BIRTHDAY REZENDEOUS - {{NIBIR OS - RAINING KISSES}}

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alisha17

@alisha17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Awesome os

Loved it

Thnku for the pm

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arviabhigya

@arviabhigya

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Mansi mansi🤗

I love the way u celebrate your birthday😆 Normally log apne birthday pe gifts receive karte hai but tum apne birthday pe sabko gift deti ho😳 That way it is reason for all of us to celebrate🥳

ab jab

Like last year, this year's gift was marvellous indeed👏👏👏

Truly, a delight to read😳

Coming to your OS

Loved the beginning😆😆

Loved Nisha and Saurav's convo😃

It was cute and funny😆

Saurav's reaction was hilarious🤣 Love that line when he says ki Nisha must have started taking drugs🤣

I love how Saurav wants to knw the details😆 Btw even I would behave d same way as Saurav🤣

Love how Nisha complains it is Kabir's fault😆

Waise it sounded less like a complain and more like a lovesick puppy's description😃😃😃

The way she goes on and on about him was adorableness overload😳😳😳

That coupled with the image of two lovers walking in the rain😃😃

Love the way u have introduced us to the story😃👏👏

The first part of the story was cute and interesting😃😃

p.s I love how u have written the story in three posts😆 makes it easier for me to give my feedback cz u knw how lazy I m😆

Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago

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mansi

@mansi_as18

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Niya_789
Appy wala Birthday Manchi😛🤗
Birthday celebrate karna koi tujh se sikhe🤣
Now coming to this TS 😳
Barish ke mausam main alag kisam ki barish ka maza le rahe hai dono😉 ☺️
Bechara Saurav hamesha in dono ke beech phas jata hai🤣
PS: That song is from where? I WANNA DOWNLOAD IT NOW!🥱

thank u bhabhi... 🤗 song is from queen... and yeah i know [ 😃

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Snow12345654321

@Snow12345654321

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

sorry for late wishes

IF THERE'S DOUBLE ICING ON IT. IT'S YOUR CAKE.

IF THERE'S A SONG SUNG. IT'S FOR YOU...

IF THERE ARE BIRTHDAY HATS THE BIGGEST IS YOURS...

IT'S IS ALL ABOUT YOU.

BRING ON THE CELEBRATION!!!!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!!!🥳

One word "beautiful", 😃 Really really loved😳😳. Nisha's subcouncious convo was awesome. Their friendship is amazingly described , very cute. Her love for kabir , n plus point was even kabir loved her. i love the way you express every emotion, that the reader can actually feel it.

you have got wonderful writing skills.👏..keep writing. I wish one day all your stories get published coz its worth reading n no. of times.

Edited by Snow12345654321 - 9 years ago

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neha_zamia500

@neha_zamia500

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Happy birthday mansi (idk if spelled it right so, sorry) may God bless you, gives u all the happiness, may God gives u a lot more strength for writing[LOl] and may God gives you more ideas...all the best for your future..

The story was awesome.. though I have to read it again but it's really good..

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.vishrutha.

@.vishrutha.

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

First of all, HAPPY BIRTHDAY MANSI!! 🥳

The OS was very very beautifully written. And of course it should be! Coz its from you! 😉

Nisha's emotional turmoil, her description of Kabir at every point, her interaction with her own conscious, everything was bang on!

Every emotion Nisha felt was so palpable!

Nisha yelling at Saurav was 😆 ! Lol! Poor guy! 😆

NiBir's first rain kiss!! ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ perfect setting coupled with amazing writting!

The song fit in so wonderfully with the situation and the final confession was too good!

I've said this countless number of times and I say it again, you are a phenomenal writer mansi!

An undisputed queen of romance and there's no second thought in that. The ease with which you bring out the emotions of the character is remarkable!

Keep giving us such wonderful stories please! 😳

A very happy birthday once again 🤗

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Nimisha

@itznimi003

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Superb OS mansi...
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Will comment later

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Amina...

@Amina...

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Beautiful OS Mansi
It was Amazing
❤️ So Lovely ❤️
😳 So Cute 😳
Felt like a fairytale
👍🏼 Wonderful 👍🏼
👏 Very Beautifully Written 👏
❤️❤️ Loved It Sooo Much ❤️❤️

... A Very Happy Birthday Mansi ...
May You Live A Long Long Life and Have A Beautiful n Joyful Life Ahead ...!!!
May Allah's Blessings Always Be With You ...!!!

And Sorry For Being So Late ... There are a lot of things going on these days ...!!!

Lots Of Love
Amina