**NIBIR TS - ISHQ NASHEEN** part-3 page 20 complete - Page 15

awesome part mansi ... this wass really good ... as per the a/n nothing can be better than what you wrote ... indeed a beautiful potray of emotions ... i m always ready to read any work of urs so take ur time for lbld and destined together updates ... 😊

Originally posted by: Niya_789

<font>Holiday dekhi hai? Uss main ek dialogue hai "Yeh adha pagal, tum adhi pagal aur tumhare bacche pure pagal" </font>

<font>Yeh inn dono ke liye likha gaya hai 🤣</font>

<font>Inn ki tareef main toh shabad bhi kaam pad jate hai (Note the sarcasm)</font>

<font>But agar tum bina maan ke aisa likh deti ho toh next time maan ko holiday pe hi rakho 😆</font>

kya baat khi h... ye dialogue to ekdum perfect h 🤣 mera man ur dimag dno chhuti p h 😔

Originally posted by: anu012

Awsome mansi
beautifully written nisha pov
loved love confession of nibir on terace
loved it ...❤️

thnks for pm

thanks anu

Originally posted by: Anmol333

Wow👏👏

Superb update!!!!

Finally nibir together... Terrace scene was very beautifully written and last part Loved it so much !!

thanks anmol

Originally posted by: poornima_15

awesome part mansi ... this wass really good ... as per the a/n nothing can be better than what you wrote ... indeed a beautiful potray of emotions ... i m always ready to read any work of urs so take ur time for lbld and destined together updates ... 😊

thanks poornima

Thank u ami... 😳 and get well soon baby 🤗

Awesome yaar finally mil gaye 👏...

Originally posted by: naucfan

Awesome yaar finally mil gaye👏...

thanks anz

Awesome update is 😊
Sorry for the late comment
Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Nibirlove_amu

Awesome update is 😊
Sorry for the late comment
Thanks for the pm

thanks amz