BIRTHDAY REZENDEOUS - {{NIBIR OS - RAINING KISSES}} - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Mansi mansi🤗

I love the way u celebrate your birthday😆Normally log apne birthday pe gifts receive karte hai but tum apne birthday pe sabko gift deti ho😳That way it is reason for all of us to celebrate🥳
ab jab
Like last year, this year's gift was marvellous indeed👏👏👏
Truly, a delight to read😳

Coming to your OS
Loved the beginning😆😆
Loved Nisha and Saurav's convo😃
It was cute and funny😆
Saurav's reaction was hilarious🤣Love that line when he says ki Nisha must have started taking drugs🤣
I love how Saurav wants to knw the details😆Btw even I would behave d same way as Saurav🤣
Love how Nisha complains it is Kabir's fault😆
Waise it sounded less like a complain and more like a lovesick puppy's description😃😃😃
The way she goes on and on about him was adorableness overload😳😳😳
That coupled with the image of two lovers walking in the rain😃😃
Love the way u have introduced us to the story😃👏👏
The first part of the story was cute and interesting😃😃

p.s I love how u have written the story in three posts😆makes it easier for me to give my feedback cz u knw how lazy I m😆

m too greedy to read ur comments on my special day that is one of the main reasons i write on my bday... 😉 see itti bhi bholi nhi hu mai... this is the best way i celebrate it because m not found of bday gifts n parties and i recieve none 😆 thank u sooo much ur ha kabira ko dekhke everyone behaves like love sick puppy... banda hi esa h 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

This emoticon explains everything😳😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Mansi...apne bday pe bhi tum hume gift de rahi ho☺️...vo bhi blushy blushy vala☺️
I still remember ur last bday gift...Midnight Cravings😳
Now coming to the OS☺️...hayyyeee rabba Mansi☺️...tumhare stories padke main hamesha kisi aur hi duniya main chali jati hu
The kisses☺️☺️...vo bhi baarish main☺️☺️...kya batau☺️☺️...padte padte sabkuch imagine kar lia☺️☺️
Aur tum Kabiraa ko jaise describe karti ho na...ufff kya batau☺️
Thank u so much for this lovelyyy bday gift🤗🤗
Bhagvaan kare tum hamesha hume aise hi blush karati raho😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh.. ...my gosh... This is

And one more thing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Belated happy bday Manasi di..
Good wishes 4 ur future..!!
Cuming back to ur story..
My god..!! I was soo much blushing..
U r surely one of my fav..N getting a story 4m u dat also too long dat also romantic
It jst made my day..
Loved it z an understatement ..
U jst nailed it.
Bdw di I hav Nt read ur last yr story u posted..can u plz plz plz send me d link..
I'll b glad if u can do dat..plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anmol333

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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">And the os was wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">So so so beauuutttiiifffuuulll👏👏</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">Start with saurav and nisha convo very funny especially I didn't kiss you🤣</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">Then next her flashback amazingly beautifully written👏</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">The girlfriend wala scene I was laughing holding my stomach 🤣</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">Kisss☺️</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">Confession☺️</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">Loved every bit of it😳</font>
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<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#9900ff">Thank you mansi for this and love you yaar🤗😳</font>

thank u anmol 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: poornima_15

Beautiful os😃the rain the kiss😳so romantics😉

U write everything so perfect that I could actually imagine each and every thing happening in front of my eyes😊and similarly the emotions could be felt👏
And Happy birthday to u🤗

thanks poornma 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: alisha17

Awesome os

Loved it
Thnku for the pm

thanks alisha 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snow12345654321

sorry for late wishes

IF THERE'S DOUBLE ICING ON IT. IT'S YOUR CAKE.
IF THERE'S A SONG SUNG. IT'S FOR YOU...
IF THERE ARE BIRTHDAY HATS THE BIGGEST IS YOURS...
IT'S IS ALL ABOUT YOU.
BRING ON THE CELEBRATION!!!!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!!!🥳


One word "beautiful", 😃Really really loved😳😳. Nisha's subcouncious convo was awesome. Their friendship is amazingly described , very cute. Her love for kabir , n plus point was even kabir loved her. i love the way you express every emotion, that the reader can actually feel it.
you have got wonderful writing skills.👏..keep writing. I wish one day all your stories get published coz its worth reading n no. of times.



awww... thank u so much dear 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: neha_zamia500

Happy birthday mansi (idk if spelled it right so, sorry) may God bless you, gives u all the happiness, may God gives u a lot more strength for writing[LOl] and may God gives you more ideas...all the best for your future..

The story was awesome.. though I have to read it again but it's really good..

thanks jamia 😃 😆

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