NiBir TS- When Destiny Brought us Together Again (Part3-Page 14) - Page 3

Originally posted by: mishri0209

superb

plz update d nxt soon

Originally posted by: Amina...

Awesome Start ...!!!
Loved It ...!!!
Continue Soon ...!!!

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Amazing start beti... 😉

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.

So glad you're back to writing shibu! 🤗

Had missed your stories so much!

That was a wonderful start!

Kabir being so rude and cold towards Nisha was indeed saddening 😔

But, that's a nice twist! Coz mostly we see a fun-loving Kabir in the stories.

So Nisha and Kabir have a past that traces back to two years from now! And that's the reason for this drastic change in Kabir's attitude? Interesting!

Nisha's flashback was very well written! 👍🏼

The starting lines were so reflective of the update and the last few lines where you have said that she would cry for hours when the city slept blissfully took the cake for me! Lovely!👍🏼 Showed how emotionally drained she would be at the end of the day due to Kabir's behaviour.

Eager to know the reason behind this change in Kabir and what is it that Nisha did that has made him so rigid.

Do continue soon and thanks for pm 😊

Originally posted by: Crazysoha

Awesome start shibu 👏
Very well written
I'm Waiting for the next update!!!

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

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Very interesting start Shibu👏...Nishu ne aisa kya kia k Kabiraa itnaaa change ho gaya

Kabiraa's dance partner AVNI😲🤣

Please continue soon & thanx for the pm😊

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

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Very interesting start Shibu👏...Nishu ne aisa kya kia k Kabiraa itnaaa change ho gaya

Kabiraa's dance partner AVNI😲🤣

Please continue soon & thanx for the pm😊

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Thanks Roopsha😉

Agar,tu chahe toh Anvi.ki shaadi karu Kabir😉