ippo unakku?
Raji: tension laam onnum illai...
Karthik: intha kadhai ellaam venaa... straight aa point ku vaa...
ippadiye yosichikitte irundhaa... afternoon session gavanikka mudiyaadhu...enna yosikkire nnu sonna thaan ennaala edhuvum help panna mudiyumaa nnu parkalaam...
Raji: neenga help pannuveengalaa?
Karthik: enna venum?
Raji: illa... training vandhu Final standards la irukkum nu sonnaanga
illaiyaa... enakku doubt vandhaa solli thareengalaa?
Karthik: kandipaa...
Raji: Thank you...
Karthik: polaamaa?
Raji: OK...
Both of them leave cafetaria and come to the training room.


The afternoon session is conducted by someone else. The session lasts for four hours. The auditor gives them a clear picture and procedure of internal, external and statutory audit. After a 10 minute break, the session goes on for one more hour and then the auditor winds up for the evening... Everyone disburses... Karthik and Raji come out of the office building and walk towards the main road.
Karthik: enna yosanai?
Raji: Statutory audit la...
Karthik: stop...
Raji: ennaachu?
Karthik: antha moolaikku konjam rest kudu... paavam... ippo thaane 5
hours session mudinjudhu...
Raji: adhukku? appuram continuity miss aayidum...
Karthik: onnum aagaadhu...inge irundhu veettukku pogaravaraikkum
relaxed aa iru... reach aanadhum oru one hour vera yedhaavadhu
pannu... appuram oru note eduthu innaikku session la ennavellaam
important nu point wise aah note pannu... next enna doubts irukko
adhellaam note pannittu... close pannidu... naalaikku kaalale 8 o'clock
ku office vandhidu... session start panradhukku munnaadi discuss
pannalaam ... Ok...
Raji: sari... Ok... oruvelai...
Karthik: unnoda mobile number sollu...
Karthik takes his mobile and dials Raji's number. Her mobile rings and
he cuts the call.
Karthik: ennoda number save pannikko... unakku eppo enna doubt
vandhaalum call pannu...OK...
Raji:(smiles) OK...
Karthik: happy?
Raji: mmm...
Karthik: ippo free yaa vidu... relaxed aah veettukko po... OK... bye...
Raji: Thank you... bye...
Karthik takes an auto and goes home. Raji walks to the bus stop, boards a bus and reaches home in one and half hours. She plays with Krish for somtime, helps with his maths homework and when her
chitappa comes, she tells him what Mr.Gupta said about her. He feels
happy and asks her to utilise the fine opportunity she has got. Then she helps her chithi in preparing dinner and finishes her dinner.

Raji comes to her room, takes a notebook, starts recollecting the
training session and notes down pointwise. After two hours, she
completes the entire task as per Karthik's instructions. In between she gets struck and thinks of calling Karthik. But then she drops the idea thinking..."edho help panren nu sonnaru.. udane phone pannaa.
sariyaana torture nu nenachittaa... venaaa... kaalaile kettukkalaam..."
She then takes a look at what she wrote and then goes to bed.
Karthik on the way packs his dinner and comes home. He takes a
shower, finishes his dinner and sits to study. Around 10 p.m. he calls
his parents and talks to them. He then continues to study and then
before going to bed wonders whether Raji would have followed what he said or not. He thinks anyway he can find it in the morning and sleeps off.


Next day, Sharp at 8 a.m. Karthik enters the training room and finds
Raji waiting for him. He smiles and comes to her.
Raji: Good morning...
Karthik: Very Good morning... romba neram aachaa vandhu?
Raji: mm...hmm... just five minutes...
Karthik: OK...
Raji gives him the note she wrote the day before. Karthik reads it
completely and then they start discussing. He clears all her doubts and by that time others start coming in. Sharp at 9 a.m the session begins for day two... The person seemed to be an expert in tax planning and he explains the tough subject in a very simple, appealling and beautiful manner. Four hours later they have a lunch break.

Raji is having lunch from her lunch box and Karthik comes there with his lunch. Both of them discuss about the class and ...
Karthik: Raji... vera edhuvum discuss pannanumaa?
Raji: ippodhaikku ellaa doubt um clear ...
Karthik: sari... naan antha table la irukken... lunch mudinjadhum onnaa polaam...
Raji: en? ennaachu?
Karthik: onnum illai...
Raji: ennamo irukku... illennaa ivvalo neram kazhichu solreenga... naan edhaavadhu thappaa pesirundhaa sorry...
Karthik: cha... cha... appadi ellaam onnum illai...
Raji: nijamaaa?
Karthik: unmayaa thaan...
Karthik gets up with his lunch tray. Raji stops him.
Raji: ippo edhukku ezhundhu poreenga nnu enakku theriyanum...
illennaa naan pesumbodhu edhoo ungalai hurt panra maathiri
nadanthukitten nnu confirm pannikkaren...
Karthik: idhu unnai pathi illai...
Raji: appo sollunga...
Karthik: yosichu parthaa... enakke silly yaa thonudhu... venaa vidu...
naan pogalai...
He sits and continues his lunch.
Raji: adhellaam vida mudiyadhu... neenga solli thaan aaganum...
Karthik: vidu nnu sonnenaa?
Raji: ippo neenga unmaya sollali nnaa naan unga kitta pesa maatten...
Karthik: sari... OK... solluven... aanaa nee sirikka koodaadhu...
Raji: sirikka maatten... sollunga...
Karthik: illa..daily intha burger um pizza vum saaptu bore adikkudhu...
normal aah irundhaa edhuvum thoni irukkaadhu... nee pakkathuleye
ukkanthu veettu saappadu saaptittu irukkiyaa... thappu nnu sollalai...
enakku amma nyaabagam varudhu... nee vera oru courtesy ku kooda
taste panreengalaa nnu kooda kekka maattengare... adhaan
mathavangaloda poyi saaptaa intha difference theriyaadhu ille...adhaan...
Raji looks at him seriously...and says "Sorry..."
Karthik: hey... naan vilaiyaattukku sonnen... nee edhukku serious
aagare? adhukku thaan solla maatten nnu sonnen...
Raji: illai... Sorry... aanaa idhula niraiya vishayam irukku...
first... enakku eppavum yaar koodavum share panni pazhakkam illa...
saappadu mattum... school padikkumbodhu le irundhe ... pazhagiduchi...
second... naan correct aa enakku venum ngra alavukku thaan kondu
vanthen... share pannikittaa rendu perukkume pathaadhu...
third... amma samaichdhu nnaa paravaa illai... idhu naane samaichu
eduthuttu varradhu... enakku vera choice illa... eppadi irundhaalum
sapptu aaganum... ungalukku pidikkalai nna... edhoo nalla padikkira
ponnu nnu oru abipraayam irukku illai... ivvalavu mosamaa samaikkaraale kashtam nu nenachitteenga nnaa ...
appuram...
Karthik: stop...stop...stop... nee ivvalo explanation kuduppe nnu
therinjirundhaaa naan sathyamaa solli irukkave maatten... sorry...
Raji: romba aruthuttenaa? sorry...
Karthik: appadi illai... naan sonna oru vishayathukku... nee evvalo
yosikkare nnu partha aachariyamaa irukku...
Raji: marubadiyum sorry...
Karthik: no problem... maranthidu... polaamaa?
Raji: mmm... sari...

Both of them come to the training room. Next session of Tax Planning
and Assessment goes till evening. As usual Karthik and Raji decide to
work in the same way and come early in the morning to office.

In the night Raji works out the assignment given in the session and
writes down all her doubts... But then she remembers it has to be
submitted next day, she thinks of calling KArthik and looks at the time
and drops the idea. She tries to solve herself but couldn't. She thinks of asking her chitappa and goes to his room only to find him fast asleep.

Raji comes back to her room and after a lot of struggle to call or not, she finally decides and dials Karthik's number...



Part 10... coming soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Thanks for the PM sweety...
Unga storya padichu kitte polam pola irukku pa...
Super. super.. super...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sweety...chanceillapa.romba arumaiya iruku...👏

karthik's kind and helping attitude is really nice...and he indirectly asking for raji's food i think so...

its so sweet to see raji's cute behaviour and she is following k's instructions perfectly...

so.. slowly by slowly kr understanding each other...

and sure TAX PLANNING is a very tough subject...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shiningstar77



karthik's kind and helping attitude is really nice..



Yes Shiningstar..
he was so helpful... that he never waited for the other person to ask...
he himself would voluntarily offer help...
but the sad part is appadi thaana udhavi panna poyi thaan uyir pogum nilamai vandhuchi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweety16



Yes Shiningstar..
he was so helpful... that he never waited for the other person to ask...
he himself would voluntarily offer help...
but the sad part is appadi thaana udhavi panna poyi thaan uyir pogum nilamai vandhuchi...

Yenakku karthick a paakanum pola irukku pa...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: sweety16



Yes Shiningstar..
he was so helpful... that he never waited for the other person to ask...
he himself would voluntarily offer help...
but the sad part is appadi thaana udhavi panna poyi thaan uyir pogum nilamai vandhuchi...




oh.sweety so sadpa...enaku manasu romba valikuthupa...anyway go on with ur beautiful and emotional story...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
without having a thought that karthik is no more, the story is really awesome, roma realistic ekuga authireeningka. Hats off to you. I really liked the conversation between KR.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sweety, waiting for the next chapter, want to know what Karthik says to Raji over the phone now!!! Thanks for the update.

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