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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

very interesting rathna,

enna nadandhirukkumonnu think panni nallah kozhamba vachiteenga,

but karthik raji separationnuku andha promise matter matumthaan reason aa?

i suspect there would be something more serious issue.

i think VL also some misunderstanding so they also separated,

i think karthik is being supportive to laksmi,i don't think they were married

but my biggest doubt is whose child is that baby?

thriller novel maathiri irukku👏

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hopper_ocean

@hopper_ocean

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

I like the guesses here about the baby and Karthik Laksh relationship 😉 Next chapter later bit. Crazy day at work today ...

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Daffodilee

@Daffodilee

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

superb update ratna
kid soundarya 's baby oh ?? .
waiting for next part

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Jayanthi

@hemanthkrishna

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Super update with current situation of office,. 😊
I feels karthik's pain more than raji's pain. Oru vela andha baby adopted ah?
I don't think karthik married lakshmi nu.
Apadi lakshmi ya kalyanam panni iruntha avanga rajiya thedi eduku varanum?
Waiting for next part akka.

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hopper_ocean

@hopper_ocean

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

CHAPTER 4

Soundarya comes in happily and ask enga chella kutty.. her baby jumps in joy upon seeing her mother. Soundarya cuddle and pamper her daughter a while and gets shock to see Karthik coming out from shower. "nengaluma inga.." Laksh looks at her and says "hello ennaku kalyanam achu.." Soundarya keeps her mouth shut though she is tempted to say something. After breakfast Soundarya thanks laksh for taking care of her girl while she was away to visit her son in boarding school in Ooty She tells Laksh her husband will be down shortly to pick her up and leaves after saying by to both of them.

Karthik looks at Laksh and ask if she is ready. She says yes. Karthik ask her when Vishnu will be coming here. Laksh controls her tears hard and says he might have arrived. But he has some presentation to be settle before he can meet them. Karthik nods and they leave. Laksh says she will drive as she knows the road her better. Karthik sits beside and goes back to flashback.

Flashback : -

Raji was not easy to be convinced. Despite of many arguments and convincing from their friends she refuse to decide properly. Karthik many times threaten to leave her but truth is he cannot. He fancied her and only her. There was no doubt about it. Not only Raji was calm and smart and achingly beautiful, she apparently had old fashion values and that made him completely madly fall in love with her. Things was going on silent between them both when one fine day Laksh mother comes there and directly talks to Karthik telling how much she likes him and would love to have him as mapillae. Karthik is shock and Vishnu is in double shock same as for Raji. Karthik says sorry to her for giving her wrong vibes. He is so in love with Raji and he cannot think of any other girl besides her. Laksh mother is shock and says sorry to Karthik by calling him mapillai. Karthik is confused. Laksh mother smiles and says Raji is also like my daughter so his still mapillai for her 😳 Laksh comes in and wonders what is going on. Mother smiles and says nothing and ask if they all are hungry and suggest for lunch. She excuses herself to bathroom. Laksh confused seeing all trio and ask what happen nu. Karthik explains to her.

"Sorry Vishnu ..." Laksh says to Vishnu who looks so heart broken and sad. He controls
himself and does not say a word. Laksh looks at Karthik but he stood there helpless. Vishnu says "dei macha ... naan appovae sonnen daa, oru vitulae irakaradhu seri varadhu nu.." Karthik tries to say something but Vishnu pushes his
hand and walks away. Raji who is watching all this
turns away unable to control her tears. Laksh mother walks in unaware
of the situation and calls at Karthik "mappilai enna innum kalambalaiya??
Lunch unga treat taan.. lets go" and she leaves first. They all just follow her without Vishnu.

Vishnu siting in office when the trio returns back. Laksh goes to him and ask him why his very sour .. Vishnu remains silent. Laksh goes near him and held up Vishnu chin and says "ennaku unna pidichiruku.. adhu mattum podhum seriya. Manasu pothu kulapathey. Naan amma kitta pesuren .." Vishnu smiles "Nijamavae .." and cracks up some joke. All 3 laughs. Karthik turns and looks at Raji who looks back at him. So much of love in her eyes yet she is hesitating.

Karthik mother calls him and keeps asking him about the proposal she had spoken to him last week. Karthik just tries to push away that talk. Mother gets annoyed and calls Madhan and complains to him. Madhan comes to Karthik office and in front of Raji he questions Karthik and tells him how his mother is crying cause of Karthik. Karthik tries to shut Madhan off but Madhan turns to Raji and ask her to either give green light to Karthik or walk away from Karthik life so that he can have a good life partner. Raji is hurt and Karthik chases Madhan away. Laksh ask Karthik what is the use chasing him away. What madhan said is true. Either she accept him or move away from Karthik life. Raji walks out away from there.

Back to present .. -

Traffic light. Karthik looks out the window and suddenly felt his world spin out of control for to his shock and surprise he was staring straight into the eyes of the love of his life.

thodarum

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anithu

@amrithatec

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Fantastic ratna..I love this part..Raji though will be standing in the middle of unable to decide...She will make sure one day how much karthi is an important soul in her life..The day will definetly come..Fantastic part..Waiting for the next

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Daffodilee

@Daffodilee

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

awesome part ratna 🤗 . you keeping the suspense in each part.loved it .seekram KR & VL ah meet pana vai da. i guess VL married nu . thats why sounds asked neengalum ah ing nu 😎

waiting for next part
update Asap

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suhasini

@Suha95

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

ratna awesome part...

soundarya baby thane...happpa...
ana lakshmi soundarya kita marriage agiduchu nu sonnala...??

karthik has seen raji rightaaa...sikiram next part update pannungaaa...!!!