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@Klaustrophillic

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#191

woaaahhh!!! i am seriously in love with this!

i hate arjun, hope that devil gets out of kabir soon😡

i love kabir, his love, care, concern☺️

nibir☺️☺️☺️

continue soon ritika! i am in love with this! seriously, seriously!

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Anya

@elysianights

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#192

Very nice update...

Poor nisha...😒

Kabir is very caring...

But arjun is just opposite of kabir...😡

Continue soon...

Thank for the pm...😊

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1060675

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#193

Ritu ritu ritu ritu this update was just amazing👏👏
Ritu I just luved it...n actually asli story toh ab suru hui hai😉

NIBIR wedding😳
Kabir's surprise

But vo dark Kabiraa I mean Arjun😡

Kabir was so sad😭...but why fear when Nishu is here😉

NIBIR's first night☺️☺️

But mujhe pata tha next morning kuch toh hoga but ye toh kuch zaida hi😭

But Nishu se bhi zaida Kabiraa hurt tha sach sunne k baad😭😭

Next updates bohot interesting hone vale hai😉...update asap😉...abhi Raabta se bhi zaida interest mujhe iss story main hai😉

PS= ye Nisha ka baby pakka Kabir hai...I'm 100% sure😉...am I ryt or am i ryt??🤣

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janvi

@janvi1018

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#194

superb!!!!👍🏼👍🏼👏

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Krishi

@Black_Maniac

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#195

Great going Ritika.. I am enjoying the story a lot.. Keep writing and thanks for the PM..

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shrutigaur37

@shrutigaur37

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#196

it was an amazing update..
u hv described d emotions th' which dey both r going very beautifully...
kabir had hurt himself as he is cause of nisha's pain..he loves her a lot
felt bad for nisha as arjun is a hurtless person..

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Soundharya

@Feltonate

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#197

awesome yaar ..

kabir loves Nisha so much

but this arjun i love him ..

nice name yaar

nibir first night ..

superbly written

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Niharika

@Niha0606

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#198

Ritu loved loved loved the update
It was awesome yaar
Specially the last sentence ...
Kabiraaa love u
Arjun hate u but still love u ...I think this was nisha's condition...

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

@___Neha___

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#199

res ek baar phir 🤣

Unres

Emotional one...

Kabir ne ghar kitna acha sajaya 😳

I hate arjun 😡

I so wish yar.. Nisha ko kumfu ata aur wo at least khud ko protect karleti kamse kam!! Bcoz arjun ki aise harkato me Mera to usey marne ka mann hota but he kabir only 🥱

Usko harm nai karsakte but still nisha ko self defense kyu nai sikhaya? 🤔

Last scene 😭

Nisha ka bandage wala hand n dusre me bangles... Reality of her life!!

And kabir also burnt hi hands😭

Edited by RoshniVdian786 - 8 years ago

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mishrialways

@mishrialways

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: Sujayricky
Res before pm 😈
Unres after pm 🤣

Superb update ritika 👏
Nibir ki shaadi hogayi
Kabir surprises was superb
Arjun name phir se 🤣
But arjun is very bad 😡
Poor nisha ab aur kya kya hoga
Nibir first night ☺️ imagination power 😈

"That I was the first time something like that had happen and we both knew it wouldn't be last".
This line is truly give precap about future parts of this story 👏

Nibir ko baby bhi hogaya hai 😲 that is surprising 😆

Ritika this story became my second favourite story of your stories 😳
Update soon