NiBir TS- When Destiny Brought us Together Again (Part3-Page 14) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tumhe rakha Duaan mein ...

Tumhe chipaya Dil mein ...

Tu jo chod gaya mujhe...

Bas khwayishen bachi hai...

Aur Dil ke tukde baaki hai...

Kabir asked Avni to handle the students and went in his personal RH. He opened the door and stared at her beautiful smile in the photograph which hung on one of the walls, while the other three had mirrors.

*Flashback*

Both were in the same college where sparks flew between them and they became the "most romantic couple of the college"

But Nisha's grandfather was not ready to accept Kabir as he had left his family to follow his dreams. Dadaaji wanted a boy from a well-to-do and settled background for his granddaughter, while Kabir was struggling to become a choreographer, which was the reason behind Nisha-Dadaaji's strained relationship. Dolly and Kirti, Nisha's cousins, and Dolly's husband Saurav supported them. Nisha's only support, her father, had met with a car accident when she was 10, so every decision of Nisha's life was taken by Dadaaji.

After graduation, Kabir got a job as a choreographer in a Dance Academy, but he had to leave for his friend's marriage to Shimla, and when he was returning back, he received Nisha's message.

"Kabir, this is my last message to u. I dnt want to keep any contact wid u as I hav decided to get married to Shekhar, whom Dadaaji has chosen for me. Aur main jaanti hoon, woh joh bhi karenge, mere bhale ke liye karenge..."

That's how NiBir ended. Kabir was broken. He wanted to prove to Nisha that she had done a huge mistake by breaking up, so was hell determine to become a famous choreographer. After struggling for a year, he finally fulfilled his wish.

*Flashback ends*

Nisha entered the rehearsal hall, to see Kabir sitting on the floor with tears in his eyes. But she was shocked to see her image on the wall. Kabir sensed her presence and shouted, "GET OUT! GO AWAY!"

Nisha-Sir, woh actually... (she moved closer to him)

Kabir- What is it?

He stood up and walked closer to her, and she, in fear started taking backward steps. She felt her back hit the hard wall, so looked at Kabir, whose eyes had anger blazing in them.

Kabir- Woh actually kya?

Nisha- (stammering) Event...ready...venue...

Kabir- I don't give a damn about it...about you...

She closed her eyes as she felt the hatred in his voice, but her tears trickled down her cheeks. Kabir wiped them. She felt his warm fingers on her cheeks so opened his eyes and looked at his eyes, which were now milder. She touched his cheek. He held her hand in his and caressed it.

Nisha felt her breath faster as he caressed her hand, just like the old times. It was perfect to remember the good time they spent in each other's arms, smiling, laughing, blushing, teasing, flirting...loving each other.

Kabir- Kyun Nisha? Kyun mere saath aisa kiya?

His question brought her out of her trance. She pushed him and ran out of the rehearsal hall. Kabir looked at her retreating figure and wiped another tear that was forming in his eyes.

Nisha waved her hand at the auto, and as it stopped, climbed in it and hoped that as the auto moved away from the academy, she would move away from the memories, but just couldn't.

Here, Kabir calmed himself down and joined Avni and the students. After teaching them for an hour, he exited the academy and sat in his car. He drove, but his mind wasn't on the road, but was lost in the memories of Nisha, and when he focused back on the road, he was shocked to see that he had just missed hitting a man. He applied the brakes but the man fell on the road.

Cursing himself, Kabir got down from the car, and went to help the man. He helped the man stand and stared at him shock.

Kabir- (shocked) Dadaaji, Aap?

Dadaaji was first shocked, but the shock was replaced with anger. He turned to leave, but Kabir noticed blood trickling down from his elbow.

Kabir- (holding his hand) Dadaaji, aapke haat mein toh chot aayi hai, please aap mere saath chaliye, main first aid karta hoon...

Dadaaji - (pulling his hand out of his grip) Yeh zakhm toh uss dard ke saamne kuch bhi nahi, jo tumne aur Nishu ne hume diya hai...

Kabir stared at him in confusion. "Are you serious? It was your grand daughter, who chose to obey you and left me, and I have hurt you?"He said in his mind, but his anger was nothing compared to his guilt for injuring a man, so forced Dadaaji to get in the car. As Kabir did the first aid, Dadaaji spoke, but more to himself.

Dadaaji - Kitne sapne dekhe the humne Nishu ke liye...woh jab settle ho jaayegi, tab uski shaadi tumse karvaunga...Poori samaaj tumhare rishte ko maanega...Par tum dono ne?

Kabir was confused. If Dadaaji had accepted their relationship, why did Nisha say that she was getting married to Shekhar? What was going on? Who was lying? The man infront of him, who was just cursing his fate, or his girlfriend, who never gave a proper explanation for leaving him.

Kabir finished the first aid, and offered to drop Dadaaji, but he denied and got down from the car.

Dadaaji - Nisha se bol dena, ki jo usne kiya, uske liye shaayad sab log usse maaf kare, par uska Dadaaji kabhi nahi karega...aur mera bharosa todne ke liye shukriya...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
res me first😉
unres
awesome update shibu👏
nisha lied to kabir in the name of dadji😲
and dadji told kabir the truth😲
excited for the next chapter cont soon😆

Edited by mishrialways - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
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Shibu it was shocking update😲

Nishu ne Kabiraa se jhoot bola😲

Daadaji ne ye sab kya bola😲

Bhagvaan k lie jaldi next chappy de dena...I cant wait to know the truth...vaise maine kuch kuch guess kia hai k kya hua hoga😉...lets see am I ryt or wrong😆
Edited by Roopsha_98 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Hey Shibu !!!
Superb Update ...!!!
Really Very Nice ...!!!
And i can see there are a lot of things which are hidden and need an explaination ...!!!
Waiting for the next update ...!!!
Continue soon ...!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Superb update..👏
Why did nisha lie...?😲
Very well written!
Continue soon pls
Want to know wht happens next😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Woah! this was so interesting.. The suspense is building up huh? I have a hunch of what might happen.. But you never know..

Thanks for the PM.. Continue soon 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Awesome update 👏 👏
Very nice... Loved it 😳
Nibir rehearsal hall scene was awesome 😳
So many secrets 🤓 want to know them so please update soonest...!!!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
mindblowing totally..
too much of suspense.. oh god..!!
nisha.. y z she hiding thngs 4m kabir.. wat all z, happening..
continue it d soonest plzz..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Interesting...bhery interesting!

Shibu betu, you have managed to keep the audience in suspense!

Loving this!

Why Nisha left kabir is the question right now in my mind? What was daadu saying!?

Waiting for your next update betu...!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Awesome 👏... nisha ne kyu kya ayesa jab daadu b maan Gaye the 😕 ... update soon 😊
Ek aur baat jisse mujhe darr lag rha h banner me kabir ka hospital wala pic kyu h 😕😲. ...Jldi update karo ab to I can't wait... and not to forget the banner is awesome😊
Edited by poornima_15 - 9 years ago

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