NIBIR TS- Bol Do Na Zara ( Epilogue updated pg 25) completed - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: TASYAM

oh my god yeh kya tha 😲😲😲
its awesome re👏
👏👏👏👏👏

no words to say anything... I am shocked..itna lamba update... .😲
😲😲😲


Nibir😳

becoz... ke age kya tha re something khatarnak i am scared...

jaldi jaldi update karo bhaya i can't wait...😉


Thank u so much ☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2a


There she was wearing again royal blue color anarkali suite... Wearing bangles in both hands. Light make up her looking gorgeous just like before she look but there is something more she was wearing she was manglsutra and vermilion on her hair partition ...
Seeing this kabir ground slipped away from his leg.. Many emotion was going on happy to see her after such a long.. Sad she is married to another guy.. Pain he lost her.. Anger she cheated on him.. All of this only one was coming out that extremely broken kabir..
He couldn't take it more so he immediately left.. That night was very dark.. There is no hope of ray or no morning of this night.. For both nisha and kabir..

Next day

Saurav come to meet kabir.. He know kabir was extremely broken from yesterday scene and he need a friend right now and also right to know something more which saurav saw yesterday...
At kabir room saurav enter..
S- hey kabir in low voice
Kabir who was sitting on bed head low in deep thought look up then again down get lost in his world again..
S- kabirrr... And shook him little
K - I lost her.. I lost her only these 3 words escape from his mouth
S- kabirr.. And hugged him tight
Kabir again started crying in arms of his best friend..
S - main kuch batane aaya hun sun meri baat.. Nishaa.. Kal raat...
K - she is married now...
Listent to me kabir" said frustrated saurav
K- what is left now ??? Equally frustrated
S- jaisa dikh raha hai vaisa nhi hai... Kuch baat hai kabir nisha ke shadi ke piche... Getting lost in some where..
Kabir trying to read out his expression but couldn't get it.. So he asked " tu kehna kya chah raha hai ??"
Coming out from his world saurav said " kal raat party me kuch hua tha.. Mujhe kuch samajh nhi aa raha!!"
Tu saaf saaf baat jar sauro please " said annoying kabir
OK main Jo dekha vahi bata deta hun"

Flashback

Nisha was talking to the girl when a tall man come to girls and excuses himself with nisha and take her corner of the party hall where no one can see them..
Badi hasi aa rahi hai khub maza aa raha hai nhi ?? " asked the man
Ab kya hua aap KO " asked scared nisha
Mujhe kya hua mujhe kya hua haan tu kya kar rahi thi waha par... Pati KO khana de use puche ki khana khaya ki nhi.. " said that man holding nisha hand very tightly causing her cry out in pain..
Please viraj chodiye.. Aap hi toh mujhe waha chod ke gaye the apne colleagues ke pass or...""
Holding her face tightly causing her stop saying anything and said angrily " muh mat chala apna jyada kahi lejane layak nhi hai tu ek toh galti karti hai or zubaan bhi lada rahi hai "
Suddenly a waiter come viraj immediately compose himself and started acting " ohh baby kuch laga hai yha par " said cleaning her chicks..
Hum abhi Ghar chalenge "" declare viraj and started walking and nisha following him hiding her wounds...
This all have witness by saurav who was shell shooked seeing this scene...

Flashback end

Kabir who was quietly listening him said " aisa nhi ho sakta Jo ladki dusro ke insaaf ke liye ladti ho vo apne sath aisa kaise hone de sakti hai.."
Exactly yaad hai vo dowry..."
I remember Everything sauro bilkul mere wajood ki tarha..." Cut off by kabir fresh tear welled up..
Saurav placed is hand on his shoulder and squeeze it.. Assuring him little..
Vahi toh main keh raha hun kuch toh gadbad hai " exclaimed saurav
Kaise pata chalega Sab kuch " said kabir
Then he looked at lost saurav.. After a while saurav looked back to kabir and understood what was he up to and started shouting " no no main kuch nhi karne "
Kabir immediately said " Maine aaj tak tujhse kuch nhi manga meri ek choti si wish puri nhi karega" in his melodramatic way
Teri choti si wish har baar meri jaan leti hai or aaj tak kuch nhi manga bacha kya hai mangne KO hun?? " said saurav sarcastically
And their usual fight got started which end up getting agreed saurav which he will give all info about nisha .. Again
After a week sauarv get info about nisha..
Viraj singhania is name of her husband work as HR in kabir's company ( what a coincident na 😉😆 ) get married with nisha only one year ago.. Lived happily married life in front of society.. But something else nisha's wounds were saying but know one acknowledge it...

mujhe nisha se baat karni hogi " said kabir sitting in his office
S- but kaise kabir nisha toh tujhe jaanti nhi or viraj use jayda bhaar bhi nhi aane deta..
Toh nisha toh aa sakti hai na mere pass or viraj hi bhejega " said smirking kabir
And dial call somewhere.. After cutting the call saurav said "Karna kya chata hai tu "
Just wait and watch my friend" said kabir with his trademark smile..
They were talking when they heard knock on the door..
May I come in sir " a voice come
Yes " said kabir
Oh Mr viraj please have a sit..
Thank u sir " said viraj taking sit..
Mr. Viraj main ek academy kholna chata hun.. Archery and shooting academy.." Said kabir in very serious tone
Good sir but how can I help u??" Asked viraj
Maine suna hai ki aap ne famous archery player.. Kya naam hai uska hmm " kabir acted as he trying to remember name
Nisha Gangwal " this was saurav trying to hide his smile seeing kabir's acting skills
Yes nisha gangwal right ?? " asked kabir to viraj who nodded in yes..
Kabir continued " so you can send her for helping me as I know lil thing About this she can help me set out this academy as she is player of this sports who have won many prizes if I m not wrong Mr. Viraj "
Sir humara business is different link or yeh sports is different..." Kabir cut him off and said in little angry tone "Mr. Viraj main I know main kya kar raha hun so please can you send her ?? "
I am sorry sir she have no time for this... she have stopped playing this games " viraj said in disgust tone and continued " I think I can't help you in this sir I am sorry " he left kabir cabin immediately giving no chance to speck kabir...

Kabir was hell angry now his eyes were red in anger.. he closed his eyes momentary to control his anger..
Bhout bada wala hai aise haat nhi aayega " said saurav
Toh main kabir hun tu bas dekhta ja" said kabir as something mischief hit his k mind and he smirk 😈
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Next day

Saurav as usual come to meet kabir his office at lunch time as both always eat lunch together sometime kabir go to saurav office or sometime saurav go... To spend boys time together..
Hey kabir... " stopped in mid as he got a shock.. no no 440 volt ka jhatka laga use... His jaw dropped almost touching floor..
Kabir smirk seeing his reaction while the person looked at wired face..
Kabir said to person it is lunch time please go back we will talk it tommorw while person nodded and left...
Saurav was still in shocked his jaw was still wide open.. Seeing this kabir couldn't help started laughing after long time...
Saurav recovered and asked kabir "yeh sab kya tha??? Tu aisa kaise kar sakta hai ???"
Edited by Anmol333 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Anmol ki bacchi yeh tune kya kiya 😡
Niraj ki shaadi hogayi 😭 😭
Viraj 😡 bahut dusht hai
But kabir bhi toh k hai 😉
Update soon niraj ko hata nibir ko ek kar 😉
Superb + shocking update 👏
Edited by Sujayricky - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Superb update
Awesomely written yaar
Perfectly left the suspence in the end😉
Please continue soon😃
Thnx for the pm

Edited by Snow12345654321 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Superb update with shocking twist
loved it
cont soon


thnks for pm
Anmol333 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Why ?? Bhout kharab hai..??
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Very nice update very well written good job yarr
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Anmol read both parts together
it was very nice and very well written
I loved it a lot
kabir is nisha's secret admire
both love each other
kabir had to go to London
nisha married to viraj
and nit happy in it

Kabir planning something
update soon
excited to know it
loved sourav and kabir's friendship
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Anmol ki bacchi yeh tune kya kiya 😡
Niraj ki shaadi hogayi 😭 😭
Viraj 😡 bahut dusht hai
But kabir bhi toh k hai 😉
Update soon niraj ko hata nibir ko ek kar 😉
Superb + shocking update 👏



😆 😆
Thank you 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Thank u 😊

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