Nibir story: Nayi Umeedein Last Part up pg19 - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: ..MysticAura..

RES☢️

itne saare parts? mereko heart attack dene ka plan tha kya sabka?🥺

I'll be back in december!

🤣 take ur time😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
Amzng update.
N story z really nice..Please dnt thnk of discontinuing it..
But do update it soon..
Waiting 4 d nxt
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Posted: 8 years ago
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will try to update soon may be by next week 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tani_0209

Amzng update.

N story z really nice..Please dnt thnk of discontinuing it..
But do update it soon..
Waiting 4 d nxt

thankyou 😊 will try to update soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
PART 6:

PRESENT
I don't know when I was drowned,deep drowned into my thoughts... it was kavu's wailing that brought me back to reality... maybe her peaceful slumber was broken ... trying to calm her down I took her when dolly di enter the room ... " are wah lagta h hmari dono Princess ki neend Puri hogayi " she spoke with a smile and came towards us ...and kavu also chuckled... "chalo bahar chale ?? Sab is shaitan k saath khelne k liye queues me khade h ... aur 5 min me nahi gaye na to bahar Gangwal house ka kya hal hone wala h only God knows " she said rolling her eyes and we both laughed ...
"di aap dono chalo mai ati hu " I spoke ...
Agreeing to me she nodded and moved towards the door with kavu ... not before turning back and saying " Nishu bas ek din aur phir kal k baad sab theek hojayega " she assured me through her eyes ...
" di you think so ? " I questioned back
" We believe so ...haina princess" she assured me through her eyes and blinked towards the little devil who soon flooded my view with her flying kisses with both the hand and blinking towards me not before leaving the room both laughing...
"shaitan " I thought and sighed being amazed, this was again new to me ... my baby is really picking up things too fast and no doubts why dolly di calls her little devil ...
Yes tomorrow is a big day for me ... hope everything goes well ... opening the cupboard in a rush I took out a new pair of clothes leading a bunch of papers to fall ... noticing the unsigned papers ,again the memories of that day flodded my mind ...

FLASHBACK
Finally that day has arrived when my wait is going to be over ... today finally he'll be returning back to me... oh how much I was waiting for this day ... to pass each day without him was a hurdle for me and with this beautiful secret of ours hidden in my heart made every second more torturous for me ... nishu nishu...calm down the wait is not much few hours and we'll be together... after some self motivation session I got ready and headed towards the Gangwal house it was almost evening by now ... I know today everyone must be super excited and I could hear their noise even from the courtyard... and rushed inside the house to be welcomed by my over enthusiastic family... I immediately spotted maa and papa and rushed towards them and hugged maa from behind and shouted " happy anniversary maa " near her ears ... " aagayi hmari yaad ? Time mil gaya madam aapko " maa complains.. " koi kuch nai bolega meri beti ko " papa came to my defense I immediately hugged him and wished him too ... and mouthed a sorry to maa ...which she accepted with a smile ... " chalo ab sab ye bataao itna shor kyu macha rakha h ?" I asked eyeing my cousins... "vo sab chor aur ye khaa " saurav came to me holding a box of sweets and before I could protest my mouth was full with a huge piece of sweet... and everyone chuckled.. after sometime somehow I spoke " hua kya h koi batayega"
.. " nishu mujhe aur dolly ko hmara pehla project mil gaya h " ... actually dolly di and saurav started a new business after their marriage as being a start-up they worked days and night and had faced many hard days in past few months ... even after repetitive suggestions for help form family saurav rejected the proposal over and over again and after months of hard work ... they are here nurturing the fruits of success... I was very happy for them ... because I knew how much they have worked for it ...
" sachchi congratulations" I wished them and soon the house was filled with laughter...
In between we heard a not so familiar voice ... every one stopped at their tracks and turned towards the source ... to our surprise there stood vasu maa clapping her hands and the voice echoing in the whole house ... " maa aap kab aye ... aayiye naa ?" I spoke moving towards her and was soon stopped when she gestured me to do so with her right hand ... " hme barbaad karke aaplog yaha jashn mana rahe h.. kyu nisha " she spoke ... " maa app kya keh rahi h " I asked again moving closer to her ... and was again stopped by her ... " maa mat kahiye hme nisha .. Jo tumne Kia h uske baad to hme tumse kuch nai sunna " she spoke in anger ... " are vasundhara ji aayiye naa app waha darwaje pr kyu khadi h " spoke dadi ... by now I was hell confused what did I do ? I thought... " maaf kijiyega maaji ... par aaj hum yaha aap sab se milne nahi aye h... aur tum nisha kaise kar Sakti ho tum hmare saath ayesa .. hmne tumse ye bilkul b expected nai tha ... sab jaante hue b ye sab Kia tumne " she spoke nearing me in anger but more than that I could sense helplessness in her voice... " maa app kya keh rahi h mujhe kuch samjh nai araha ... " I asked and by now tears started flowing from my eyes ...
after what she spoke I had nothing to say ... kabir lost the project ...his dream project and it was the same project that saurav and dolly di were successful in getting... I never knew this before ... it was only when vasu maa spoke reality dawned upon me ...that I was accused of leaking the quotation's details to saurav... that was because after kabir it was only me who had the access to those files due to the fracture he had months before and it was impossible for a start-up to get such a big project ... vasu maa was talking of even some proofs she had ...but I never cared everyone was defending me and but I stood still there I don't know for how long my mind was only running after kabir and his broken dreams... what he must be feeling he worked hard for this I saw it how many sleepless night he had spent for this .. and saurav what is his fault even his hardwork was no less ...now what ? will kabir also feel the same and trust what vasu maa is saying? Will he believe those proofs? ... no no nisha ... he loves u he'll definitely trust u ... u just need to talk to him ...yes I'll talk to him as soon as possible yes he'll trust me ... I was still fighting with my inner thoughts when someone shook me ... and it was then that I realized that accusing session became a blame game for both the families... all the recent loss and damages were blamed on each other and my silence made it worse... I saw the person in front of me it was papa looking towards me with hopefully eyes and searching for the nisha he has taught to fight against any wrong ... but no i don't know what had occupied me at that time my mind was only waiting for kabir to come and say nisha I trust u .. u can never do this ... and I never realized to gain his trust I lost papa's trust ... "hmne nisha ko apni beti maana par phir b ... it's over Mr Gangwal... sab kuch khatam this business venture aur jo b hmare beech me bacha kucha rishta h sab khatam ... " vasu maa spoke the final words turning toward the door and all set to leave the place " par nisha.. kabir " dadi spoke ... " aap apni beti ko apne paas hi rakhiye ... and jab kuch bacha hi nai to nisha ka aur hmara b koi rishta nai ... aur hame yakeen h kabir b hmare is faisle me hmare saath hoga ... hme to lagta h aap logo se rishta jodna personally aur professionally hmari jindagi ki sabse badi galti thi ... aap logo ko official papers jldi miljayenge " ... she spoke and moved out of the house ... " nisha kuch bola kyu nai tune ... " papa enquired shaking me and i could see the anger filled with disappointment in his eyes ... but my mind could not register it ... only her words were echoing in my mind ... " no this can't happen... I need to talk .. talk with kabir ... yes I need to talk with him " I was murmuring hardly audible to any one...
" nishu kya bole jaa rahi h" ...
" papa kabir ... I need to talk to he'll understand... vo sab theek kardega ... I need to go " i spoke ... " koi fayada nai h nisha suna nai tune vasu ji ka decision hi kabir ka decision h " Papa tried to make me understand
" nahi Papa kabir kabhi ye bat nai manega... vo sab theek kar dega" saying this I left the house ...
I tried calling him but his phone was switched off ... I tried it again and again but no response... did he believe all that .. no no nisha he must be in the flight ... thinking this I messaged him thinking he'll read and contact me and meet me near the lake he took me that day ... but all in vain but still hoping for the best that he'll come ... it was almost 3 hours he never read the msg ...
the night getting darker and overpowering my hopes ...
I was checking the phone again and again did he read the msg ... but no the phone was still not reachable and the msgs not delivered...
I was staring at the msg when I saw him online and then the msg being delivered and read by him and soon typing could be seen ... I immediately called him back hoping for the best ... praying to God that he picks up the phone ... yes it was ringing ... the phone was ringing... and then the call was cut ... I tried calling him again but the phone went switched off and no reply came he was offline again... by now all those insecurities captured my mind fighting with my shattered pieces of hopes... why is he not picking the phone ... why it went switched off ... repetitive trying and messaging I sat there for another hour ... but he never came ... with the last hope that maybe he came home to meet me I went back and the silence prevailing in the house spoke it all ... everyone's eyes questioning me but mine was blank ,empty ...like a corpse I kept waiting for him... his call... his msg... sukku ,umesh bhaiya and saurav even tried to search him but all in vain ...
and the wait officially ended when after few days the official papers also arrived and one amongst them was the divorce papers ... with this and every professional relation was over ... this caused a major loss for the family business and led to backing off of many investors and partners for future ventured ... and all this was too blamed on kabir ..but soon they all recovered from this hurdel and everything came to normal in family and business only the rage was constant for them ... papa never talked to me after that day ... because he thinks that I never fought for my self when it was needed ... but he never knew that I was fighting a different battle everyday within myself ... where was kabir ?he believe those proofs ? No our love was not so week ..but why he never contacted me ... even though he read those msgs...
This was not the end another shock came when the family soon started talking about getting me married again for the reputation of the family but somehow Papa and my cousins managed the situation and the topic got closed ... till now the secret was hidden from everyone and if it would have been known then the pressure of marriage would have increased and then there was no coming back ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Very nice update 👍🏼
Finally vo raaz khul gaya...
What's up to kabir..? Why didn't he talked once ? Some more things are coming.
Next day kya hone wala hai mujhe jaana hai please update soonest 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
Read part5n6 together
And mujhe part 7 ki utsukta hai😆
Superb updates!! 👏 👏
Part5 was totally romantic😳😳
Thanks for continuing yaar Im really into the story 😃
Climax b aj khul gaya and the reason being Vasu
But abhi bhi many questions in my mind same as Nisha's
Kabir ko kya hua h ?vo nadaarad kyu h?
And most importantly aise kyu chodke chala gaya vo? Call kaat dia msg reply nai kiye what's wrong with him? Hmm armaan to buri tarah toote hai to dil ko thes lagani valid hai isliye all this is okay for some time but yaar zindagi baat nai karna is not really done
Sorry thoda zyada senti ho gyi me😆
But seriously kuch to badi vajah lagti hai
Continue soon and dear mere exam chal rahe hai ,khich gaye hai notes ka b chakkar h aur bohot kuch😆 isliye short me keh ri hu ki mera reply late hoga
Wishing ki Kabir mile next part me ki uska chal kya raha hai
Liked the way the story is moving on!😃
Will love to read next part😊😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
please do update soon ...eagerly waiting
this update was fabulous amazing dear
pls do update soonest ...pls pls pls pls
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
Awesome loved it plz post next part too excited to know what will happen next exciting plot
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
Ohk..!!
I really need time to get over dis..
Like seriously how can he send divorce pprs jst cz of a deal..
I understand it meant a lot to him..still..!!
But somewhere I doubt vasu aunty..
Cz kabir can't b rude to his wife who was as imp to him as his life only..
I can c sum Ray of hope wid dat lil conversation btwn dolly n nisha about coming days..
I hope sb acha ho

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