NiBir Story-My Hell My Heaven epilogue up - Page 36

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.

Very nice update ritika!

Nisha - Vasu convo was very well written! 👍🏼 and their bonding too was well described!

Kabir listend to their entire convo? 😔

Aww he is trying so much to keep her happy and safe!

Ok did the doc just utter a prophecy!!

The last part had me all emotional yar!!

I know Kabir's decision is logical but still, he has decided to deny himself the joy of fatherhood and not to experience those stages with Nisha just for their safety! 😒

Kabir is ready to walk away from them if he feels he is a threat?! FOREVER!!

Atleast for this I want him to be cured of it! If not completely atleast mostly?

I know its your story and u probably have decided the course of it too! But, i feel so sad for Kabir!! 💔

Anyways, do continue with what u have in mind dear, i know u too love kabir too much to let him suffer 😉 (lol, a hopeful me 😆)

Continue soon and thanks for pm 😊

Originally posted by: mishrialways

chalo aapka baby doubt toh over ho gaya😆

lol mujhe nhi yaad kya update diya tha uss waqt and you remember👏

very sincere🤣

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

50 pages complete🥳...congo songo🥳

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

ya mujhe ache se yaad hai tune bola tha 1 week k baad ake continue karungi but late continue kia tha🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

It's very nice :)
Absolutely lovely...
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon :)

Originally posted by: Crazysoha

Awesome..very well written 😳
nibir 😭
Mujhe Asia kyun feel Ho rha hai k tu is story ki ending sad wali karegi
Continue soon 😊