New NiBir FF:||On a Journey with You|| NEW UPDATE CHAP 10 - PAGE 34 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Mast story dearie! I am glad ur back on the forum just when I returned as well.
Sweet coincidence and I am looking forward to catching up on more of your work.
May not always give feedback coz I mostly read offline, but I love your stories!! 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Hi Niks just read first chapter of ur story
Great start to ur story
Loved it
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
AWWW thanks a bunch everyone...i just love you all..please be with my story...
@RT I am so glad that you are back..This is so amazing..Okay, whenever you can do give feedbacks..I will wait for them <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
The chapter 2 is up...Inbox messages will be send by Sujay as usal...

CHAPTER 2

Nisha's phone rang. It was Jwala, Nisha smiled and picked up the call...
Nisha: Hello Jwala!
Jwala: Hey, Nishu di! Oops, can I call you Nishu? Like Dolly di also calls you this from childhood na?
Nisha: Haha, sure why not...
Jwala: Okay yaaay! So I called you to ask if you all need something? Like we are on our way, Saurav jeeju and Umesh bhaiya told me to ask if anything needed for the stayover we can bring?
Nisha: Aah, no no Jwala...So sweet of you guys but here we are perfectly fine...Just come soon, hmm?
Jwala: Okaay Nishu di, bye for now...
Nisha: Bye kiddo...

Just then Kirti entered Nisha's bedroom.
Kirti: Whom you have been talking to Nisha?
Nisha: Oh hey Kirti! You are up? I thought you would wake up at dinner...
Kirti: Come on Nisha, now don't pull my legs so much...I know, I know, I am sorry for making you and Aman didi wait for so long to be with me but I was real tired after the journey...
Nisha: Okay okay..*Acts to make a grumpy face and then laughs* Love you and missed you so much...
Kirti: Missed you all a lot too sissy! By the way, where are the Vijs? And with whom you were on the phone?
Nisha: Oh yeah, I forgot, it was Jwala and they are on their way...
Aman: *Entering the room* What is going on between the sisters without me?
Kirti: Amaaan didi, the would be bride! *Screaming while hugging her*
Aman: *Hugging Kirti too* Kirti, you are another crazy one just like Nisha...
Kirti: No, I know I am bit crazy but no one beats Nisha...
Aman: *Laughs* That is true though...
Nisha: *Making faces* I hate you two, I am the youngest one and this is what you do to me...Hmph!
Aman and Kirti looked at each other and signalled each other with eyes, then they hugged Nisha together...Nisha at first pretended to be angry and then smiled and hugged her sisters...

While the sisters were having a real good time, suddenly Lajjo and Veena called them from downstairs as the door bell rang...They came down running, having a blushing Aman followed by Nisha and Kirti..Rupam opened the door and there they were, the Vij kids...This time Saurav and the three cute little kids of him and Dolly were there too...Everyone greeted each other...Nisha and Kirti got busy with the kids while Umesh and Aman were busy stealing glances...In all these happening, something did not go out of Kabir's sight...It was his brother, Ritesh. He was so lost staring at Kirti that anyone could tell Ritesh was falling for her...Kabir found just a fine topic to suit his jolly and funny nature...

Kabir: Ritesh bhaiya, I think we should consult an eye doctor!
Ritesh: *Coming out of the trance* Hmm?..Wh..What? But why?! Is everything okay with your eyes Kabir? *Worried*
Kabir: *chukcling* My eyes?! Just look at your ones, which are just showing one face...Kirti, Kirti, Kirti...Hahahaha...
Ritesh got red by Kabir's words and just hit Kabir's head playfully and left or you can say almost ran away...Kabir laughed again...

Everything was going very nice, Dolly suggested that they should play charades...Everyone agreed. Dolly checked on her kids if they were okay playing their games and then she came to join so that they could also start...They all sat down on the floor of the drawing room where Nisha had spread a bed sheet for them..They made two teams...It was basically girls vs boys...While playing when it was Ritesh's turn, he got almost blank in the middle of acting because he was staring at Kirti...Kabir stood up and took Kirti beside Ritesh..
Kabir: Bhai, take her beside you, maybe it will be at least easier for you to act and us to understand...
Ritesh and Kirti both were so embarassed that Kirti ran from there saying she was thirsty and Ritesh went back to his seat where Umesh and Saurav teased him...

The game was going on, Kirti also came back after a while and it was time for Kabir to act out...He stood up and with great confidence looked at Nisha, who was supposed to tell him the movie name...Nisha whispered the movie name in his ears and Kabir gave her a winning smile as if it was so easy to act out..But while Kabir was acting it out, Nisha noticed that Kabir was trying to speak up the words to his team mates while acting...She stood up and hit Kabir with a cushion...
Kabir: What is the problem Nisha?
Nisha: You are doing cheating Kabir...
Kabir: Uh what? No no no..Say Bhattu did I do any cheating? Saurav jeeju? Ritesh Bhaiya?
Everyone nodded in a negative way...
Nisha: They won't agree because they are your team mates...
Dolly: Kabir is always like that...
Kabir: What di? You can't accuse your younger innocent brother like this...*Making innocent baby face*
Nisha threw another cushion at Kabir to hit him which Kabir caught this time...
Aman: Nisha what are you doing?
Kabir: Bhabi, your sister is a goon...
Nisha: Kabir, what did you say?!
Nisha was about to throw another cushion when Kabir ran away holding the other one and Nisha ran behind him...

Kabir ran upstairs and he entered into Aman's room...He was looking for where he could go then, just when Nisha came from behind and tapped on his shoulder, Kabir looked back and Nisha started trying to snatch the cushion from his hands to hit him...In order to snatch back the cushion Kabir pulled it towards him and suddenly Nisha was also pulled along with it, the cushion fell down and Kabir's back hit the wall as Nisha fell on him...Nisha hugged Kabir to save herself from falling...Kabir to handle her and himself too, held her in his arms...After few moments, they both realised in which position they were in...Nisha immedietly broke the hug and took steps back while Kabir looked away to ingone the awkwardness...
Kabir: Nisha, I think we should go down...*Embarassed voice*
Nisha: Umm, hmm yeah...*Looking down*

Both of them came down, they played for a while more and then it was time for dinner...Kabir and Nisha were getting normal with each other by then...Everyone started eating..While Dolly, Nisha and Aman were serving...Kabir took a a spoonful of Palak Paneer in his mouth and made faces to Dolly...
Dolly: What?!
Kabir: This Palak Paneer is so disturbing di, you made it this evening after coming here right? So disgusting you know?
Dolly: Hahahahaha *Laughing loudly* Kabir, Nisha cooked it, not me...
Kabir gulped and looked at Nisha..
Kabir: Look, Nisha I am really sorry..The Palak Paneer is too good...I meant good only by saying those, aaa..aa..ask Dolly di...
Nisha: Its okay Kabir, maybe something went wrong today...You try something else? *Trying to keep a smile on her face*
Kabur: Dolly di, please? *Insisting face*
Dolly: *Trying to control her laugh* Ni..Nishu, Kabir is right..This is his style of saying when something is too much tasty..This is why I laughed out so loud because I knew you would not get it...
Nisha: Really?!
Kabir: Really, Truly, Madly, Crazily, Deeply..Now please give me some more Palak Paneer Nisha...*Smiling*
Nisha served Kabir some more Palak Paneer being very happy and they exchanged cute smiles...

After dinner they all did some more fun and it was time to make beds for everyone...Lajjo and Rupam, Veena and Raanjot wanted all the guests to sleep in the bedrooms and they the family members would sleep in the hall but the Vij kids did not let them do it...Lajjo and Rupam were stirctly told to sleep in their room and Veena-Raanjot in the guest room...Kirti, Nisha and Jwala would sleep in Nisha's room and Dolly, her daughter and Aman would sleep in Aman's bedroom...Rest all the boys along with Dolly's two sons would sleep in the hall...
Nisha was making beds for the boys in the hall while in the chaos she noticed something..Kabir was making videos with his camera...
Nisha: Kabir, making videos?
Kabir: Ahh, yes! It is nice to capture the beautiful moments, right? You know, I am dumb enough to forget that I brought my camera to make videos while this whole evening *Fed up face*
Nisha: *Laughs* It is okay Kabir. So why are you capturing the video without letting anyone know?
Kabir: Natural is the real beauty I think. If I will go and tell them, they will start posing and be alerted of their actions but I just want to capture my family as they are...Sadly, just you will be the different one here now...
Nisha: Me? So you are calling me as your family?
Kabir: What is so surprising Nisha? We were already always one family and now we are going to be officially as Bhattu and Aman bhabi are getting married...
Nisha: Hmm, yeah..
Kabir: Now, don't disturb me and let me steal this priceless moments and hey miss, be natural too okay? Please?

Nisha just smiled and nodded a yes...Kabir gave his remarkable smirk and got busy in capturing... Nisha just observed Kabir doing so and thought how sweet kind of a soul he was and how much he loved his family...

TBC...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Hash .. no Nisha Ritesh track 😆
Kabira
I love him 😳
Edited by Niya_789 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Dida awesome update 👏
Kirti,nisha and aman was lovely 😳
Ritesh and kirti oh now i understand why you were saying read the next part you will understood 😆
Thank god ritesh is positive 😊
Kabir teasing 🤣
Nibir hug ❤️
Palak panner cooked by nisha 😆 poor kabir 🤣
Nibir scene was too good 😳
Uman stealing glances 😉
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Superb update niks😊
Loved kirti aman n nisha sceneit was written beautifully❤️
Vij kids aa gye😊
Charades😊
Ritesh kirti
Nibir nokjhok❤️der hug ❤️der awkwardness😊
Cushion fight❤️
Palak pander❤️ awwee kabira
He is capturing all the moments in camera how sweet😊
Nisha's monologue for kabira❤️
Nikhs I really really love your writing❤️
U portrayed each n every emotions so beautifully❤️ that we can feel those moments those emotions in real through your write ups
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Very nice update 😳 loved it !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Nice update.
Nibir scenes were awesome.
Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Such a lovely part with full of nibir moments..loved it

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