Nibir ts - **CINDERELLA** epilogoue on page 15 [completed] - Page 12

Originally posted by: Snow12345654321

Lovely epilogoue ...😳

Fabulously written!!

Awesome😊

Thnx for the pm

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Superb epilogue👏

Loved it... As usual beautifully written

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Love know its way around, u dont have to find it... it will come around the corner sooner or later. U may think that there is no one for u but there is always someone for someone. No one is alone. And when u will find out ur missing piece, all things will fall in place. U just need to look out for love around u and u will find it right beside u at places u never thought about looking. Treasure ur love and never let it go.

Hayeee mar dala

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

wifey 👏
it was just amazing 👏
I loved this concept a lot
it was really intriguing 👏
Cinderella and her prince charming was so dreamy
kabir's impatience was described very well
the dance was out standing I love it when u make nibir dance 😳
the kisses were ☺️
I love u wifey u r awesome with your works 👏

bade dino baad aise acche se comment kiya missed it 😔

Originally posted by: Niha0606

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<font size="2" color="#ff0099">dho dho updates mansi</font>😲

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Originally posted by: .vishrutha.

What a pleasant surprise this was🤗

A very nice and cute update!

Glad u wrote this in Nisha's pov!

The kiss was described so well in her monologue.

Her innocence and naivety, her desire to be in his embrace till eternity was shown wonderfully.

Her metaphorical comparison of him as her knight/saviour, how she lost her heart to him, and waited till she got a chance to come in front of him, Kabir feeling lucky to have her in his life, were all very well written👏

Their hugs were the highlight of the entire TS for me. They conveyed so much that words couldn't. And all the credit goes to the wonderful writer, i.e, you mansi!

Moving on, Kabir being impatient to get married to her and both not being able to stay away from each other was so well portrayed by you!

The last kiss and the paragraph that followed was a perfect ending! Truly a magical story it was!😳

Thanks for pm😊

Do write more please (greedy me😆)

Originally posted by: Shats

Ufff hayeee maar daaala 😳 😳 😳
Wat a magical epilogue 👏 👏
Beautifully written 😳 😳
Their kiss 😳 😳 the way u described hr pov 😳 😳 😳 lol Maine feel karna start Kar dia tha 🤣 kiss ke emotions me beh gayi thi u know 🤣
Hr longing to b in his arms forever 😳 😳
Haila engagement k din shaadi bhi karli 😆 bichare se wait hi nahi hua 😆 😉
Kiss 😳 hug 😳 😳
Last Pata dt was something magical 😳 😳 last para ne katal kardia 😳 beautifully written

Originally posted by: poornima_15

awesome epilouge ... thanku for it ... 😊 and superbly written nisha's pov was so good ... no words i have ... just keep writing ... to read something form u makes my day 😃

Originally posted by: star.angel

It was a wow epi😳

First nisha ka POV⭐️👏

Loved that

Their kiss😳

Nisha loved kabira for 5 years omg😲

Unki shadi ho ri😳

K kabira can't wait for 2 hours😆

Omg shadi eng in one day😆

Just loved it

Superb one👏