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Posted: 8 years ago
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So guys I know everyone has so many doubts and confusions regarding kabir ... hope this part makes it clear to you all ... aakhirkar on special demands mai use dhund k lehi ayi😆 ... bahut mehnat ki h ... Ab apne aap nipatlo ... 🤣

PART 7

Oh!!! umm... hi ... han haan mai Wahi hu jise app sab gadha ,ullu ,stupid, idiot k naam se Jada achche se jaante h aur haan not to forget duffer ... duffer she always used to call me that ...
ab to pata chal gaya hoga ... yes Kabir... Kabir Kumar ... aur aaj mai jaa raha hu India wapis ... back to my love ...badi jaldi akal agayi yahi soach rahe ho na ... now don't give me looks ... bata raha hu sab but first let me board the flight already I'm late ...
oh god... hope I don't miss the flight ... nishu sahi kehti h I'm super careless... on half way towards airport I remembered that I forgot my passport such an idiot I am ... and now here I m rushing ... yes yes sab bataunga where I am ... where I was ... everything...but baad me first let me rush ...😲

In Jaipur
Early morning I woke up and saw the face of my little angel sleeping beside me and as I bent forward to kiss her forehead she opened her eyes and giggled ... she was already awake .. like kabir aways did ...
not disturbing dolly di as she shared my room last night ...I tiptoed to the balcony with kavu in my arms ... and she covered her mouth with both her hands and those innocent eyes shining wide with mischief so that no voice escapes ... once out we both laughed , I amused with her actions and she with joy😆😃 ...
Today is a big day for me a day when I could mend few things few chaos created by me ...
Taking in the fresh air and looking towards my little angel my motivation my strength who was busy playing with my hairs and talking to the birds ... i hope for the best 😊...
After a couple of hours everyone in the house was ready and leaving for a visit to a temple and will return by evening... it was very difficult but somehow I managed to make an excuse of having some important lectures to take and tried to explain everyone and they understood... I also wanted to go but today it was important for me to be somewhere else ...
All elders left in one car and the cousins and kavu in other not before sharing a group hug with me and wishing me luck ...
After that I also started preparing for the day and left for the destination locking the house behind ...

In flight

Umm ... oh !! Uff... tum log phirse aagaye ... ab agaye ho to congratulate me finally I was successful in reaching on time😃 ... achcha achcha baba theek h mat karo😕 ...
Kaha maine soacha tha I'll spend my journey thinking about my angel but ab tum log Jo agaye ho ... haan haan bata raha hu ayese mat ghooro...😵

How happy I was that day thinking about returning back to Jaipur after almost one and a half months I'll be with her... already she was upset with the extension of this tour ... she never told me but she can't hide anything from me I could sense the disappointment in her voice but she tried to be cheerful always ...
Sensing the tour on the verge of extension again and the loads of incomplete works I started working day and night for last week and also could not give her much time ... I knew I'll pay for this as Ms jwalamukhi will explode with anger but it would have been worse if I break my promise this time ...
I had to reach anyhow on maa and papa's anniversary... so all bucked up I was ... luckily everything winded-up within time and I left for airport...
And the stupid me forgot to inform her about my arrival... though she knew that I'll be reaching that day but as a sanskari pati I should have informed her ... but no the mischief mind in me said let's trouble her some more and then surprise her... and so I was heading to my destination... but this karma ... you trouble your innocent wife let me trouble you😈 ...
The flight delayed by 3 hours due to unpleasant weather thus instead of afternoon I reached in late afternoon and then it couple of hours to get the baggage and check out...
Kabira ab to tu gaya it's already evening party must be almost over tinking I was rushing towards exit to take the taxi again completely messy and chaotic and woosh!!!! I bumped into someone... " sorry sorry I m really sorry miss " I apologized and helped the lady to settle and helped her luggage...
" Hey kabir ! How's u ?? " Said the lady and listening a familiar voice... it was then that I looked up and soon recognized her " oh hello Dr. Shivani ... really sorry for this I was in a hurry ...how are you met you after so long " Dr. Shivani was a family friend almost my age...
" It's ok kabir ... you returned today ??it really took you so long ... how was ur tour?? " She asked me in a friendly tone all excited... leaving me confused "how does she know about my trip yes we are friends but don't meet regularly and I don't even remember when I met her last time " I thought... definitely my expressions were enough for her to guess and she chuckled " are pareshan mat ho ...nisha ne bataya tha " she answered my unasked questions... " ohh !! " I spoke but wait how she met nisha ... and as far as I know they have met only once in a function and that too for a couple of minutes... before I could questions her she spoke ... "so kabir how's nisha's ... and when should I come to your house ?"
" house why ?? " and again my another stupid reply jumped out, with her furrowed eyebrows... and controlling the awkward situation I spoke again " Oh any time doctor ... " and smiling she spoke " sure ...ok I m getting late ... it was nice meeting you ... and take care of nisha she is weak and need rest specially this time ... and I'll come soon to take the the grand party from would be papa... bye see you soon " saying so giving me a formal hug she prepared herself to leave ...
Wait what did she said ... expressionless I heard her words and as they registered in my mind ... I immediately caught her before she could have left ... " Oh wait doctor ... aapne kya kaha just abhi ... nisha ... rest ...party... papa .." I blurred out all with confusion ... and sensing me unaware she bit her tongue and shut her eyes tightly in embarrassment " Oops !!! Think I spilled the beans" she spoke ... "Shivi so stupid of you can't keep your mouth shut" she murmured to herself ...
" Kuch nai kabir... mai to bas ayesehi ... tum nisha se puchna bye " and she tried to escape...
" Doctor what's happening... I m confused" I asked her again... no other option left she finally spoke
" Kabir actually nisha came to the clinic for her check up and... yes she is expecting... I should not have told you like this .. but tumse itne dino baad mili and excitement me I blurred it out all to you ... so sorry kabir " ... after listening this my happiness had no bounds " no no it's alright... and thankyou soo much " thanking her and bidding a bye I left all super happy I am going to be a father ... I could not explain that feeling i was filled with ... oh wait but why has she not informed me this ... such a big thing ... oh yes she was speaking about her not being well and then that surprise... oh I got it ... now let's see wifey who surprises whom...
Happily I spoke to myself... and headed towards the taxi ... I thought of buying her a gift ... yes I already brought so many of them for her but this one needs to be special after all she is going to give me the bestest gift of my life and I'll be surprising her with my gift ... after wasting another hour for the return gift for the best gift and settling to a diamond pendant with our names inscribed in it...finally I headed toward the Gangwal house ...
It was dark outside and it was then that I realized the time I am super late ... kabira be prepared for juta chappal today your wifey is not going to leave firstly you are late and secondly never informed her by call ...
Oh wait ... suddenly my mind strikes "aaj subha se wifey ka call kyu nai aya ?" And then i took out my phone from the pocket and realized it was dead ... the idiot me forgot to charge the phone last night ... and what the hell I was doing in the flight... ( yahi soach rahe hona ... same here ) ... not wasting any more seconds I took out the portable charger and plugged in my phone ... as the phone switched on and got its life back, it left me shocked with so many missed calls a bunch from investors, another few from office, some from maa and abundant from nisha ...and not to forget a flood of msgs ... opening the msg app the only one that could grab my attention was from nisha and ignoring the rest I opened them she asked me to reach the lake ...
" Must have planned a surprise " I thought and a smile crept on my face I started to reply her that I'll be reaching in half an hour but before I could send the msg the phone started ringing a call from office.. irritatedly I rejected the call ... I immediately informed the driver about destination change .. but my bad luck the driver declined ... the fuel level in his car was very low and will exhaust midway ...
I got down from the car and spotted another taxi on the opposite side of the road and headed towards it getting back to the text ... but again the mobile started ringing and as my eyes fell on the screen they were filled with love to see the caller ID flashing on it ..
none other than nisha ... and as i was about to pick the call someone standing at a distance was shouting pointing at opposite direction my eyes followed him but was too late to escape from the speeding truck racing towards me and within a second boom!!!!
With unanswered call and a msg waiting to be send ...I was lying in the middle of the road bleeding ,pulverized slowly slipping from my conscious and the only words on my lifeless tongue was her name... my solace ... my life ... nisha ... and everything blackout...

Fifteen days back I opened my eyes to unfamiliar surrounding ... walls painted pale yellow ,my head throbbing with the continuous beeping sound... few body parts felt numb and the others irresistibly paining... gathering strength I tried to look around to find maa sleeping on the couch... she woke up with the groaning sound I made ... she rushed towards me
"Kabir kabir beta aap theek h ... aapko hosh aagaya beta dekhiye hmari taraf " she spoke with concern... " nisha ...nisha " were the only words that I blurred out even in that semi conscious state... soon the doctors came and started their diagnosis... after few hours when I was better and completely in my senses maa came back... but all the time my eyes were searching someone one else... " ab kaisa feel kar rahe hai aap kabir '" I smiled in response "maa nisha kaha h " I asked her diverting my view towards the gate in search of her... but got silence in reply
" Kabir vo sab choriye aur aap ye medicines lijiye " she spoke...
" maa ... aapne bataya nahi nisha kaha h ... kuch kaam se bahar gayi h ?aapne use bataya nai ki I'm fine now" I asked again ... but this time she clenched her teeth in anger "nisha nahi h kabir " she spoke in anger ... "nahi hai matlab ... maa aap kya keh rahi h " I questioned back .. "sahi keh rahe h ... dhoka dia h usne hume ... aur tumhe bhi ... " she continued and told me the whole incident what all happened... after the accident i was shifted to Dubai ... she brought me here and never informed nisha or her family ... neither she contacted them in past years ...
One after the other her words came as a shock to me ... we lost the contact... due to someones betrayal... nisha revealed the details ... maa confronted her and then all relations broken...
No no this is not true ... nisha can't do this ... something is wrong ... how can she do this she is my strength my motivation... as much as I have worked hard for that project same was her dedication too... all those sleepless nights I have spent working she was also there with me being my strength my support... maa definitely must have some misunderstanding... nisha in any cost can never do that ...
That time I wanted to reach her immediately and tried too but my week body never followed... waking up after two years of comma there was no energy left...
No other options left I had to wait ... and within this time I had to complete few jobs ... find answers to few unanswered questions... everything has a reason I had to find those reasons behind everything maa spoke ...

After two weeks regaining enough strength to return back to her I m here all ready to face her ,her anger ,her questions everything...
As the destination is getting closer my heart is beating faster filled with happiness and nervousness together ... finally I'll meet her today...



Edited by poornima_15 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92
It was happy- sad update for me 😊
I'm really happy after knowing that kabir still trust nisha😃 and he was about to meet her that day but couldn't 😒
And sad because of his accident 😔
And at that point when his accident take place and his msg remain unsent.. I really feel bad for them..
But now I'm very excited 😃 what's going to happen next.. ?? How they will react seeing each other after long time..?
Waiting for kabir's family reunion 😳
Update soon 😊
Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93
waiting for nibir union...
it was fabulous update just loving it more more and more...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94
You know Poornima I'm a NiBirFan and also a CLIMAX Fan!!😳
And this is fab!!!👏👏👏
Seriously yaar it makes me crave for the next chapter😃
And you know, of course you don't know 😆that's why I'm telling 😆
Climax k bharose hi mera naata juda tha NAUC se...it's sounds a bit cheezy but it's true😃
You must have seen the ad right of Kabir's entry with the coffee cafe backdrop? That was it for me!
I used to watch another show at SP and this ad clicked me bcz I've also seen Viraj's entry ad and at that time it had seemed to me that Nisha will be in love with Viraj. And this ad hinted at a sort of breakup AND THERE'S A ROCKING CLIMAX of another guy entering into a girl's life when a couple(NiRaj) has already been formed. So, I had thought of watching it but not too long as I knew like all other serials the hero-heroine would eventually meet and the third guy would turn villian shedding his good-boy behaviour.
But my assumptions were dashed in the most BEAUTIFUL way I think! ❤️
And they did touch a reality scene where one moves on! Beside this, all the adventures with Chandu are my ever favourite!! And the show kept me intrigued turning me into a crazy NiBir fan
And Beyhadh pe bhi isliye hi meri nazar hai😆
O God! Thoda overexcitement me kho gayi mai sorry in case you felt irrelevant 🤣🤣🤣
Well kaha thi mai yeah CLIMAX!
Poornima this is amazing you know, why? let me tell you
So ahem I begin
Mike please
Kya Nisha Kabir ko kabhi maaf kar payegi? Kya hoga jab Nisha k gharwale Kabir ko Nisha k saath payenge? Kya Kabir apni beti ko apna pyaar kabhi de payega? Jaanne k lie padhte rahiye sirf IF par
Don't think I'm weirdo even though I literally sound lol🤣

Hmm so regarding the chapter yaar feeling so bad for Kabir 😭😭
Jitna gussa aaya tha naa pehle sab beh gaya
You really connected the incidents so well👏👏 that reading msgs, asked to meet at lake, getting calls, not replying, all the questions answered!
Not really all 😆bcz Kabir k quotation details kisne leak kiye ye jaanna baaki hai

And I'm sympathizing with Kabir yaar uski galti nai hai aur naahi Nisha ki but Nisha bhugat rahi hai aur Kabir bhi ab bhugatega vaapas jaane par😭😭

Abhi khatam nai hua mera lol
I want to tell you that I hadn't expected that Kabir would be knowing about Nisha being pregnant and kaun kisko surprise dene wali baat.. it was lovely!😳
I had thought that the end of the story would be this thing but since you've disclosed it so meri utsukta aur badh gayi hai😃
And also another point you subtly presented that Kabir didn't leave for India immediately as there were some jobs left to be done. And I caught that well...it was logical. And I'm waiting to find out the culprit.
Haalanki jab tumne shuru me Kabir se nipatne k liye kaha tha tab mai haath me frying pan leke ready thi🤣 uska sar phodne k liye (sigh) lekin phir padhte padhte yar usko gale lagaane ka man kia...emotional to nai hui mai magar next chap me ho jaaungi lagta hai kyunki mere assumptions se hi thoda emotional ho chuki to padne k baat to ho hi jaega
But but but I LOVE CLIMAX! 😃 So emotional hone par bhi I would Enjoy!
Lol mai apna comment chapter jaise nai banaana chahti 😆so waiting for next chapter!😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So good loved it plz post next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anmol333

It was happy- sad update for me 😊

I'm really happy after knowing that kabir still trust nisha😃 and he was about to meet her that day but couldn't 😒
And sad because of his accident 😔
And at that point when his accident take place and his msg remain unsent.. I really feel bad for them..
But now I'm very excited 😃 what's going to happen next.. ?? How they will react seeing each other after long time..?
Waiting for kabir's family reunion 😳
Update soon 😊

thankyou anmol 😊 glad u liked it 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niha0606

waiting for nibir union...

it was fabulous update just loving it more more and more...

thankyou 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: aNibirFan

You know Poornima I'm a NiBirFan and also a CLIMAX Fan!!😳
And this is fab!!!👏👏👏
Seriously yaar it makes me crave for the next chapter😃
And you know, of course you don't know 😆that's why I'm telling 😆
Climax k bharose hi mera naata juda tha NAUC se...it's sounds a bit cheezy but it's true😃
You must have seen the ad right of Kabir's entry with the coffee cafe backdrop? That was it for me!
I used to watch another show at SP and this ad clicked me bcz I've also seen Viraj's entry ad and at that time it had seemed to me that Nisha will be in love with Viraj. And this ad hinted at a sort of breakup AND THERE'S A ROCKING CLIMAX of another guy entering into a girl's life when a couple(NiRaj) has already been formed. So, I had thought of watching it but not too long as I knew like all other serials the hero-heroine would eventually meet and the third guy would turn villian shedding his good-boy behaviour.
But my assumptions were dashed in the most BEAUTIFUL way I think! ❤️
And they did touch a reality scene where one moves on! Beside this, all the adventures with Chandu are my ever favourite!! And the show kept me intrigued turning me into a crazy NiBir fan
And Beyhadh pe bhi isliye hi meri nazar hai😆
O God! Thoda overexcitement me kho gayi mai sorry in case you felt irrelevant 🤣🤣🤣
Well kaha thi mai yeah CLIMAX!
Poornima this is amazing you know, why? let me tell you
So ahem I begin
Mike please
Kya Nisha Kabir ko kabhi maaf kar payegi? Kya hoga jab Nisha k gharwale Kabir ko Nisha k saath payenge? Kya Kabir apni beti ko apna pyaar kabhi de payega? Jaanne k lie padhte rahiye sirf IF par
Don't think I'm weirdo even though I literally sound lol🤣

Hmm so regarding the chapter yaar feeling so bad for Kabir 😭😭
Jitna gussa aaya tha naa pehle sab beh gaya
You really connected the incidents so well👏👏 that reading msgs, asked to meet at lake, getting calls, not replying, all the questions answered!
Not really all 😆bcz Kabir k quotation details kisne leak kiye ye jaanna baaki hai

And I'm sympathizing with Kabir yaar uski galti nai hai aur naahi Nisha ki but Nisha bhugat rahi hai aur Kabir bhi ab bhugatega vaapas jaane par😭😭

Abhi khatam nai hua mera lol
I want to tell you that I hadn't expected that Kabir would be knowing about Nisha being pregnant and kaun kisko surprise dene wali baat.. it was lovely!😳
I had thought that the end of the story would be this thing but since you've disclosed it so meri utsukta aur badh gayi hai😃
And also another point you subtly presented that Kabir didn't leave for India immediately as there were some jobs left to be done. And I caught that well...it was logical. And I'm waiting to find out the culprit.
Haalanki jab tumne shuru me Kabir se nipatne k liye kaha tha tab mai haath me frying pan leke ready thi🤣 uska sar phodne k liye (sigh) lekin phir padhte padhte yar usko gale lagaane ka man kia...emotional to nai hui mai magar next chap me ho jaaungi lagta hai kyunki mere assumptions se hi thoda emotional ho chuki to padne k baat to ho hi jaega
But but but I LOVE CLIMAX! 😃 So emotional hone par bhi I would Enjoy!
Lol mai apna comment chapter jaise nai banaana chahti 😆so waiting for next chapter!😃

😆😆😆pata h first time ever Maine itna bada comment dekha h as a reply to me😆😆 and I'm liking it😛
And same pinch I also started watching it after that promo😳😳 kuch magic tha us promo me ...😃 pehle my family used to watch the show and I used to just have a glimpse sometimes... but after that promo to mai chipak hi gayi thi nauc se🤣🤣
When I was writing it Mujhe sach me laga tha ki ye update kafi boaring h aur kahi kabir ki jagah mujhe hi jute chappal na padh jaye😆😆 but happy to see all your responses 😳
And vo starting me line kabir se niptane wali isiliye likhi thi coz I know there would b many like u sitting with frying pan or belan 🤣
Thankyou for liking it hope you like the next part too ... 😊
Aur haan ek aur baat I forgot to ask u last time but bad me yaad aya ... what about your guesses😉 ... kitne sahi the ???? Really wanted to know 😉
Edited by poornima_15 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: mkjr

So good loved it plz post next part soon

thankyou 😊
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Originally posted by: poornima_15

😆😆😆pata h first time ever Maine itna bada comment dekha h as a reply to me😆😆 and I'm liking it😛

And same pinch I also started watching it after that promo😳😳 kuch magic tha us promo me ...😃 pehle my family used to watch the show and I used to just have a glimpse sometimes... but after that promo to mai chipak hi gayi thi nauc se🤣🤣
When I was writing it Mujhe sach me laga tha ki ye update kafi boaring h aur kahi kabir ki jagah mujhe hi jute chappal na padh jaye😆😆 but happy to see all your responses 😳
And vo starting me line kabir se niptane wali isiliye likhi thi coz I know there would b many like u sitting with frying pan or belan 🤣
Thankyou for liking it hope you like the next part too ... 😊
Aur haan ek aur baat I forgot to ask u last time but bad me yaad aya ... what about your guesses😉 ... kitne sahi the ???? Really wanted to know 😉

Guesses yeah 2 the mere😉
Par koi bhi sai nai lag paaya poori tarah😆
Pehla tha memory loss ho jaega airplane crash me
I know thoda ajeeb tha par mera guess tha😆
Second tha ki he's doing so bcz of some past of Nisha (I assumed that he doesn't know she's pregnant I told you it was unexpected for me that he knows )
Ha to past se I meant she loves someone else and behaving to be a good wife is just acting aisi koi misunderstanding
Tab aage k chapters ka kabir ke dreams ka vasu aunty ka idea ni tha naa to aisa socha tha😆
Par kachu bhi naa hua aisa guess kitna bekaar karti hu haaye😆
Par jo bhi hota hai acche k lie hota hai😆 varna aisa climax kaha dekhne milta mujhe 😉
Waiting for the next update

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