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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
ratna akka nice update...
next part ASAP...!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Thanks for clearing that too. Im so relieved now along with Raji. Update was short yet had beautiful moments. I liked the scene where Karthi asks Raji "epudi iruka" and the following reaction from Raji 😭. It was touchy. Plus loved the scene at the end once the confusion has ended the feeling which Raji had it was real.. Eagerly waiting for the next episode. What happened to Raji why is she alone with her mother what happened to her father?. Lots of questions just waiting for the episodes to clear all those... Update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
very nice part ratna...👏

so raji epovum pola ellathayum thappu thappa thaan purijukitala...
going interestingly...
apo enna thaan nadandhadhu...????seekram sollunga pa...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Wow. Mind blowing. I must say that you are very talented person. Keep up the good job. Cant wait for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Ratna ratna, me waiting for next part (lol)!! Thanks for the update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 7

Flashback ... :-

Raji : ama laksh, enga appa ennaku vera mapilai nitchayam pannitar...
Laksh : Adhu eppudi mudiyum Raji? Konja theliva sollu .. aluvama sollu di

Raji tells Laksh that her father was again attack with pain. That too at the farm where no one was around. This guy was driving by and he quickly offered medical help and took father to the nearest hospital. After 2 days of treatment his doing well. During that 2 days father was so impressed with the guy who saved him who also is a doctor. For saving his life father has given her ... that doctor seem to like Raji upon seeing her picture and he agreed too. Laks shocked. Raji continues to sob. Both Karthik & Vishnu comes there. Karthik looks at Raji.

Karthik : Enna achu?
Laksh : adhu vandhu .. adhu vandhu. (then whispers to Raji) Haiyoo Raji nee mudhalae alavaradhu nippathu
Karthik : Enna??
Laksh : adhu onnu illa Karthik, Morning unna kovila meet pannura nu sonnalae.. late acha. Adhuku nee tittuvae nu ava ...

Karthik smiles .. Goes to Raji and looks at her eyes. Laksh signals Vishnu to walk away from there. Both goes back inside. Karthik goes to her and holds her hand.

Karthik : hey.. paravailla.. adhan ippo nee vandhuthei. Sollu.. ippo sollu Raji. Nammaku innimelum vera idham theva illa. Ennalae innimelum wait panna mudiyadhu. Solluda pls ..

Raji starts crying .. Karthik gets confused.

Karthik : Raji ..(stern voice) enna achu? Sollu enna achu.
Raji : (stammers in between her cries...) appa appa ennaku .. appa. ennaku. Appa ennaku vera mapilai nitchayam pannitar Karthik ...

Raji cries and leans towards Karthik but he pushes her away gently. "Karthik..." Raji looks up at him but he moves a step back and let go her hand. He looks at her for a long time. "Enna mannichidu Karthik. Appa vae miri ennalae edhavum panna mudiyadhu. Ennaku appa taan mukkiyam nu unnake solliruken .. Karthik naa..." she stops when Karthik puts his hand as sign for her to stop. "Idhu tanna Raji nee ennaku anba kudukara birthday gift? umm sandhosama iru Raji.." Karthik says and leaves from there. Raji continues to cry.

Both Karthik and Laksh talking. They are confused and Karthik tells Laksh there is no use. Nothing can be done. Laksh says she will try to talk to Raji about this but Karthik says there is no use for this. If Raji really loves him, she would not have taken leave and go back for her engagement. Means she is willing to. Laksh tries to convince him its only engagement but Karthik says every thing is over. Vishnu comes and ask him not to talk like loosu, Raji only got engaged and nothing more. He makes a plan.

After a week Raji comes back to work. She thought her friends will be angry with her and will not talk to her instead they ask how she was and ask her about the engagement. Even Karthik seem to be his usual. Raji was curious but did not say anything. Vishnu was not around. Second day and Vishnu was not around so Raji ask Laksh what happen to Vishnu. Laksh refuses to say anything .. but after some time she shows a wedding card to Raji. Raji ask who's card as she opens and shock to see both Karthik and Laksh name on it. Laksh says sorry Raji nu and goes off to her room where Karthik and Vishnu are waiting. Vishnu is convince his plan will work out. Raji will come and confess her love to Karthik and things will be all back to normal.

Raji thinks a while and calls HR asking if she can come and see him now. She goes to see him .. after 20 minutes comes back and leaves the office without telling anyone.

Trio comes back from lunch and gets to know from Susan that Raji has resign her work. All shock. Karthik quickly calls Raji mobile but its switch off. Laksh tries and also send sms to her mobile telling her it was a joke and for her to call back. Laksh bangs Vishnu's head "neeyum unnodhu plan umm..." Karthik is tensed.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
sema sema ratna...Eppidi eppidiyellam😆😆
Aana one small alternation in this..Raji ellam avana vittu pogamaata...in reality...avana savdichittu dhaan maruvela😆😆...Kidding..Fantastic friend
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 8

Back to Present : -

Laksh tells Raji how hard it was for them to find her. She had switch off her mobile and never used the number at all. They tried to get her address from HR but they were told that you have told them never to reveal it to anyone. It was so hard for them. Karthik was like a mad guy and Vishnu was so guilty for it was his idea. Laksh scolds Raji for not even waited to tell them and leave. Or she could have switch on her mobile. Raji is silent .. Laksh continues saying after few days Karthik and Vishnu went to Kovilpatti and was told that she got married. Pavam Karthik, he was like a mad guy. It took him 2 years to get out from what he was and back to his normal life. He refused marriage when ever his parents asked. He just said the heart always belongs to Raji.

Raji looks up with so much love at Karthik. Laksh says only 2 months back they came to know Raji is not married and the latest they heard she is here. Vishnu was so disappointed he could not come as he wanted to personally see you and say sorry .. but now his in big position and had to go to outstation for some work issue. Even last week he got back and about to join us when Kumban gave him another project and he is to meet some client here in Banglore. He has not arrived yet ... Raji smiles and ask if Kumban is still there and Laksh says yes.

Karthik only looks at Raji. Laks gets a call and moves away. Karthik looks at her .. for long time. Raji thinks a while... finally takes a deep breath and says "i love you karthik..." Karthik face glows. His eyes starts to shini. Raji blush but continues to look into his eyes. She takes his hand and puts on both side of her face.. "im sorry Karthik... but manasara solluren, i love you Karthik.." Karthik nods his head.. "love you too Raji" he whispers to them.

"Public Public ..." Vishnu shouts beside them. Both gets shock. Laksh smiles and Karthik gets up and hugs him. "eppo macha vandhe .." he ask. "Deii unnmaiya sollu macha.. edhuku eppo vandheiya edhuku vandheiya?? Unnaku kadapu tannae nee raji vae appadiyae hollywood range ku kitta poitu kiss pannarakullara naan vandhuthen..." everyone laughs. Vishnu looks at Raji and says sorry. Laksh says every thing is fine. Finally they found Raji and gave her back to Karthik. Now is only happy ending says Vishnu. Raji suddenly looks worried. Karthik ask enna appa va.. Raji nods. Karthik ask Raji if she believes him .. she nods. Does she has enough trust on him that he will be with her no matter what happens?
Raji says yes.
"appo innikae register marriage pannikalam..." says Karthik. "idhu nalla irukae.." Vishnu says. Raji is shock and looks at all of them .. Laksh gently says "sollu Raji.. enna pesamalae irukae..?" Raji just stands silent.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
wow..ratna...wonderful.👏
present office situation ku link panni you moved the story...
at last raji said ILU...but reg marriage ku othukuvaala...waiting to know that...
really enjoyed reading it ratna...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Fantastic ratna..This is preety gr8 update...Finally evalavu struggle for this three words...😳😳

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