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Ended very beautifully 😊

Awesome mansi

Aww
Cute cute cute
Last part
Blushy blushy😳
Thx for pm

Awesome ending 👏
Loved it
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Finally tune update kr hi dia😉
Blasting update mansi😊
Ek hafte hogye nisha was cursing herself for giving him pain..😔
Nisha ka pain 😭 uska kabir ko like hellucination ...was written superbly 👏
Kabir aara apni family k sath nishu se Milne
Nisha ke POV and kabir k POV was written so beautifully... That I can't describe in words❤️
D way nisha thought she was helucinating kabir and outburst all her emotions which she had hidden in the core of her heart was described amazingly 👏
Den the pain in kabir's eyes seeing her in pain...n d way she said to kirti don't tell her DAT I met her 😊
Then the happiness on her face that glittering up his emotions was awweee
Viraj and dadaji scene was verry funny😉
Then the way he said yes n she was looking shockingly at him...
Den der terrace wala convo that reality dawned upon her that she was not helucinating...it was him...
Der pain der closeness...
The song added magical flavour in their love❤️
The way she back hugged him...confessing the feeling of her heart...
Then blushing blushing blushing...
The lines written in d end was superb u just nailed it yr... 👏
That's y m your Fan no. 1😊

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It Was BEAUTIFUL Mansi ...!!!
It Was So CUTE And LOVELY ...!!!
AMAZING ... ... MINDBLOWING ... ... SUPERB ...!!!
Very Very Very Beautifully Written ...!!!
I Just Fell In Love With This Update Yaar .. ... ... The Way You Presented It ... Its FABULOUS ...!!!
This Was Something Like " A VERY BEAUTIFUL ENDING TO A VERY BEAUTIFUL STORY "
LOVED IT SOOO SOOO SOOO MUCH ...!!!

Plz Write More Stories Like This ...!!! The Happy Ones 😆
Will wait for your new story ...!!!

And lastly sorry for this very late and very boring comment ... Actually i m not feeling well ... When i read the update , i just reserved the post , because i thought i will unres it when will be in a little good mood ... but no , my mood i still the same but it was getting very late so i thought i should unres ... but today my words are failing me ... Sorry for this ... BUT REALLY I LOVED IT VERY MUCH...!!!

Lovely update!

Originally posted by: vishruthaLN

Lovely update!

Nisha's pain was written so well!

The way u first showed Kabir's pain over her rejection and then his determination to make her his and give it a final try was really good!

Nisha assuming Kabir's presence as her hallucination and her subsequent outburst written entirely in her POV was beautiful!

Kabir's happiness on knowing Nisha loves him too and Viraj bringing him back to reality everytime he starts admiring Nisha was funny yet cute😆

Their terrace scene was lovely.

Nisha speaking all her pentup emotions out loud and Kabir consoling her was again well written👍🏼

About the last scene, I have a confession to make Mansi. I'm a fan of all the bold scenes you write.😆

Let me tell you why, from your first story 'imperfectly perfect' to this update the bold scenes you write will be hot no doubt but also very sensual. It doesn't seem vulgar or make the reader feel a tad bit awkward/uncomfortable even at a single point. You fill it with so much of love and emotions that I can't help loving them. And this too was so beautiful written❤️

The quote at the end fits so perfectly with the story and it couldn't have ended better!

Update your other stories whenever you get time, will wait for it coz I know the updates will surely be worth the wait.

Thanks for pm😊

vishru... u know i have read this comment over n over again... u made feel so good about that last scene i cant tell u in words... everytime i write a bold scene there is always a fear of it getting overdrive or it may offence someone... m so glad that it doesnt... because the main motive to write such scene is expressing love through a physical way which is common in real life but still a taboo somewhere... so m super happy about it 😳 thank u sooo much for such a lovely comment

Aw beautiful ending to ur story

Originally posted by: Snow12345654321

Ended very beautifully😊

Loved it...nibir😳.

Thnx for the pm

thanks