NiBir TS- When Destiny Brought us Together Again (Part3-Page 14) - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Awesome update shibu 👏
Very well written
Loved the shayari 😳
Thanks for the pm
please update next part soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Part 2- Nice update😃
Firstly, love the shayari in the beginning of the chapter👏👏👏

"most romantic couple of the college"- Loved this line❤️

Nisha's message and Nibir breakup

Kabir's personal RH has Nishu's picture😳😃😃 Just shws how much he values her😃😳
Glad to knw ki Kabir ki life mein abhi bhi Nisha is an integral part😃😉
Dadaji was against him

I love the fact that in 2-3 lines u are able to give us the backdrop of the story so well👏👏👏

Kabir sensed her presence and shouted, "GET OUT! GO AWAY!"- He sensed her presence

Nisha-Sir, woh actually... (she moved closer to him)

Kabir- What is it?

He stood up and walked closer to her, and she, in fear started taking backward steps. She felt her back hit the hard wall, so looked at Kabir, whose eyes had anger blazing in them.

Kabir- Woh actually kya?

Nisha- (stammering) Event...ready...venue...

Kabir- I don't give a damn about it...about you..- Loved Nibir's intensity here😃😃😃

Waise no matter what he says, his actions convey that he still affected by her and he still cares for her😳😉

She closed her eyes as she felt the hatred in his voice, but her tears trickled down her cheeks. Kabir wiped them. She felt his warm fingers on her cheeks so opened his eyes and looked at his eyes, which were now milder. She touched his cheek. He held her hand in his and caressed it.- This part was lovely Love how no matter how much he tries to stay angry at her, he cannot see her in pain or tears Love the way he almost unconsciously wiped away her tears😳😳

Nisha felt her breath faster as he caressed her hand, just like the old times.- This was so adorable😳😳

He said in his mind, but his anger was nothing compared to his guilt for injuring a man, so forced Dadaji to get in the car. - Love this quality of Kabir😳😉

Dadaji had accepted their relationship😲

Loved the last part😃 Kabir kya hum sab bhi kaafi confused hain😆😆 So the good thing is she didnt marry Shekhar😃

All in all, a pleasant read😉

Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Awesome update shibu 👏
Full too cliffhanger 😆
Update soon😈
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Dear Shibu

Story is superb and it is full of suspenses. And i think i have completely read your 2 stories both were ff sorry i forgot names of both the stories 😳 but both the stories were awesome. After reading your it give me smiles on my face.
Do write more.
Please update this story soon too.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Res

Unres

Shibu it was shocking update😲

Nishu ne Kabiraa se jhoot bola😲

Daadaji ne ye sab kya bola😲

Bhagvaan k lie jaldi next chappy de dena...I cant wait to know the truth...vaise maine kuch kuch guess kia hai k kya hua hoga😉...lets see am I ryt or wrong😆


Thanks Roopsha😊
keep guessing😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: mishrialways

res me first😉

unres
awesome update shibu👏
nisha lied to kabir in the name of dadji😲
and dadji told kabir the truth😲
excited for the next chapter cont soon😆


Thanks Ritu😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Amina...

Hey Shibu !!!
Superb Update ...!!!
Really Very Nice ...!!!
And i can see there are a lot of things which are hidden and need an explaination ...!!!
Waiting for the next update ...!!!
Continue soon ...!!!


Thanks Amina😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Snow12345654321

Superb update..👏

Why did nisha lie...?😲
Very well written!
Continue soon pls
Want to know wht happens next😃


Thanks dear😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Woah! this was so interesting.. The suspense is building up huh? I have a hunch of what might happen.. But you never know..

Thanks for the PM.. Continue soon 😆


Thanks Krishi😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Awesome update 👏 👏

Very nice... Loved it 😳
Nibir rehearsal hall scene was awesome 😳
So many secrets 🤓 want to know them so please update soonest...!!!!!


Thanks Anmol😊

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