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Pallanguzhi

@Pallanguzhi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Wonderful story Ratna Akka 👏👏👏

thideer thiruppam - Karthik married Lakshmi - nalla suspense!

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hopper_ocean

@hopper_ocean

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

CHAPTER 5

By time Karthik realize whats happening.. everything happen to fast. Red turns to green and Raji auto moves away first. Karthik becomes speechless few seconds before he started stammering Raji Auto Raji auto giving sudden jump to Laksh who is driving. "Enna Karthik.." ask Laksh... Karthik tells her to follow the auto. They followed in silent and Karthik was in tensed. Yet seeing the eyes shows him the love is still there in her eyes.

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"Appo nee kadhal sollaporadhu illaiya Raji??" ask Laksh, Raji is silent. Laksh gets so frustrated and scolds her for not being able to stand up to her love. "Nee mattum unnodhu kadhala amma kitta solliteiya?" Raji tries to change topic. "Ennodhu vishayam vera Raji .. adhu amma permission ku innum convince pannaradhaku naan effort podhalai. But Vishnu ku naan green light kodi eppayo potachu.. Nee adhu taan delay pannurae.." says laksh. Raji looks at Laksh and says "ennaku ellatha vida appa taan mukkiyum .. avar hurt pannara madhiri ennalae endha decision take panna mudiyalae Laksh, Ennaku Karthik vendum.. appa vum vendhum ... " Raji winces. Laksh gets annoyed "appa mukkiyum naan Karthik vidhu. Avanauvadhu vera ponnu kalyanam pannikitta sandhosama irakathum.." Raji cries "enn laksh ippadi sollurenga?" Laksh stands up.. "ippadi ellathakum alavaradhaku stop panna Raji. Kadupa iruku di. Enn selfish aa irukae Raji? .." Raji tries to wipe out her tears. Susan comes and quickly raji tries to be normal. She looks at both of them "enna achu.. ?" Laksh says the same thing nu. Susan sighs and says "Raji innuma nee love sollalae? Come on ya, how long you gona drag this? appa ku worry pannaradhu tappu illa. Take Laksh for example. Ava amma taan avalaku ulagam ... ava sollaleiya Vishnu ku? she is confident she can persuade her mother and you should have the same attitude..." Laksh looks at Susan appreciating her for what she is saying. "ama raji, Susan sollaradhu seri taan. Karthik kudha sonnan taannae he will stick with you no matter what happens only if you can confirm the love...don't make him wait Raji.". Raji looks at both of them and continues to remain silent. Suddenly she smiles and looks at both of them and goes looking for Karthik. Her heart beats so fast and she refuse to stop cause if she does, she will loose her courage to face Karthik.

Goes straight to her place only to find her father standing there staring in anger to Karthik and Vishnu who just puts their head down. Raji stop death seeing her father. Father starts smiling the minute he saw Raji. Goes to her and ask how she is ... Laksh and Susan who followed behind stopped seeing him. He smiles at them and tells Raji "eppudi kannu irukae .. unna taan parka vandhen. Nalla velae nee vandhuthei. Inga oru kolai vilandharakum.." All shock to hear this. Raji goes timidly "enna pa achu" while looking towards Karthik. "eehh idhoo anga nikkaran lae.. enna parthu dairiyama unga pottu ennaku pidichiriku nu solluran.." barks her father. "Vetti poturupen Raji avanae...unna ivan daily idhulam solli padutharana?" Karthik steps front and ask him to try to understand that both of them in love 😲 "Dei machaaa.. " Vishu whispers. While Susan gives a way to go whistle 😉 Father looks at Raji ... she immediately denies it and takes her father away from there 😕 Karthik looks hurt. Susan goes near him and pats him shoulder unable to say anything.. Laksh and Vishnu keeps quite. 😕

Back to present :-

"Karthik Karthik.. auto signal poduran to stop.." Karthik sighs and notices auto stops. Laksh stops her car and both gets down. Raji unaware they had followed paid the money and steps down... turns and freeze upon seeing both

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sathyakrs

@sathyakrs

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

omg..this raji 😡

karthik initiative eduthu kooda adha accept panna mudiyalaya avaluku...

interesting Ratna.

wonderful part ...👏

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anithu

@amrithatec

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Raji always irritating..Anyone in karthi situation will turn back...But it is love...It will make magic..Eventhough either raji or karthi tells lets leave apart..they will never...again and again they will come back..

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Daffodilee

@Daffodilee

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Awesome part ratna
aha this raji is so annoying .chance kidaichum accept pana mudyalayaa ivalku
its interesting .update Asap

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Smiles-20

@Smiles-20

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Ratna you leave us in suspense, eagerly waiting for the next parts now.

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joe_arhi

@joe_arhi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Hey just now came across this FF. Read it in a go. All updates are short and sweet. U gave me a heart-attack in the starting. Was shock to read those small small dialog which mislead us. I dont think that karthik and lakshmi has married. Please clear that tension too... The same confused Raji here too 😭.. I feel pity for Karthik and also appreciate that he had the guts to confront 'meesai' and ask Raji... Story is interesting and waiting eagerly to know what happened btwn KR.

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Very great update rathna,

raji,...grrr...😡

iva yeppavume ipadithaanaa...ilai ipadithaan yepaavumevaa...😃

what will happen next?

me biting my nails...

please update soon.

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hopper_ocean

@hopper_ocean

Alumni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

CHAPTER 6

All three siting by a cafe having coffee. Raji smiles and says feels like old time .. only Vishnu is not here. Laksh is silent and Raji felt not right for bringing up his name here. "Eppudi iruka Raji.." ask Karthik in his usual husky deep voice. Raji looks at him her eyes full of love and corner of her eyes water gathering up .. immediately she looks away and says she is doing fine. Life is very simple for her, from the hectic working with coding and stuffs .. here she is dealing with history, sculptures, drawings and stuffs. "Engalam marandha pocha Raji? Oru call oru sms at least enga email reply panna kudha unnaku tonalaiya Raji?" ask Laksh. Raji remains silent. "unga kalyanam apparam disturb pannavendam nu nineichen ..." drags Raji. "enga marriage kum nee contact illama ponadhakum enna connection Raji? Puriyalae.." says Laksh.

Karthik : Ama Raji, marriage ku idhukum enna connection? oru wish kudha unkitta varalae?
Laksh : Ama oru varama karthik enna tholla panninan Raji call pannala wish pannala.. edhuvadhu sonnala nu?
Karthik : appadi enna Raji nanga pannum? Enga mela ivalava kollaveriya address illama poitei? Unna thedura kaaga evalava kastham engalaku??
Raji : sorry, tappu nu tonachu.. unga marriage piragum anga naan irakaradhu, lakshmi ku badika kudhadhu nu naan vilagithen.
Laksh : Uhh? Enna Raji volerai? ennaku enna agapodhu? Enn nee ennaku disturb aa irupae?
Raji : naan .. naan haiyoo laks purinjaka di. Naan anga irundha neeyum karthik eppudi valavenga? Karthik ennaku irandha andha relationship unna disturb pannakudhadhu nu naan kalambithen. Eppudi naan karthik kudha normal friends aa irakaradhu? Eppudi ennalae unga rendhu peerum pakkathilae irakaradhu?

Both Laksh and Karthik looks at each other. Laksh was the first one to burst out laughing
Karthik just smiles. Raji is confused.
Laksh : Rajiii haiyoo Rajii nee nijamavae loosa? appo ittana varashama idhu taan unna... hahaha hahaha continues laughing.
Karthik : enna Raji?
Raji gets upset : Enna ...
Laksh : anniki kalyanam nadanthadhu nijam taan annalum ennaku vishnu kum. Nee sms padikalaiya...?
Raji is fully shock. And she is confused.
Raji : Appo anniki cafe lae nee oru baby .. appa .. karthik??
laksh : ohh adhu soundarya baby. Enga kudha 3 days irundhan appo karthik aa appa appa nu solluvan. Adhu mattum taan andha baby ku teriyum.. adhuku vera words innum varalae ...

Raji is so confused. But butterflies starts flying in her stomach. She looks up at Karthik and he is looking back at her with so much love.
Raji thinks back about the invitation card which had Laksh Karthik name for the marriage .. Raji ask " appo andha kalyanam card, vishnu ermm ennaku suttama onnu puriyalae ..."
Laksh smiles "ohh adhuva... naan sollure..."

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