NiBir TS- Feels Like Love - Page 12

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

beautifully written
waiting eagerly for dere confession


Thanks Shruti, 😊
but d story ended dear😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...


Thanks a lot Vishru😳
ur comments make me positive about my useless writing😆

shibhanzzz dont ever say dat ur writing is useless warna😡
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: itznimi003

shibhanzzz dont ever say dat ur writing is useless warna😡


oh baba, relax😆
take a chill-pill mumma😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

thanks Anu😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

thanks Amina😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
I loved it! Just like your other stories ❤️ great job aur please epilogue haan?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: roaiba

I loved it! Just like your other stories ❤️ great job aur please epilogue haan?


thanks a lot dear😳
will think of d epilogue😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res res res! Exams ke baad aati hun unres karne!
unres!😉😎


loved the whole story betu!😳
everything was perfect in its place!😳
how Kabir thinks that he should have proposed Nisha.😒😊
i love your stories so much betu!😳☺️
do write more and more and more and more!😳

Edited by ..MysticAura.. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

thanks Alisha😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Surprise! Suprise! Here is the epilogue most of you asked for. Likes/comments/criticism are awaited.
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Epilogue

"Nisha, you can't back off now..." Dolly said, looking at me sharply.

"He is waiting for you since last freaking eight months, I understand your insecurities, lekin tujhe decide karna hai, pyaar yaa insecurities!"

"You sure things will go fine?" I said nervously and she nodded. She smiled softly at me, making me relax.

Since Dolly had helped me calm down and understood "emotions" better than me, I decided to carry out my plan.

Now things had been getting better. We were best friends, actually, more than that, as you all know, but he had promised me that I would get my required space and time. Gosh! Why is he so amazing?

Before I could trail off in that idiot's thoughts, I felt a tap on my shoulder and looked at my right. Dolly winked and I blushed. That nutcase knows me, inside out yaar!

Anyways, I was restless for the first four lectures and trust me when I say this, I have no clue what the teachers spoke, because I was busy in staring at Kabir. Fine, I am blushing.

Oh fish! The bell has gone. "No Kabir, don't you dare go!" I mentally screamed as I saw him pack his bag. I rushed to him. He smiled.

"Kabir, problem!" I said and he looked at me in confusion.

"Woh jo Paper Chromatography experiment hai naa, I couldn't complete it last time, so Laxmi mam ne mujhe Bio Lab mein bulaya hai, and she has asked me to bring along someone who can help me with it."

"Kya yaar Nishu tu bhi?" He said, annoyed. I felt bad for him, but couldn't help but smiled when he kept his lunch box back in his bag.

"Chal," He said. I nodded and we walked. Each passing minute, my heart beat was getting faster. I was hell nervous.

"Calm down Nisha," I said to myself as I looked at him, who was busy in his own world, climbing the stairs. "All will be fine. You know his answer, all is left is to make this official, or whatever it is called,"

I gulped some air nervously as he looked at the closed door in confusion.

"Lab toh band hai?" He looked at me.

"Um, woh, main, woh..." I sighed. I looked at the ground nervously. He held my hand and I looked up.

His eyes... they were magic. I just smiled and kept staring in his eyes.

"What is it Nisha?" He asked softly. He knew me, he knew my nervousness, and all I had to do was voice it out.

"Kabir, kya tum mujhe ek aur chance doge?" I decided to beat around the bush. He realized what I was talking about and step a little closer to me. I felt my heart skip a bit and step backward. He came a little closer and I chose not to step back.

"You know I am waiting for you, toh tumne aisa kaise socha ki I would say no to you..."

I looked down at the ground.

"Nisha, look up," It wasn't an order or any compulsion, but his soothing voice was enough to make me look at him.

"Mujhe pyaar ka definition nahi pata, aur jaana bhi nahi hai. Kyunki if I realize that whatever I define my feelings for you isn't love, I will fall apart. I am ready to wait for you, because your love is my strength Nisha. My feelings for you are strong enough... strong enough to let you go..." I looked at him in amazement. How could he be so selfless?

"I don't want to leave you Kabir," I said as tears trickled down in my eyes. Wait tears! "Idiot, ab kyun ro rahi hai tu?" I mentally cursed myself. He wiped my tears and smiled.

"I knew you would come back to me one day Nisha," he said and smiled. I couldn't help but blush.

"I love you", He said in husky voice and I felt butterflies in my tummy. I hugged him, which surprised him. He wrapped his arms around me after sometime.

Nothing was better than this moment. His arms, made me feel as if I was safe. His smile made me feel alive. I felt my heart beat risen, but I was ok with it. Let it beat at whatever pace it wants to, I know I'll be fine now...

This is ah...I can't define this feeling or this story, can you?

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Edited by ...Shibu... - 8 years ago

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