New NiBir FF:||On a Journey with You|| NEW UPDATE CHAP 10 - PAGE 34 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Nice
interesting
Cont soon
thanks for pm sujay
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Thank youuu sooo sooo sooo much...
AS I ALWAYS SAY, YOU PEOPLE ARE THE BEST!
Meant a lot...This forum always welcomes me with so warmly...
I will update tomorrow ^_^
@Sarthak Awww, such amazing words!
Yeah study pressure :( Yet I will try to continue this story as perfectly as possible...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Amazing story
Do continue soon
Will be waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
awww thank you SOOO much you two...you guys are just amazing..will be updating tonight...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am so happy for such feedbacks ...Here is the first chapter...Messages will be send by Sujay...

Chapter 1

Seeing the big smile on Kabir's face, Nisha smiled nervously as she could not understand how to react...Kabir came running to her screaming 'Nisha' in order to hug her but stopped just before hugging. He made an awkward guilt face and forwarded his hand for a handshake...Nisha again smiled seeing the expression on Kabir's face and put her hand in his one for a handshake...

Kabir: Umm, I am sorry. I hope you did not mind. Actually brought up in America, na? I am bit duffer about Indian culture and traditions, you know? *giving an awkward smile*
Nisha laughed a bit seeing Kabir's condition...
Nisha: Kabir, I did not mind...I can understand. Hugging must be very normal in America, mustn't it? *smiling face*
Kabir: Erm, yeah. *still an awkward face*
Nisha: *Laughing out loud* Oho, don't stress yourself too much...It is just all fine...Moreover, we are besties of childhood na?
Kabir became too much happy when Nisha talked about being besties of childhood...He gave his identical smirk again...
Kabir: So you remember it? *Surprised and happy*
Nisha: Umm..*a bit sorry face* Not really! Actually, I don't remember anything...It was Aman didi, who told me about you waiting for me and all so I came to know about it...But I really appriciate that you remember it till now...We were just 7 when you all left...
Kabir: Aaa Nisha, to be honest, I don't remember anything as well too..*making a baby face* Actually from childhood Maa, Dolly di and Bhattu always used to talk about you...And they also had photos of us, so in that way you were always in my memory...
Nisha: Haha Kabir. Not a fact. By the way, who is Bhattu? *confused face*
Kabir: Oh haha, Bhattu is Umesh Bhaiya...
NIsha: Oh okay okay! You want to go the fields? I mean you did not go with them...
Kabir: No, no..I have been roaming around the fields for about 45 minutes waiting for the other car to reach Alandgarh before coming to your house, so not anymore needed...
Nisha: Ah, okay then...*Not to sure what to say more*
Kabir: *Thinking a bit what to say* Oh yeah, come on I forgot, let me show you the photos of us Nisha...

Kabir started showing Nisha the photos of their childhood where they were having some besutiful moments together...
Kabir: By the way, what are you doing nowadays Nisha? 12th done na?
Nisha: *Seeing the photos with a very delightful face* Yeah, your also right?
Kabir: Yes, so applied for any university?
Nisha: Hmm, actually applied for a foreign scolarship..Only if I get the full scolarship I can afford it...
Kabir: Oh wow! You will get it don't worry. I did too apply for a foreign university...Which country you did?
Nisha: You did too?! *Surprised* You already live in America...
Kabir: Yeah, but I want to do my graduation from somewhere else...Hey, which country tell na?
Nisha: Oh yeah, I forgot sorry...I applied ...

Before Nisha could complete the sentence, Dolly, Ritesh and Jwala came into the room...Dolly and Jwala hugged Nisha from behind together...
Dolly: Nishaaa! *screaming* You have grown up so much kiddo...
Kabir: Oh come on di! I have grown up so she will too right?...
Ritesh: Yeah yeah, you have just grown up physically, mentally still 2...
Jwala: So true Ritesh bhaiya...
Nisha laughed out loud hearing all these...Kabir made faces to everyone to which everyone laughed out together...
Kabir: Yeah, laugh laugh...*Disgusted face*
Jwala: Hahahaha, let it be Kabir bhaiya...Nisha di, I have heard a lot about you and Aman bhabi...So happy that met you, afterall I was just 5 when we left...
Nisha: Aww, my little sissy *Hugging Jwala* We will have fun together...
Dolly: *Hugging them together* Yes and mee too...
Kabir: Wow, all the women together...We are none here anymore Ritesh bhaiya...
Kabir: Seems like that Kabir...By the way, hi Nisha! I am Ritesh...*gives his hand for handshake*
Nisha: *Shaking hand* Hi I know! Really happy all of you are here...*smiling*
Jwala: Oh, we forgot why we came up here, everyone is waiting downstairs for us...The wedding date is about to be fixed up...
Nisha: Oh wow! I am just so excited...
Dolly: So what are we waiting for? Lets go kids...
Kabir: Uff, we are not anymore kids Dolly di...You have 3 kids, remember? Whom we have left in Chandigarh with Saurav jeeju as the kids were too tired...
Dolly: *Pulling Kabir's ear* Boy, so what? You all will always be the kids to me...

Everyone came downstairs and Nisha greeted Maajeet and Pammi...She side hugged Umesh screaming 'Jeeju' in happiness. Then everyone kept quite, waiting impatiently for the Panditji to fix up a date...
Finally the date was fixed, the wedding date was exactly after two weeks. So basically just after one week, the various pre wedding functions would start...They had one week to manage everything...They all had sweets on this good news...Before leaving, the kids wanted to have a get together of them before starting all the rushes of the wedding ceremony...

Dolly: Aman and Nisha should join us in it, that is a must...
Kabir: Yes, so Aman bhabi and Nisha come to our house for a stayover tomorrow?
Lajjo: No, son..I am sorry but that won't be possible...
Kabir: Why not chachi? I myself will come from Chandigarh and pick them up, please please?
Lajjo: Umm...Preet, actually...Umm...
Pammi: *Understading the dilemma of Lajjo* Kabir, don't be stubborn...Before marriage, Aman can't come to our house...That is kind of a custom here...
Kabir: *Biting his tongue* Oops, sorry chachi...Not a fact, we can find some solution, what say Dolly di?
Rupam: If you kids don't have any problem, you can have the stayover at our place...If you are comfortable here, we have a such tiny house...
Ritesh: Don't say such things chachu, we will be more than comfortable here...
Kabir: Yes, oviously...
Nisha: Wow, that will be great! Our cousin, Kirti is also coming tomorrow from Delhi with Raanjot chachu and Veena chachi...
Maanjeet: So, all set now...I will send the kids, tomorrow evening then...

They all bid goodbyes and left for their cars, while Umesh and Kabir were the last ones to leave...Umesh waved a bye to Aman before leaving and gave a shy smile, to which Aman just smiled blushing and then looked down...Kabir noticing that, gave a slight push on Umesh's shoulder by his one...Nisha held Aman's both shoulders from behind and smiled at Kabir and Umesh before the two brothers left finally...

TBC...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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@Nimi thanks yaaar umaaah...haha the 20% concept is from a serial which used to come on air many years back...Rest of the story line is totally mine...Update is here
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Lovely update 😳
Loved it...Continue soon!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Superb update niks😊
Nibir ki awkward se meeting
Der awkward yet understanding wali talk😊
Dolly jwalu ritesh all were der bad kirti ka wait h😉
2 weeks me wedding😊
Waiting for get together of cousin😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Awesome update dida 👏
Kabir awkwardness 😆
Kabir and nisha dono ko yaad nahi hai 😆
Gang meeting was awesome 👏
Oh dosa ki shaadi hogayi aur do bachee bhi very fast
Kirti ki entry abhi baaki hai 😉
I hope ritesh is positive
Now will be waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Awww kitna cute tha niks loved it...keep writing 😉

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