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@ramyvijay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

CHAPTER TWENTY SIX

Karthi-Vishnu at the bar.

Vishnu orders some drinks and asks Karthi what he wants.

Karthi : enakku onnum venaam da... naandhaan kudikka maatten nu unakku theriyum la ?

Vish : dei.. ennadaa.. nee kudikkanum nu sonnadhaala dhaana ippa inga vandhom.. ippa venaam ngra..

Karthi : illa machaan.. enakku Coke sollu..

Vish : sari.. ennavo po.. un pera solli naan kudichittu poren..

Karthi : enakku kaduppaa irukku daa.. en munnaadiye Raji avan kooda kelambi poraa..

Vish : avan official la nitchayam aanavan.. ippellaam engagement aana maru naalla irundhe.. velila poraanga...

Karthi : ennadaa nee ippadi pesura ? Jaya kooda dhaan engagement nadandhuchu.. ava ippadiyellaam pannaalaa ?

Vish : enna machaan.. nee... ippa edhukku Jaya va ulla kondu vara ? adhu vera.. idhu vera..

Karthi : illa machaan.. compare panna koodadhu dhaan..

Vish : machaan.. naan onnu sollattumaa ?

Karthi : enna ?

Vish : Jaya innum unna love pannittu dhaan irukkaa..

Karthi : adhu enakku theriyum..

Vish : adhilla daa... unakku theriyaadha sila pala vishayangal irukku.. adhu ennanaa..

Karthi : venaam da.. ellaam enakkum theriyum.. nee sathiyatha laam meera vendaam..

Vish : eppadi daaa ?

Karthi : eppadiyo... ippa adhuvaa mukkiyam..

Drinks are served. Vishnu takes the drinks and Karthi take Coke (drinks mixed with coke by Vishnu)

Vish : vera ennadaa mukkiyam.. ?

Karthi : Raji avanga appa paatha payyana kalyanam pannikkum bodhu... naan yen innum enna LOVE pannittu irukkura Jaya va kalyanam pannikka koodaadhu ?

Vish : sabaash da machi... kelambu daa... ippave poi Jaya kitta neeyum innamum avala LOVE panren nu sollidu..

Karthi : indha nerathulayaa ? rumba late night machi..

Vish : adhanaala enna daa... endha oru nalla vishayathayum thalli poda koodaadhu... appave mudichidanum...

Karthi : (hesitate for a while)

Vish : unna paathaa.. solra maadhiri theriyala... marubadiyum yosikkira maadhiri irukku...

Karthi : appadi ellaam onnum illa..

Vish : appa ippave prove pannu..

Karthi : sari kelambu daa.. polaam..

Karthi and Vishnu infront of the house where Jaya stays. Both in drunken state, Vishnu again pushes Karthi to confess.

Karthik calls out Jaya's name and when she opens the door, Vishnu escapes from there with the bike.

Jaya : Karthik... enna indha nerathula ?

Karthi : yen..? naan ippo varakoodaadha ?

She notices that he is not in a steady state.

Jaya : kudichirukkiyaa daa ?

Karthi : naan illa.. Vishnu dhaan kudichaan.. (turns back and he is not there)

Jaya : Vishnu vaa... inga yaarum illa..

Karthi : enakku dhairiyam irukkaanu kettuttu.. avan bayandhu oadittaanaa ?

sari adha vidu... naan unkitta onnu sollanum Jaya..

Jaya : enna Karthi..

Karthi : indha night suit la kooda nee azhagaa irukka..

[COLOR=MAGENTA]Jaya : enna daa.. oru maadhiriyaa pesura ?

Karthi : azhagaa irukka nu dhaane solren..

Jaya : idha solla dhaan nadu raathiri vandhiyaa ?

Karthi : Jaya... I Love You.. I Love You.. Jaya

Jaya : adhaan eppavo sollittiye..

Karthi : adhilla... ippavum naan unna Love panren.. Jaya..

Jaya is stunned for a second. She then sees that Karthi is gonna fall while he was leaning on the gate. She catches him. He hugs and kisses her. She did not expect this but takes him inside the house as he is not in steady state. Vishnu was seeing all these hiding behind a wall.

Next Day morning :

Karthi fast asleep on the bed and he wakes up as his phone rings.. He picks it up and Lakshmi on the phone.

Laksh : enga Karthik irukka... ?

Karthi : veetla dhaan..

Laksh : naanum adhe veetla dhaan irukken... nee inga illaye..

Karthi : (looks around) adhu vandhu Lakshmi... friend veetla..

Laksh : endha friend...

Karthi : vidunga Lakshmi.. naan vandhiduren...

Karthik looks around the room and finds a photo of his and Jaya on the table. He then comes out of the room and sees jaya sitting in the hall. She has changed her night suit and wearing a salwar.

The room where Karthik slept is behind where she is seated now. Karthik sees her from behind. Jaya is having mobile in her hand and Karthik's images are sliding in that. She is admiring him on the photos and lost in thoughts and did not see Karthik standing there. He calls her.

Karthi : Jaya..

Jaya : ezhundhiruchiteeya Karthi ?

Karthi : hmmm... ippadhaan..

Jaya : sari... iru... tea eduthittu varen.

Karthi : illa paravaa illa... naan kelamburen..

Jaya : oru 5 mins iru... kudichittu kelambu..

She brings him tea and both haves it.

Karthi couldn't recollect exactly what happened in the previous night.

Karthi : Sorry Jaya... nethu night vandhu unna disturb pannitten..

Jaya : eppala irundhu kudikka aarambicha Karthik ?

Karthi : naa drinks saappidala.. Coke dhaan kudichen.. enakku theriyaama yaaro mix pannirukkaanga nu nenakkiren..

Jaya : oh..

Karthi : apparam Jaya..

Jaya : enna sollu..

Karthi : nethu naan enna sonnen..?

Jaya : yen.. unakku theriyaadhaa ?

Karthi : enna solla vandhen nu theriyum.. aanaa.. ennavellaam sonnen nu nyabagam illa... thappaa edhaavadhu..

Jaya : appadi yellam illa Karthik.. sari naam idha pathi apparamaa pesalaam.. nee office ku kelambu... time aachu..

Karthi : nee varala ?

Jaya : illa naan innaikku leave..

Karthi : yen ?

Jaya : konjam vela irukku...

Karthi : enna nu enkitta solla maattiyaa ?

Jaya : appadi illa... actually.. gazzet la en name thirumbavum change panna register pannirundhom..

Karthi : haan... theriyum.. balaji sonnaan...

Jaya : anga poi final document vaanga vendiyadhu irukku... apparam vera Paying Guest House search pannanum...

Karthi : yen ?

Jaya : ivlo naal Divya kooda irundhen.. ippo avalukku marriage aayiduchu..

Karthi : appo 3 naal ah thaniyaa va irukka ?

Jaya : 2 naal appa irundhaaru... nethu dhaan balaji kooda kelambunaaru.. thaniyaa irukkanum nu nenachen... nee dhaan vandhuttiye..

innaikku oru ponnu room share panna varen nu sonnaa.. ilanaa.. vera engayaavadhu thedanum...

Karthi : naanum varattumaa ?

Jaya : illa Karthi.. ladies hostels la unna viduvaanga la theriyala..

Karthi : sari ok.. appo naan kelamburen..

Jaya : sari daa.. iru... Vishnu bike eduthittu poittaan... nee ippo eppadi pova ?

Karthi : edhaavadhu Auto pudichu poiduven..

Jaya : naan pora vazhila drop panren daa..

Karthi : unakku late aagala naa OK..

Karthik sits at the back seat of her scooty and she drives... Both of them remembers their first drive during college days.

************* to be continued ******************

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Ramya

@ramyvijay

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#182

@ Joe and Ani... inga Susan already US poittaa pa... (just to remind u 😊)

Edited by ramyvijay - 11 years ago

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sweety

@sweety16

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

appo Karthik Raji kku pottiyaa thaan innoru thunai yai thedarane thavira unmayaana Love illaiya...

jaya ... paavam...

Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago

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joe_arhi

@joe_arhi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: ramyvijay
@ Joe and Ani... inga Susan already US poittaa pa... (just to remind u 😊)

Sorry Ramya 😳 Susan US offer accept panadhu theriyum but ponadha gavanikala...😳😳

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joe_arhi

@joe_arhi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Ramya update is good... Karthik proposed to Jaya 😃 but adhoda result ennanu enaku theliva purila think that is the next chapter... Did i get it rite??? Jaya droping Karthik ..

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Ramya

@ramyvijay

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#186

@ Joe... edhukku maa sorry ellaam?

its rejected my friend 🤗

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sathyakrs

@sathyakrs

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

So karthik still loves jaya ..adha confirm um panniyachu...but in drunken state...idhu varaikum namma serial type laye poitu iruku...what next...???inga jaya is not like susan...so what will happen here...waiting to know... .

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Meenu

@bmeenuu111

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Hi ramya na intha IF ku new

just ipo dhan unga ff complete a read panen nice story

but karthi nejama raji ah love panrana ila jaya va love panrana nu theriyala

romba confusion ah iruku

update soon eagerly waiting

and me to your buddy list and PM me ionce updated plz plz

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Ramya

@ramyvijay

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#189

CHAPTER TWENTY SEVEN

Next day :

Karthik comes to office and searches for Vishnu who hides himself from Karthik and tries to escape from him.

Vish : machaan... enna onnum pannidaadha daa..

Karthi : (morachifies) enakku varra kovathukku...

Vish : ennadaa.. panna pora ?

Karthik goes near Vishnu and hugs him..

Vish : ennadaa nee... enna adikka varra nu paathaa..? katti pidikkira...

Karthi : mudhalla nee Coke la sarakku mix pannadhukku kovamaa dhaan irundhen.. aana.. adha kudichadhaala dhaan... en manasula irundhadha Jaya kitta solla mudinjadhu.. thanks machi..

Vish : (mind voice) happpaa... nalla vela thappichen..

Karthi : ennadaa.. yosikkira ?

Vish : nethu semma scene... super ah irukki anaichu umma koduthutta..

Karthi : ennadaa.. kadha vidura ?

Vish : dei.. needhaan.. nalla mabbula irundhiye... unakku onnume nyabagathula illayaa ?

Karthi : neeyum dhaan kudichirundha... chummaa reel vidaadha... appadi ellaam onnum nadakkala..

Vish : unakku doubt ah irundhaa.. Jaya kitta ye kettu paaru...

Karthi : (mind voice) kettadhukku.. ava nethu edhuvum thappa nadakkala nu sonnaa..? yen appadi sonnaa ? naan guilty ya feel pannuvennaa ?

Vish : ennadaa yosanai ? apparam nethu vera enna nadandhadhu ? ellaam over ah ?

Karthi : dei.. asingamaa pesaadha..

Vish : ippa naan enna ketten.. rendu perum manasu vittu pesi.. ellaa problem mum solve aayiduchaa nu ketten... idhu thappaa daa ?

Karthi : sari daa.. kovichukkaadha..

Vish : naan kettadhukku badhil solludaa..

Karthi : illa daa.. indha nerathula pesuradhu sari illa... apparamaa pesikkalaam nu sollittaa daa..

Vish : kavala padaadha machi... ellaam nalladhaa nadakkum..

Karthi and Vishnu at their seat :

Raji comes in sometime and sits silently. Karthik did not bother her and pretends to work seriously.

Raji : Karthik..

Karthi : (silent)

Raji : Kaaarthikkk..

Karthi : sollu.. kekkudhu..

Raji : naan nethu dinner kku pogala..

Karthi : (turns immediately towards her)

Raji : aamaa Karthik.. thala vali nu sollittu veettukku poitten..

Karthi : (mind voice) sorry Raji.. naan unna thappaa nenachitten.. andha kovathula dhaan naan modhalla.. jaya veettukku ponen... avakitta en kaadhala sollitten... aanaa adhukkaaga ippa naan pinvaanga matten.. ennakku purinjiduchu.. Jaya illaama vaazha mudiyaadhu nu..

Sorry Raji... Jaya meal kovam irundhaalum.. ava en manasula irundhuttu dhaan irukkaa pola.. adhu theriyaama.. avala pirinju irukkum bodhu.. nee aarudhalaa vandha... unna thorathi thorathi kaadhal solla vaikka try pannen.. aanaa.. unakkum therinjirukku pola.. adhaan commit pannaama irundha pola..

Un appa viruppapadiye nee nadandhukko... adhaan sari pattu varum..

Vish : dei.. karthik... ennadaa thoongittiyaa ? evlo neram Raji unna koopttukittu irukkaanga..

Karthi : (comes to reality) turns to Vishnu..

Vish : sari machi.. nee pesittu iru... naan vandhiduren.. (he leaves)

Raji : karthik..

Karthi : nee po illa pogaadha.. adha yen enkitta solra.. naan edhuvum kekkalaye..

Raji : illa karthik... adhu vandhu...

Karthi : inga paaru Raji.. nee nenakkira maadhiri naan onnum nallavan illa.. naanum selfish dhaan..

Ellaathaiyum enkitta sollittu irukka thevai illa... (he leaves from there)

Raji : (mind voice) enna aachu ivanukku... edho maadhiri pesuraan.. nallavan illa nu solraan..?

Lakshmi and Raji at canteen having coffee :

Laksh : hey.. Raji.. enna dull ah irukka...

Raji : adhu vandhu... Karthik.. olungaa pesa maattenguraan..

Laksh : nee pannadhu enakke sariyaa padala.. avan appadi irukkuradhu onnum thappaa theriyala.. avan evlo hurt aagiruppaan..

Raji : adhilla Lakshmi... idhu vera vishayam..

Laksh : vera vishayamaa ?

Raji : aamaa.. naan nethu dinner kku pogala.. adha avankitta sonnen... adhukku avan.. naanum nallavan illa... selfish dhaan.. appadi ippadi nu edhedho pesuraan..

Laksh : ennadi solra ?

Raji : aamaa Lakshmi.. ennane theriyala ?

Laksh : ippa enna..? adhu ennanu theriyanum.. avlodhaan ? anga paaru.. Vishnu varraan.. konja neram pechu koduthaa... olara poraan..

Vish : hai Raji.. Hai Lakshmi.. anne enakkum oru coffee..

Laksh : vaa Vishnu.. enna indha pakkam..

Vish : yen..? naan vara koodaadhaa ?

Laksh : illa un friend illaama vara maattiye..? adhaan ketten..

Vish : neengalum dhaan en friend..

Laksh : vidaadha.. sari.. karthik yen ippadi panraan..

Vish : (mind voice) olara koodaadhu.. careful ah irukkanum..

Vish : edha pathi pesureenga.. ?

Laksh : nethu nadandhadhu..

Vish : nethaa.. yaar sonnaa ?

Laksh : karthik dhaan..

Vish : (mind voice) adappaavi.. avane sollittaanaa ?

Somehow Lakshmi pottu vaangified from Vishnu spilled the truth that Karthik went to Jaya's house in drunken state and proposed.. On hearing this Raji is broken and could not take this matter.

Next Day :

Karthik, Raji and Vishnu at their seats..

Vish : yen.. ellaarum silent ah irukkeenga ?

No one replies...

Vish : sari OK.. pesaama ponga enakkenna... (sings) ninaippadhellaam nadandhuvittaal..

Jaya comes there and stands in from of Karthi's desk. She says Hi' to all. Vishnu kalachifies her.

Vish : enna Jaya ? orey sandhosham maa irukka pola ? anything special ?

Jaya : unakkuuu.. onnumm mudiyala nu nenakkiren..

Vish : yen Jaya yen... vendaam.. please.. dhayavu senju.. edhaavadhu solli ivankitta kothu vittudaadha..

Karthi : sollu Jaya.. enna pannaan ivan..

Jaya : paavam avan vittudu Karthik.. chumma dhaan naanum kalaaichen..

Vish : romba nandri maa.. sari.. thaangal vandha vishayathai koorum..

Karthi : konjam moodittu irukkiyaa ? naanga paathukkurom..

Jaya : Karthik... innaikku evening velila polaam.. pesalaam nu sonnen la.. unakku OK dhaane.. vera edhuvum program illaye ?

Raji turns and looks at them.

Karthi : vera edhuvum illa.. appadiye irundhaalum.. adha cancel pannidalaam..I'm always ready for u...

Vish : dei.. podhum daa. adangu..

Jaya phone rings... aariro aaraariroo.. idhu thandhai yin thaalaattu..'

Vish : enna Jaya.. adhukkulla ringtone.. maathittiyaa..? nethu vera vachirundhaa ?

Jaya : maathalaam illa... ovvorutharukkum ovvoru song..

She cuts the call..

Karthi : yen cut panra.. ? eduthu pesa vndiyadhu dhaane ?

Vish : dei.. idhu theriyalayaa..? appa kitta irundhu dhaane phone Jaya.. correct ah ?

Jaya : aamaa.. periya kandupidippu... naan avarkitta apparamaa pesikkiren..

Karthik : (thinks) what ringtone she would have kept for him.. and dials her number.

Enadhuyire enadhuyire.. enakkenave nee kidaithaai'

Jaya sees her mobile.. Karthik face flashes... She blushes knowing his intention. He cuts the call and in few seconds dials again.. Both look at each other. They forgot that Raji and Vishnu are there..

Vish : hello... enna nadakkudhu inga... enakku purindiduchu... idhu yaaroda call nu... nadathunga nadathunga...

Raji could not withstand this. She gets up and leave.

***************** to be continued ***************

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anithu

@amrithatec

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Thanks for the wonderful update ramya..

Yen ungalukku karthik mela eppidi oru kolaveri...Pavam raji..How dare karthik will tell in his mindvoice like this...That too switching love to jaya now...Edho paathu rajikku help pannugaaa paaa