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Oopsie.. I am really late.. Well I'll be back soonish.. I'll take plenty of time to read it with full satisfaction... 😳
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First of all Happy Holi Niyu 🤗 May the colours of Holi bring different shades in your life...
Now the update! God I don't have enough words... My vocabulary fails me this day... Girl this story made a special place in my heart.. 😳 The little character you created.. I love her so much.. And the way you note her every little movement, describing each of her little feelings wonderfully... The wag Aadhya wanted to be with NiBir, her little hands clapping.. My imaginations were given a boost
I love you so much for this character and for this story... And the most adorable parts were when Nisha and Kabir felt that she looked like a princess... And then Aadhya 'Mumma Pari" It was too cute...
The way Aadhya was shy when Kaira complimented her.. I fell in love with Aadhya all over again 😆 I basically fell for her in each and every part🤣
Now the NiBir part..
Nisha hugging as soon as she saw Aadhya... And then Kabir agreeing with Aadhya on her "Mumma Pari" I loved it all... The typical scene where Kabir was picked up so Nisha couldn't make him wear the varmala...
The heart-touching part was when Nisha let a single tear escape as Kabir filled her hair-partition with vermillion... That tear because she was officially Aadhya's mom... God I almost cried tears of happiness...
And then Kabir entered the room, asking permission.. Oh crap.. You just completed the story. 😲
Thank you so much for this Niyu, it was an amazing experience, reading this!
Love you loads 🤗
Everything was so perfect in the whole story Niyu... Keep writing.. Well an epilogue will complete the story I feel 😳
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First of all Happy Holi Niyu 🤗 May the colours of Holi bring different shades in your life...
Now the update! God I don't have enough words... My vocabulary fails me this day... Girl this story made a special place in my heart.. 😳 The little character you created.. I love her so much.. And the way you note her every little movement, describing each of her little feelings wonderfully... The wag Aadhya wanted to be with NiBir, her little hands clapping.. My imaginations were given a boost
I love you so much for this character and for this story... And the most adorable parts were when Nisha and Kabir felt that she looked like a princess... And then Aadhya 'Mumma Pari" It was too cute...
The way Aadhya was shy when Kaira complimented her.. I fell in love with Aadhya all over again 😆 I basically fell for her in each and every part🤣
Now the NiBir part..
Nisha hugging as soon as she saw Aadhya... And then Kabir agreeing with Aadhya on her "Mumma Pari" I loved it all... The typical scene where Kabir was picked up so Nisha couldn't make him wear the varmala...
The heart-touching part was when Nisha let a single tear escape as Kabir filled her hair-partition with vermillion... That tear because she was officially Aadhya's mom... God I almost cried tears of happiness...
And then Kabir entered the room, asking permission.. Oh crap.. You just completed the story. 😲
Thank you so much for this Niyu, it was an amazing experience, reading this!
Love you loads 🤗
Everything was so perfect in the whole story Niyu... Keep writing.. Well an epilogue will complete the story I feel 😳
Arjun
