NiBir SS || You Complete Me || ( Chp 10 - pg 60) *23/3* COMPLETED - Page 49

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tanya119

Shorryy ... A very big wala sorry ... I was nt able to comment during ur updates ..!!!

But seriously i just loved this story totally
Read it yesterday ... Nd today was gng to comment but u already updated its last part
Anyways ... Thnks fr giving us such a beautiful story filled with cuteness , romance , drama , comedy ... Everything which a story should have!!!
🤗nd thnks fr the pms too !!

Thank yoy Tanya 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anu012

Fantastic update niya
loved it ...❤️
Adhyaa sooo cute
keep writting dear

i want os niya ... plz update soon

thnks for pm

Thanks Anu😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sudiksha10

Awssmmm storyy in luv vd ds story

Adhyaaa nibir bond tooo cute..vl miss Adhya
One of my fvrt stry bn gyi ye
Ab to teeNoo chahiye..Epilogue..Os nd drabble
Nibir ki anniversary gft p itnaa to bntaaa hai na prettyyy plzz
🤗
We K's r bherrryyy bhrryy Laaalllchiii nibir stories k liyee🤣

Thanks😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Amina...

Beautiful Ending Niya ...
Loved it Sooo Much ...
And plz write an Epilogue ...

Thanks😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: star.angel

Superb niya 👏
NibirNibir 😳
Adhya 😳
Kaira is so nice
Finally mirrage done
And last ☺️
Niya m so sad bcz my fav SS ended 🥱
It wz my so fav one
I totally lived it
HSTs off to u 👏

Niyu I want both 😉
Lovy dovy is and lovy dovy epilogue 😳

Thank you 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.

Wonderful update!

The hustle and bustle of a wedding environment, the ritual of the bride and groom not allowed to see each other, Kabir's irritation over it, Aadhya's confusion on not being able to play with her parents together, Jwala trying to divert her mind by showing her the clothes and accessories were very well described and written! 👍🏼
The Kaira complimenting the oh so adorable Aadhaya and she giving a shy smile in return scene was soo cute! 😳
The next sisters - kaira - Aadhya moment was very nice!
Dolly -Kirti fighting over a necklace and pulling Jwala too in the confusion, a bored Nisha immediately lighting up seeing her cute little princess and the others adoring these two, the trio leaving with Aadhya to see the baraat, Kaira helping Nisha and Nisha opening up to her were lovely!! 👏
Aadhya enjoying her dad's baraat, Kabir adoring his little angel, him being mesmerised and awestruck on seeing Nisha were too good!
All the wedding rituals were very well described!
Loved that cheek kiss Kabir gave Nisha after tieing the mangalsutra 😉 and that lone tear of Nisha when Kabir applied Sindoor, that she would now become Aadhya's mom in every sense.
The post wedding activities like selfies, wishes, blessings were again very nicely described by you! 👍🏼
The last scene of Nisha Kabir completing each other and being elated that now they are Aadhya's official parents was beautifully written! ❤️
A perfect ending!
Now, coming to your question, I would love to read an epilogue!
This is the cutest story I've read so far!
Everything in this story, be it the pacing, the bonds / emotions portrayed, the dialogues/convo were brilliantly penned!
The Kabir-Nisha-Aadhya bond is what I adored a lot in this story and will definitely miss it! 😔 Especially Aadhya's cuteness! 😒
Would love to read more stories from you!
So, please do write more and thanks for pming me throughout! 😊

You have always given me the best comments through out this SS thank you so much for that🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Fareesha

Second chapter was too good yaar

aww both of them were sleeping peacefully
but that stupid speed breaker disturbed kabir's sleep loved the way kabir placed his hand under her head and prevented it from falling
nisha smiling in her sleep and kabir adoring her sleeping beauty
kabir remebered about her back injury and got worried
He wrapped his jacket around her aww
I'm loving this caring and daring kabira lol
Loved kabir's bond with ghangwals
J nibir
lol and I'm liking this j viraj
I'm curious to know about kabir's past
But thank God this story is already complete and I don't have wait for updates I will read other chapters tomorrow and will surely commnet and sorry for being super late and next time I'll try to comment as soon as possible
please PM me whenever you write or update something I would love to read and I'll buddy you..

Thank you so much, I have sent you a buddy request please accept it😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mishri0209

Awsm ending

Loved d story
U did wonderful job
Really gonna miss reading dis read
And dis tym nt jst nibir nt adhya as well
Going 2 miss dis
Bt it was a superb ending

Thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: plaksha2002

Mind blowing.. Awsm.. Superb.. Arrrhhh faaabbb 👏

Yaar kyu khatam kiya ye story 😭 this was an neva ending story..
We'll miss nibir. Adhyaa nd this story sooo so so so so so very much


Nd I want OS

Thank you😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

superb ending..
loved how kabir cared for nisha at each step..
i want os..

Thank you😊

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