NIBIR TS- Bol Do Na Zara ( Epilogue updated pg 25) completed - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb update..
m curious to know kabir weird plan..
plz update soon...
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Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

superb update..
m curious to know kabir weird plan..
plz update soon...


Thank u 😊
Kabir plan u will got to know soon!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Super update thanks for pm
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Originally posted by: nibir143

Super update thanks for pm

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Thank you everyone for liking and commenting 😳
Thank you so much 🤗



Part 2b


Kabir was still laughing..
Kutte hasna band kar or jawab de" said getting annoyed saurav
Maine kaha tha na main bhi kabir hun" said kabir after controlling his laugh
Matalb ??" Asked saurav
Matalb...


Flashback


After saurav left kabir called his mom and told her about his new plan to open a academy and he asked viraj help which he refuse to help him and told his mom to ask dad and by any cost he want nisha to help him off course with highly melodramatic way which his mother can't say no to him as he was her jiger ka tukda..
She immediately call arjun told him to help kabir to do what he want to which arjun can't refuse becoz his lady love asked him something and he will not do aisa ho hi nhi sakta..
He called viraj and scolded him for not helping his son and give threaten him that he will fired him and make sure that viraj didn't get another job anywhere...
For sake of his job viraj disheartenly send nisha to help kabir..
And when saurav come got shock to see nisha in front of his eyes in 1 day


Flashback end

Too much you are kabir too much " said laughing saurav and then kabir also join him
U know na Its not going to be easy " said saurav after laughing heart out
I know " said kabir being serious

Outside of the office


Nisha was going back after asking viraj..
All the way she kept thinking about kabir only.. for the first time she felt relax around him all calm down.. She felt that she know him.. But how's that possible Maine toh use aaj pehli baar dekha" thought nisha "kuch jyada baat bhi nhi ki sirf apna or mera bataya or kuch formal baaten ki bas par uski aankhe kuch keh rahi thi kuch toh pata nhi kya puchna cha rahi thi mujhse pata nhi kya ???" his hazel brown eyes kept hunting her.. but don't know why she felt deep connection with kabir..
At night
Kabir's room
Kabir looking at nisha's old photo he click when he was stalking her
Toh finally aaj mujhe dekh liya aapne " stated kabir
Kitna dard hai Teri aankho me nisha.. Kaise chupa leti hai tu ye sab kuch.. Tere haat pe nishan bhout taklif de rahe hai mujhe I felt like I will die.. In sab ki wajha kya hai main jaan ke rahunga akhir q tu itna sab kuch seh rahi hai Jo kisi se nhi darti thi vo kisi ke aahat se darr rahi hai or iss problem se tujhe nikal ke rahunga " said kabir in painful voice
Kept her photo back to drawer and locked it and try to sleep but sleep was far away from his eyes

At nisha's room
Viraj was sleeping peacefully and nisha was trying to sleep but she was not able to do so becoz her body is aching due to lots of work and off course becoz her wounds so she thought apply some medicine on them so she can sleep so she tip to toe go washroom and apply cream on them.. After coming back she lay down quietly and let sleep take her in her dream land...

kya bataaun dil khud hi najaane kaisa mehka mehka ehsaas hai
aate jaate in lamhon ki lehron mein kahin na kahin to kuch khaas hai


Nisha was wearing beautiful red colors one piece which landed just above her knees.. She looked gorgeous in it.. She was at beach..

na jaane kaisi hai yeh madhoshi, hai kaisa nasha
hawa se kare baatein yeh dil kyun, kya hai vajaah
jahaan yeh saara, apna sa lage, sapna sa lage
haa-aa-aan


Few area are beautifully decorated for a date.. With the help of Luminaria Candles Nisha was written on sand and signal to go right direction she smile on this and turn to right what she saw.. She got lost in that beauty.. Fire lamps were on floor decorated in circular way.. In center there was a table for two which was nicely decorated.. Sun was almost set the fire lamp was giving special effect...

najaane chala hai kya paane, laga hai kyun gaane
my heart goes o dhim tana,
najaane chala hai kya paane, laga hai kyun gaane
my heart goes o dhim tana

And there he was her life, her love, her secret admirer in black suit waiting for her to come...

thodi thodi betaabiyaan bhi
thoda thoda dil ko sukoon hai
thodi thodi bechainiyaan bhi
thoda thoda chaaya junoon hai


She slowly started walking toward him but today when she was walking toward him his face going clear or she is getting face of her secret admirer..

na jaane kaisi hai yeh madhoshi, hai kaisa nasha
hawa se kare baatein yeh dil kyun, kya hai vajaah
jahaan yeh saara, apna sa lage, sapna sa lage
haa-aa-aan


At the time when she was face to face him his face was crystal clear.. he had that hazle brown eyes which was hunting her since from morning..


najaane chala hai kya paane, laga hai kyun gaane
my heart goes o dhim tana,
najaane chala hai kya paane, laga hai kyun gaane
my heart goes o dhim tana
my heart goes o dhim tana
my heart goes o dhim tana


I love you " he said in his husky voice.. She remain frozen
He hold her hand and pulled her toward him..
He put strain of hair aside and cupping her face with one hand as another was around her waist and her both hand were on his broad chest.. Pulling her little more lowering his head to capture her rosy lips... There lips about to meet when...She woke up with jerk... what was that ?? She saw this dream thousand of times with her secret admirer which face was not clear but today she saw him.. kabir... She saw kabir... And why so becoz after her marriage she never saw her secret admirer coming in her dreams then why today ?? and why kabir was in place of her secret admirer??
These questions were kept ringing her mind.. She looked at clock which say its time to start her daily work before viraj wake up..
There is nothing new to this Morning.. it started as usual fight between viraj n nisha which never going to end and as always nisha be quite listen him.. If not he will go violent..
It time to go office viraj don't want that nisha go but he can't help it so he took her with him and told her finish this as soon as possible..

In kabir's cabin
Kabir was bit late.. But he had given message that nisha should wait in his cabin... here Nisha was lost what she saw in her dream this morning.. She was wondering y kabir come in her dream and in the place of her secret admirer.. Y she feel deep connection with him... Y kabir why she say it aloud hold her face with both hands.. She was sitting on couch of his cabin and in front of couch there was a glass table.. She looked her image in it.. This is wrong thinking of other guy is wrong she is married now she reminded herself get ready for her work...
Kabir enter in his cabin looked at nisha with all love and stopped his track waiting nisha to look back him.. Nisha was so lost in her world that she didn't see kabir had come feeling some one gaze on her she looked up and saw him smiling at her..
Gu... gu... Gud mrng sir " she said with difficulty all getting nervous and scared..
Relax nisha relax I m not going to eat u n gud mrng " said kabir
Come let's talk about our project" said kabir settling himself in chair asked are to sit in front of him..
She did as asked.. She took file and started telling him about archery and shooting what they needed at first for the academy all the while a cute smile played on her lips as after long she was talking about this..
And here kabir was lost in her smile.. Feeling his heat gaze she looked up and saw him looking at her so she started getting panic... Seeing change her expression kabir come out of his trance..
Are aise kaam nhi chalega.. Tum mujhse itna ghabrati q ho ?? Asked kabir
Nhi nhi sir " getting all panic nisha said sir I want to complete it fast as soon as possible so please let's focus" continued nisha
This shocked kabir she wanted to go from here no she can't go till he didn't complete his task
Nisha main bhi toh bhi wahi keh raha hun aise kaam nhi chalega jitni jaldi tumhe hai mujhe bhi jaldi hai toh q na hum friends ban jaaye " said kabir after recovering from shock and forward his hand
This time to nisha get shock here she wanted to avoid him and he is asking for friendship...
Are tum meri dost ban jao gi na toh we can talk each other comfortably or hum apna kaam bhi easily kar sakte hai" innocently said by kabir
"Please nisha please yeh haat tham lo or khich lunga main tumhe har dard se apne pass rakhunga sari burayiyo se dur... please bas ek baar yeh haat mila lo.. " thought kabir waiting for her reply

Milaun ki nhi... nhi nhi muje dur rehna hai ise " thought nisha and looked at him with expressionless face.. Looking his pleading face don't what come her mind she give her hand to kabir in trance...
Don't know where this friendships are taking them ???



Note - song is from navya TV serial
Edited by Anmol333 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Mastermind kabir 😆
awesome update
lovely every bit of the story so much... 😊
Continue soon
excited for the next part 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update 👏
Kabir is very big k 😈
Is plan was superb
Arjun toh ghulame- A- wife nikala🤣
Viraj torture nisha 😡
Nisha ab dosti kar lo kabir phir baad mai shaadi bhi kar lena 😉
Update soon kyu bolu jab aaj hi update karne waali ho 😆
Sorry for late unres 😃
Edited by Sujayricky - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Superb update...make NiBir frndz fastly...and do update the soonest
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I won't say anything now... 😉 😉
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Originally posted by: Zamiahurain002

I won't say anything now... 😉 😉

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