NiBir SS- Love, Obsession and Crime (Chapter 8 on Page 41, complete) - Page 3

Ooo awesomely thrilling prolouge ... nisha's twin sister and crime ... interesting ... update soon 😊

Hayee kitne time naad koi fresh story mili... Continue soon

I want to ...say...I love u ...I just want something like this

interesting concept
loved it
update soon...

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

res 😊
unres
grand bhacchi 🤗
mystery thriller I love it 😃
prologue was amazing n the shayaari it was too
character sketch ma lines ka use was cherry on the cake
interesting start shibu 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Aha121

Interesting
Please do continue soon

Nisha ki twin sister...
Thx for pm

Originally posted by: vishruthaLN

Interesting prologue

Loved the shayari at the end! ❤️

Wonderful character sketch!

Loved your idea of using dialogues to describe the bond / personality 👍🏼

Please continue soon...😳

Thanks for pm 😊

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

awesome prologue!!
nice concept..
characters sketch to mind blowing tha!!
baki movies ke dialogue nai pata but last one... wo Ali zafar ki movie ka h I know!! coz recently deki thi and ye dialogue friendship wala note down karke raki thi coz I really liked it 😆

DO CONTINUE SOON

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Very interesting concept Shibu...😊

The shayaari was awesome...❤️

Continue soon...😊

Thanx for the pm...🤗

Originally posted by: anu012

superb shibu 👍🏼
love thriller or suspens story
awsome prologue or cs
Shayari truley loved it ❤️
cont asap


thnkss for pm

Originally posted by: Amina...

Interesting ...
Will love to read further ...
Continue soon ...

Thanks for the pm ...

Originally posted by: naucloverkittu

Nice prologue bt use pdh kr sad sad si feelimg ayi
...yeh sad story na ho bs plz...
Character sketch ws nice nd lovely use of those dailogues really loved dat...
Nisha ki twin sister yaani story me twist ayega...interesting...
A vry fresh concept. Mtlb mene nibir pe toh aesi story abhi tk nhi pdhi ...i loved it...
Nd crime wala part i wonder aesa kya crime hoga nd kisne kia hoga bt obsession.wrd se lg ra h k kabir k pyar me i guess dono me se ek sister shayad twist laye.. bs ab or predict nhi karungi...waiting for chappy 1

Originally posted by: janvi1018

Great starting

Waiting for the first part

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Back with bang 😉

Very nice introduction 👍🏼

Continue soon 😳

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Shibu meri grand bhanju... kya baat h yaar mast prologue ur cs... now m eagerly looking forward to it

Originally posted by: zaara610

Shibuu..Interesting prologue..Loved it

Please continue soon..😊

Originally posted by: Ashoo20

Awesome start👏

Interesting concept

I love suspense thriller

Wow nisha ki twin sister bhi hai😛

Aisa kya hua hai navya k sath😕

Sounds interesting continue soon

Thanks for the pm..

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Ooo awesomely thrilling prolouge ... nisha's twin sister and crime ... interesting ... update soon 😊

Originally posted by: sam_premc

olll...olll...olll👏👏

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

interesting concept
loved it
update soon...

Originally posted by: Shanaya1526

I want to ...say...I love u ...I just want something like this

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Hayee kitne time naad koi fresh story mili... Continue soon[/QUOTE

Thanks a lot fr commenting guys, will try to update ASAP😃

interesting..
a thriller n mysterious story..
wow wud love to read it

The title sounds so so good😊

Originally posted by: itznimi003

Res
Unres

Shibhanzzz kya mast surprise dia h yaar tune😊
Thriller ss😊😊

Kya dhasu prologue tha yr 👏

Dil khush kr dia yr tune...and the shayari was too gudI juz loved it❤️

Now coming to the CS...tune kya dialog se sabka intro dia h loved dis concept yara❤️

Nisha ki twin sister...

Nisha danger me h???

Dono kabira se pyar krte h??

Waiting for mystery to be unfold...

Update asap dear😊

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

interesting..
a thriller n mysterious story..
wow wud love to read it

Originally posted by: Piya1199

The title sounds so so good😊

This is gonna be pretty interesting

Post the 1st chapter soon😉

Thanks fr ur comments Nimzzz, Shruti and Piya😃

Shibu very interesting dear
waiting for it

srry not able to like right now will do later but yes i need pms lol

Originally posted by: mishrialways

Shibu very interesting dear
waiting for it

srry not able to like right now will do later but yes i need pms lol

Thanks fr commenting Ritu😃