NiBir TS- When Destiny Brought us Together Again (Part3-Page 14)

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Niha0606
Loved it shibu :):)
Update soon:):)

Thanks Niha😛

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Sujayricky
Superb start 👏
Loved it
Update soon

Thanks Sujay😉

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac
Woah! That was one beautiful start... I am so interested to read what had happened in the past.. I don't know what to say.. What must have Nisha done that Kabir just changed like this? Loved this part..
Update soon! And thanks for the PM 😳

Thanks Krishi😳

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: anu012
Awsome update
loved it

thnks for pm

Thanks Anu😃

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arviabhigya

@arviabhigya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

tere uss story pe mere comments abhi shuru bhi nahin hui hai aur tune nayi story likh di🤣

good beta😃

padhti hun aaram se😉

but comments mat expect mat karna😆

abhi no more comments on ur new stories😆🤣

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mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

mujhe khud nahi pata nisha ne kya kiya🤣
will continue ASAP😆

soch soch kuch na kuch mil jayega🤣

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tanisha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

superb

plz update d nxt soon

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Amina...

@Amina...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Awesome Start ...!!!
Loved It ...!!!
Continue Soon ...!!!

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.vishrutha.

@.vishrutha.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

So glad you're back to writing shibu! 🤗

Had missed your stories so much!

That was a wonderful start!

Kabir being so rude and cold towards Nisha was indeed saddening 😔

But, that's a nice twist! Coz mostly we see a fun-loving Kabir in the stories.

So Nisha and Kabir have a past that traces back to two years from now! And that's the reason for this drastic change in Kabir's attitude? Interesting!

Nisha's flashback was very well written! 👍🏼

The starting lines were so reflective of the update and the last few lines where you have said that she would cry for hours when the city slept blissfully took the cake for me! Lovely!👍🏼 Showed how emotionally drained she would be at the end of the day due to Kabir's behaviour.

Eager to know the reason behind this change in Kabir and what is it that Nisha did that has made him so rigid.

Do continue soon and thanks for pm 😊