**NIBIR TS - ISHQ NASHEEN** part-3 page 20 complete

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NIBIR TS - ISHQ NASHEEN


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Nisha just reached her room after a day's hectic work. She was in her kitchen when her phone made a popping sound. "these crazy people... can't stay silent for a sec." she sighed. She sat on the sofa and checked her phone sipping on her coffee. Kirti's msg what else she can expect, nisha rolled her eyes.

"nishu u reached..."

"yup... just sipping on my coffee"

"ok... keep ur cup on side and send me one of ur achha wala photo... have seen a guy for u... chachu wants it"

"hahaha... nice joke"

"are... its true nishu... ask anybody... ruk i will call dolly di"

Dolly popped in.

"yes nishu... kirtis right now send ur photo"

"what... if this is some kind of joke... i will kill u both" nisha was in an unexplainable state.

"no... chal tu chhod... we have plenty of ur pics... we will send one by ourselves..."

"no... what the hell yaar..."

" are nishu yaar... i will send u his pic... he is so cutes..."

"yeah... if so pls make him jwalu teddy... why bothering me"

"dolly di he is not cute he is hot and sexy"

"ok... then made him ur model kirti..."

"oh common nishu... just see his pic for once... he can impress u"

Nisha rolled her eyes at it.

"yeah show me... which celebrity u people have chosen"

"wait a sec..."

The next moment a pic popped in her messenger.

"m not gonna look at it.. why should i" she thought as it started downloading.

"common nisha... have some fun" her devilish side provoked.

"dekhu ki nhi...dekh hi leti hu.." she thought and begin to opened the image.

"nhi... mai kyu dekhu... mai nhi dekhungi" she said and put the phone down.

That's when the doorbell rang and another crazy person of her life appeared. " hellos don..." a girl somewhat nishas age hugged her. " yeah... hello sleepyhead... finally u came... isha" she hugged her back. "hey... m not a sleepyhead anymore..." she complained. "yeah yeah... the most dutiful d-i-l of shekhawat khandan" she rolled her eyes. " stop being a cry baby nishu... and tell me what's wrong" she asked sitting on her couch comfortably. "why everyone wants me to get married sleepyhead... its just annoying... now to papa also has started... i haven't expected that" she was really annoyed. "ooo... that means something is cooking hah.." isha elbowed her. "yes.. they ummm they saw someone for me" she didn't knew why but she felt butterflies around her. Isha saw the change and smirked. "nervous my don... " she asked. "a bit... umm.. no why would i be" nisha wanted to smack herself. Isha laughed but then held her hands. "ha ha has le... teri shadi jo ho gyi h na" nisha pouted. "nishu... everybody go through this... its natural... u remember when shekhar came to meet me and i was hell nervous...??? But still everything went ok na" nisha looked at her friend. "pta h... sabko esa hi lagta h... thodi si khushi... ghabrahat... gussa... excitement sab ek hi sath..." she smiled "par jab ye guzar jaega ur tu baad m yaad karegi na to hasegi khud p ki kyu darr rhi thi..." isha tug at her hands. " ab chal bhot hua lecture... show me the picture of my future jiju" she teased her. Nisha who was thinking about what she had been saying looked at her with narrowed eyes. "are ghoor mat yaar... pic dikha" she said. "maine nhi dekhi..." nisha looked away. Isha hit her head and then hit nishas arm. "phone de..." isha snatched her phone and barged in her phone gallery. Nisha looked everywhere but at her phone. She was dying to see but her head was against it. Isha took a look at the picture and sighed dreamily. "hae nishu... kya ladka h yaar... iske lie to mai ready ho jati agar shekhar na hote to..." nisha rolled her eyes at her. "jra dekhu tum dno sath m kaise lagoge..." she placed the phone in front of nishu while nishu looked away. "perfect jodi.." she exclaimed. Nisha was having a hard time controlling herself and when isha started giving compliments to his picture she couldnt control and snatched her phone away.


What she saw was enough to increase her heart beats. "i know you" she said to that handsome figure in the pic. "this is not happening... no no no way..." she couldn't believe her eyes. " i must be dreaming..." she rubbed her eyes but picture remained the same. "someone pinch me pls..." she said. "as u say" grinned isha and pinched her hard. "oouch... what was that" nisha snapped at her. "u asked for it..." she smirked while nisha glared. "but why are u so shocked... i mean i know ki he is a rockstar but ur expression says something else" isha suspected. " nisha tell me know... i know he is THE KABIR SINGH RATHORE the famous dancer and singer... but how do u know him" she asked. Nisha looked at the picture and stared at it for some good 10 min before speaking. "he... he was my classmate..." she said. "what... u mean my friend is the classmate of rockstar... OMG... in clg?" isha asked all excited. "no... in kindergarten.." nisha said. "WHAT... u r joking" she said. "no sleepyhead... its true... till 10th standard we were together..." she said. "kidding me right..." isha rolled her eyes. "why dont u believe me... wait" nisha got frustrated and got up to bring something. She brought a scrap book which has her childhood pics. "there in the first row left corner... u see that kid... that's him and that last row right corner is me" she sighed. "i can't believe it..." isha eyes popped out. "then don't..." nisha snatched the scrap book. "are why r u so angry... achha tell me something more" isha poked her. "ummm..." nisha was trying to say something when isha phone rang. She looked at the caller id and smiled dreamily. "yeah yeah i know.. jiju call... he must be missing u after all it's been 20 minutes since he last saw u" nisha said dramatically. Isha yanked nisha hard and attended the call. "sorry nishu jana padega... some relatives are coming over and i have to be there..." isha said pouting. "hmmm... jaa... pta h mjhe jiju is missing u..." she said winking. Isha blushed and bid her bye to nisha.

She closed the door behind her and stared at the photo. "after so many years ha kabir... pta nhi mai yaad hu ki nhi... par fir bhi u found me..." she smiled but then stopped grinning "why are u being so happy about it idiot... u dont want to get married... remember?" she chided herself. Whole of the evening she just stared at the breathtaking smile of his remembering their days together. It was like a slideshow of her early years in front of her eyes. His boyish looks... his charming smile... his mischievous pranks... his cute acts... everything was running in her head. Nisha remembered how they were inseparable from each other in kindergarten... then as they started growing kabir started making more friends while she... she got stuck in there. He was that popular boy of the class while she became the nerdy nisha... but the friendship remained the same though he gave her less of his time as there were other friends too but she never complained. It was near the start of 9 standard when their friendship became silent... just a beautiful silent bond... kabir started talking to girls indulging in music and all the other activities ignoring her all the while but nisha never complained. She was hurt but never showed and still remained standing behind him so she can make sure he was ok and don't get into any trouble. But he turned his back on her, enjoying his charm as girls and boys will stick to be with him at any cost. Nisha was still there thinking it's just a phase and their friendship was much more than anything. She used to help him in studies... got him notes... completed his assignments, she did everything she could do hoping he will acknowledge her again but that never happened. Girls started calling her "chipku" and "desperate" but she never minded. She thought they did not worth her time and may be kabir didnt knew it otherwise he will be by her side. This hope helped her trail throughout 10th standard. She clearly remembered the day when her hope broke like a peice of glass and shattered her innocent heart.

"kha h ye ladka... kal last day hai assignment ka ur koi fikr hi nhi h... agar aaj nhi dia ur kal isne submit nhi kia na to bhot bdi gadbad ho jaegi..." nisha was searching for her bff kabir (at least for her.. he was) after the school got over to give him his assignment which of course she had made for him. "offo duffer... hoga vo sports locker room m... tu bhi na paagal h..." she hit herself mentally and ran towards the locker room.

"hey kabir... what's up?" she saw a girl walking up to him and hugged him tightly. "this idiot sania... always have to be so cosy with kabir" nisha who was standing at the door fumed in a new kind of feeling. She felt like strangling that girl right there and punch kabir for holding her so damn close. The pang of a fire burned her nerves and her grip tighten over the file whitening her knuckles. "i missed u so much" was the other sugary coated words of so called miss universe making nisha roll her eyes. she wanted to go away from there and she actually did turn but something caught her ears and she decided to eavesdrop. "hey sania... where were u... dance practice p nhi aae" that was kabir and nisha thought to strangle kabir first. "oh nothing just kal ka assignment poora kar rhi thi... u completed it?" she asked. Kabir just shrugged. "oh i get that nisha will be doing for u na... ur girlfriend is really sweet" said sania with a fake smile. Though the words came from an idiotic mouth but strangely that sounded good to nisha.
"woah... stop there... who told u nisha is my gf" that was kabir with an amused sense in his voice. "of course m not his gf" she smacked herself as a part of her get disappointed.
"oh... but that's what it looks like... she is always behind u... taking care of u... doing things for u which normally no one would do... even she had saved u from detention so many times taking all the blames on herself... so i thought she must be ur gf" said sania shrugging her shoulder.

"did he too like me?" thought nisha who hide herself now and tried listen to them.

"whatever she does is her wish sania... i haven't ask her to do all of that... beside kabira don't need her... she is just another friend... moreover its her wish to do things for me... i actually don't care for it... ur waise bhi if m getting my work done what is the harm..." kabir sounded so cool about it as sania smiled slyly and went close to him again. "what about me?" she said. While kabir smiled and shrugged again.

Nisha felt her heart shattered into zillion pieces with each word. She is JUST ANOTHER friend... no special... nothing... another girl in the line... she felt stupid.. yes stupid... stupid enough to think he will like her... stupid enough to make a fool out of her. But that is not his mistake... is it?

Nisha realised the same pain was rising in her again. A drop of water got settled on her phone screen and she realised she had been crying all the while. A deep breath and like always she pushed the dreaded emotions behind. " u never liked me... i can't take any more rejection " she tried to think of the ways to get rid of this problem.

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Kabir was moving in his room pacing around impatiently. He took out his phone and looked at the photograph again. "finally i got u" he stared at the most beautiful face in the world at least for him it was. "nisha gangwal... kitna pareshan kia h tumne mjhe... itna koi kisi ko tadpata h kya" he sighed. He was by his closet when his brother entered. "aapki photo hmne bhej di h chhote... ur aapki meeting bhi hm fix kara denge... par kya aap hme btaenge achanak aapko shadi karne ka idea kha se aaya... jab maa aap se kh rhi thi tab to aap har baar unhe mna kar dete the... fir is baar kya hua" viraj, kabir's bade bhaiya, asked him. " jise dhund rha tha vo mil gyi" he smiled sheepishly making viraj frown. Just then their mother called viraj and he left sighing. Kabir's mind wandered back to past.

"i have been a jerk all my life nisha... had never acknowledged what you meant to me... the day i last saw u and u didnt even let me say a proper goodbye to u... was the first time i felt how important u were. U kept doing all of my work... kept covering for me... even took my punishments... and never said a word not even when i ignored u and our friendship... i have tried to figure out what i was feeling all these years when u werent there behind me... and the only thing i can say for sure is i want u to be not only behind me but beside me always... now i wont let u go nisha... not at any cost... finally i have found u... i dont know why u left like that... not even contacting me once... just a simple goodbye before u changed ur school... but i m glad u did... it told me ur value... but now when i know what i want... i want u to know it too..." kabir smiled at his own thoughts.

Kabir was in awful state when suddenly at the last day of their exam she announced she is changing her school... even her city... going to some boarding. She came just said a goodbye... gave him a heart wrenching smile and left. He couldnt grasp what happened and by the time he ran behind her she was gone. He tried shrug of the empty feeling that engulfed him suddenly and thought to not mind. Who was she to him... just a mere friend... so why was he so concerned. The whole of two years till he was in the same school was enough to torture him. He missed her terribly... her presence was like oxygen to him. He tried to concentrate on other things even scolded himself for thinking too much... but nothing helped him. He didnt wanted to admit that she was important to him so the best thing he did was indulging himself in dance and music furioisly... he engrossed himself so deeply that it became his second skin. He was glad... he thought he distracted himself but that was just an illusion. He started in college... made friends... became popular... the hot and happening boy of the clg...even tried himself in a relationship but failed miserably. All he could think was of her. He clearly remeber the day he was about to kiss his date... the moment he closed his eyes... the only face he could see was of her... her innocent smile... deep coffee brown eyes... red pinched nose... adorable she was... in that moment he knew what he wanted... actually whom he wanted to be with... all those feelings he had fought with in the past resurfaced themselves and he let himself drown in them this time willfully. He searched for her... almost in the whole country... persuded his dream but never let go of her... and finally afters years he found her... and now he knew he wont miss this chance.


So this was it... now tell me what u feel about it... and yes i want lots of comments... bhot rulate ho aajkal tum log mjhe comments k lie 😔

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Posted: 9 years ago
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What a compensation
Bachapaan ka pyaar... Hayeee
Mera dil bhi kitna pagal hai yeh pyaar tumhi se karta hai... ❤️
Next part jaldi jaldi de do please 😳
Dekho comment bhi kar diya na abh toh😛
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Res
Awesome mansi 👏 👏
Loved it 😃
Superb ts
Please please update soon 😉




P.s- How many shots Will be two shots or three shots?
Edited by sujoyricky - 9 years ago
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res😉😉
agar tum isse unres karne ke baadh DT nahi update kiya tho i will kill u😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
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res

kuch spcl hi hoga...
Unres

Omg...kya concept h yaar mansi😊
I love dis concept😊
Nishu k liye dulha😉
Isha nisha convo was written superbly👍🏼
Shekhar😉
Nishu kabira ka pic dekh k 😭
Oops...kabira ne nishu ko past me hurt kia tha😔
But nishu k dur jane k baad use ehsaas hua ki wo uske liye kinni spcl h😊
Ab kabira uske paas aana chahta h to nishu matter ko close krna chahti h😔
Mansi update soon m dying to read more😊

Ps:tere ts ki excitement me maine pg2 me bhi res kr dia🤣
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago
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res
lagta hai bada wala suspence hai
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Awwwee mansi🤗
Awesone ts
Mujhe next part bhi chahiye
Jaldi😃 and ha dt bhi😃
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amazing..
how can kabir ignore nisha like dat?!!
but ya he realized his mistake
hope he soon get nisha realise his love for her
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Res 😊
Sorry Mansi aaj kal comment toh chodo tumhari story pe res bhi nahin kar paati
Third yr is quite hectic 😭
Anyway I m hoping I unres it soon 😊

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