Nibir ts - **CINDERELLA** epilogoue on page 15 [completed] - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww kabir ko milgayi uski cinderalla😊
Awesome TS😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
A very Cute and sweet Epilogue Mansi👍🏼😉👏
Good to have Nisha's POV this time😃
Reading about Nishu stupid thoughts was fun😆😆
Bilkul rab ne bana di jodi hai inki😉

That kiss was☺️

Love that cute convo between Nibir where Kabir is eager to knw about their first meeting and Nishu is relenting from giving the details and the way Kabir cutely gets her to reveal everything😳😳😳 That convo was adorable

Nice to know ki Kabir ne Nishu ki jaan bachai thi jiske kaaran yeh ladki uske pyaar mein pad gayi😃😆😆
Well kismat ka khel dekho ki tab Kabir ne uss ladki ko dhoondne ki koshish ki magar woh nahin mili lekin kucch saal baad woh ladki apne aap Kabir ki madad karne ke liye uske saamne aa gayi
Although would have loved a bit more elaboration on the incident😆 I wanted to knw more details😆 U knw flashback types😆😉I know kucch zyaada hi expect karne lagi hoon main aaj kal, magar kya karoon u hv spoiled me Mansi🤣

Nishu had left dancing professionally but decided to perform with Kabir to make his event a success- wow😳 This is so romantic and adorable😳 Woh kehte hain na ki pyaar aapko duniya se ladne aur duniya ka saamna karne ki taakat deta hai😉

Nibir ki Engagement aur shaadi ek hi din mein 😆😆😆
Kabir toh bada majnu nikla🤣
Bechari Nishu ko saare functions ka maza uthane ka mauka hi nahin mila😆😆

That Hehaww line was hilarious 🤣
Lagta Mansi match ke dauran jo rollercoster emotions tumne mehsoos kiye usse tumhe story mein daal diya 😆😆😆
Iss liye HeHaww kar rahi ho 🤣🤣🤣

Nishu batting eyelashes to patau Kabir😆
Dono ek se badhkar ek hain😆

That kiss in the end was☺️ Toh Miya-Biwi dono ek doosre se 2 ghante ke liye bhi door nahin reh sakte😆
Lage raho🤣
Loved the last part
Optimistic and deep
Lagta hai match ke baad, Mansi badi philosophical hogayi hai😆😆😆
But seriously, absolutely loved it❤️

A pleasurable read😳 and super cute story Mansi🤗
I definitely love this version of Cinderella better😉
Edited by arviabhigya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lo ek aur story pe mera comment ka quota full 🥳
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Posted: 9 years ago
My goodness... this is not less then a shocker mihu... u finally completed commenting on one ts of mine so lets celebrate... oh yeah i was high that day... on the win and my good mood too so 😆 yeah i cant keep this story out of mind u see i still want to write more on it... but no i wont... it will spoil the fun 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb start mansi😊
Kirti drama queen😉
Kabir ka itna imp. Event❤️
Kirti sare steps gadbad karri😔
Raat k ajib ajib si awaaze aati h🤣🤣
Finally that night came...
Kabir's heart beat was increasing wen he didn't find kirti...n here comes his cindhrella...❤️
Love the description DAT u gave of cindhrella...d way he asked her n she replied to him

She knew every single damn step of my choreography just like her air. So fluent and so graceful she was. "how do u know to dance like that... where is kirti" i asked against her ear as we swayed in each others arm. "she is backstage my prince" her melodious voice is my favourite now. "how do u know this dance..." i asked again, this time from her behind while she pulled my neck to her shoulder. "m ur other half prince..." her breath tickled my earlobe sending a shiver in me. " u know what's coming... arent u" i said as she backed her way to the group of boys who were ready to pick her. "i trust u prince..." she mouthed and jumped from their hold to my cage as i spinned on my feet cradling her in my arms. She traced my face with her delicate fingers and i missed her warmth suddenly when she jumped out of my hold and started spinning on her heels circling me at the same time. A step i adapted from the sun and the earth. It looked like i was her sun, her reason to live giving her her life. She was so breathtakingly mesmerizing while she danced every difficult step with such an ease. She flip flopped from her position and landed straight in my inviting arms as i danced with her while her standing on my toes.

@blue... 👏 👏

She then vanished from der...
Usne kirti ko bandh k uske liye sorry gift nhi rakha...
I hope kabir soon find his cindhrella...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

My goodness... this is not less then a shocker mihu... u finally completed commenting on one ts of mine so lets celebrate... oh yeah i was high that day... on the win and my good mood too so 😆 yeah i cant keep this story out of mind u see i still want to write more on it... but no i wont... it will spoil the fun 😳


😆
Even I don't want u to write more on d story 😆 I wanted to know more abt d incident 😆
But that was what I felt 😆
U r right if u write more, it will take away from d cuteness of d story 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: itznimi003

Superb start mansi😊
Kirti drama queen😉
Kabir ka itna imp. Event❤️
Kirti sare steps gadbad karri😔
Raat k ajib ajib si awaaze aati h🤣🤣
Finally that night came...
Kabir's heart beat was increasing wen he didn't find kirti...n here comes his cindhrella...❤️
Love the description DAT u gave of cindhrella...d way he asked her n she replied to him

She knew every single damn step of my choreography just like her air. So fluent and so graceful she was. "how do u know to dance like that... where is kirti" i asked against her ear as we swayed in each others arm. "she is backstage my prince" her melodious voice is my favourite now. "how do u know this dance..." i asked again, this time from her behind while she pulled my neck to her shoulder. "m ur other half prince..." her breath tickled my earlobe sending a shiver in me. " u know what's coming... arent u" i said as she backed her way to the group of boys who were ready to pick her. "i trust u prince..." she mouthed and jumped from their hold to my cage as i spinned on my feet cradling her in my arms. She traced my face with her delicate fingers and i missed her warmth suddenly when she jumped out of my hold and started spinning on her heels circling me at the same time. A step i adapted from the sun and the earth. It looked like i was her sun, her reason to live giving her her life. She was so breathtakingly mesmerizing while she danced every difficult step with such an ease. She flip flopped from her position and landed straight in my inviting arms as i danced with her while her standing on my toes.

@blue... 👏 👏

She then vanished from der...
Usne kirti ko bandh k uske liye sorry gift nhi rakha...
I hope kabir soon find his cindhrella...

thank u wifey 😳 i was waiting for u
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: arviabhigya


😆
Even I don't want u to write more on d story 😆 I wanted to know more abt d incident 😆
But that was what I felt 😆
U r right if u write more, it will take away from d cuteness of d story 😉

actually i didnt planned to write that accident... it just i wanted nisha to crush over kabir for more than his looks or dance... so just made it up 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chap 2
Superb update😊
Bechara kabir's mission cindhrella me busy h😉
D way he was giving description abt her n kirti said give me info abt her speciality...🤣
Kirti ki daat🤣
Kabir kinna bhatka cindhrella ko dhundne k liye...
Oops kabir keys bhul gya academy me...
Usne apne fear ko hara k finally enter kia academy me...😊
Loved d way u describe about her DAT spot light😊 the way he was peeping the way he went to change her dress the way he sat on chair so DAT she can't see him❤️
Her dance❤️ in her each upcoming step her craving for him increasing❤️
The song was perfect❤️
D way he danced with her❤️
Der convo😊 the whole relevation😊
Kabir ne use bachaya tab se she loved him❤️
Finally both confessed der feelings❤️
Der kiss😳 her move make kabir's happy😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: itznimi003

Chap 2
Superb update😊
Bechara kabir's mission cindhrella me busy h😉
D way he was giving description abt her n kirti said give me info abt her speciality...🤣
Kirti ki daat🤣
Kabir kinna bhatka cindhrella ko dhundne k liye...
Oops kabir keys bhul gya academy me...
Usne apne fear ko hara k finally enter kia academy me...😊
Loved d way u describe about her DAT spot light😊 the way he was peeping the way he went to change her dress the way he sat on chair so DAT she can't see him❤️
Her dance❤️ in her each upcoming step her craving for him increasing❤️
The song was perfect❤️
D way he danced with her❤️
Der convo😊 the whole relevation😊
Kabir ne use bachaya tab se she loved him❤️
Finally both confessed der feelings❤️
Der kiss😳 her move make kabir's happy😊

kabir is an idiot iisnt he 😆 thanks

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