NiBir SS- Love, Obsession and Crime (Chapter 8 on Page 41, complete) - Page 5

Wow wow wow 👏

Now this os going to be a hell of a story... m so into it... 😉

Yeh kya twins hone ka galat fidya lene ka🤔

Wooow navya kya negetive role play kar rhi hai? Usse pata nhi shayad NiBir best hai na ki NaBir.. Shibu ye kya kardiya navya aur nishu ek hi insaan ko pasand karte hai..ab bechara kabir kis ko chunega..lets wait for next part and see 😉

It was Awesome Shibu 👏
Loved it ❤️
But this Navya , how can she take advantage of being twin with Nisha 😡
Plz Continue Soon 😊

awesome ...the line ... twins hone ka fayada made it more interesting 😊

nice update dear
i loved it

Originally posted by: mishrialways

Nice update

kabir loves nisha

and both nisha and navya both like him

seems navya will misuse the fact of she being twins with nisha

Originally posted by: Aha121

Nice update
Twins hone ka phayda 😭
Both like him
Thx for pm
Update soon

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302

I will try to review it in a detailed manner coz I know you desperately want it to be reviewed🤣.

The start was very nice , actually I am a bit confused because the way u started character sketch alag se dene ki jarurat nahi thi...because story progressed beautifully describing the traits of each character very well.

The story progressed in a good speed without losing its charm so its a big big positive.

Nibir thoughts were described well.

Also loved the ramesh - laxmi and navya scene.

Update ended on a very interesting note so eagerly excited for the next part.

Continue soon

Originally posted by: vishruthaLN

Interesting chapter!

The way you brought out the differences in nisha and navya's personality through their entry scene and their interaction with saurav and RL respectively was really nice!

Waiting for the next chapter, please continue soon...

Thanks for pm 😊

Originally posted by: naucfan

Ye kya I hate navya.😡

Nishu...🥺

Originally posted by: anu012

superb chptr shibu
loved it
both nisha or navya like kabir or kabir like nisha ... hope so not create mu b/w nibir
update soon

thnks for pm

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

awesome update...
nibir met..
SV road ?? 🤣
main road me accident hogya ? 😲
both nisha n kabir like each other...
saurav wahi saurav h jiski dolly baat kar ri h ye kabiraa nahi janta!! na twin sister ka jhol 😆
nisha is as usual ladaku types..
Navya garelu plus filmy lag rai hai 🤣
twins ka faida uthegi 😃
masaledar story hone wali h boss 😉
continue soon...

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Wow wow wow 👏

It was awesome 👍🏼

Nibir's first meeting ❤️

Navya and kabir phone conversation 😊

Twins hone ka fayda

Awesome update

Update soon 😳

Originally posted by: mika17

Awesome update

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Now this os going to be a hell of a story... m so into it... 😉

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Yeh kya twins hone ka galat fidya lene ka🤔

Hope Kabir pehchaan paye... 😊

I want Nisha and Kabir not Navya and Kabir moments[xxx(]

Originally posted by: Sameeha151

Wooow navya kya negetive role play kar rhi hai? Usse pata nhi shayad NiBir best hai na ki NaBir.. Shibu ye kya kardiya navya aur nishu ek hi insaan ko pasand karte hai..ab bechara kabir kis ko chunega..lets wait for next part and see 😉

Originally posted by: Snow12345654321

Awesome part..

Nibir!!

Update soon!!!

Originally posted by: Amina...

It was Awesome Shibu 👏
Loved it ❤️
But this Navya , how can she take advantage of being twin with Nisha 😡
Plz Continue Soon 😊

Originally posted by: poornima_15

awesome ...the line ... twins hone ka fayada made it more interesting 😊

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

nice update dear
i loved it

Originally posted by: janvi1018

Nice update

Thanks a lot fr Commenting guys😃

Interesting nisha navya both like him bt kabira love nisha...ohh god nisa kabir ki itni adat ho gayii h muje k navya ko bhi as aneri imagine kr rhi hu tb bhi muje wo achi ni lg rhi nisha naam se jyada hi pyr h muje...
Nice part

Shibu awesome story and awesome character sketch 👏
Loved it
Sorry for late comment