NiBir SS- Love, Obsession and Crime (Chapter 8 on Page 41, complete)

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

superb shibu 👍🏼
love thriller or suspens story
awsome prologue or cs
Shayari truley loved it ❤️
cont asap

thnkss for pm

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1060675

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Very interesting concept Shibu...😊

The shayaari was awesome...❤️

Continue soon...😊

Thanx for the pm...🤗

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

@___Neha___

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

like button not working... 😕
but I want pm for sure 😃

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

@___Neha___

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

awesome prologue!!
nice concept..
characters sketch to mind blowing tha!!
baki movies ke dialogue nai pata but last one... wo Ali zafar ki movie ka h I know!! coz recently deki thi and ye dialogue friendship wala note down karke raki thi coz I really liked it 😆

DO CONTINUE SOON

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ashveena

@Ashveena.

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Awesome start👏

Interesting concept

I love suspense thriller

Wow nisha ki twin sister bhi hai😛

Aisa kya hua hai navya k sath😕

Sounds interesting continue soon

Thanks for the pm..

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zaara610

@zaara610

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Shibuu..Interesting prologue..Loved it

Please continue soon..😊

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Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

@___Neha___

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

OK last thing...
my curious mind already started thinking... wat could be next!! 😃
the two in prologue seems to b nisha and kabir obvio as its nibir story but navya ko kya hua h phir?? is she alright?? 😲
her sister was mentioned na !! and nisha's sis means navya!!
OK do update soon ... warna me soch soch k pagal ho jaungi!! 😕

lol one more thought came in mind... its a thriller and prologue ne hi itna curious kar diya , I wonder agey ki mystery to mujhe mar hi dalegi!! 🤣