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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: itznimi003

Nishssy😉 i really love dis update yr😊

vj se rajbir ka ekdam sahi tarike se gussa hona😊 kabir ka viraj ko emotionally bade bhaiya bol k hug krna🤗 loved it yr❤️ verry well written👏

i hope rajbir jaldi apne rishte ko sudhar le😊

nisha k sath vj ne kitna bura kia fir bhi she is consoling her😊 i m in love wid character of nisha❤️

sab se best part tha nisha ka viraj ko samjhana is part ko tune ekdam logically likha h wo bhi sahi emotions k sath yr mai ye part read krte waqt aise thia spcl magical hug for uh sissy👏kudos for dis part👏👏

i hope ki nisha ki mehnat rang laye aur viraj vj ko maaf krde😊

update nxt part soon😊


thank you so much sissy 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Awesome update. Luved each n every scene. But missed NIBIR scene in this update. Plzzz nxt update main ho sake toh thoda zaida NIBIR de dena. Thanx for the pm & update soon.

thanks roop 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks janvi 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: star.angel

Amaizing yaar 👏

Loved nisha 😳
Shez so sweet 😳
Superb 😊

thanks 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

thank you anu 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

It's an amazing FF Naina (I hope that's your name and not only username 😆 )
I loved every part... It was written really nicely...
Every part had different significances... You portrayed all of them fabulously...
I am waiting for your next update 😊
Do PM me 😃

thanks dear...
meri dbt ne tumhe meri story padha di ..😆 😆
thanks for appreaciation 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Niha205

very emotional update nishi😭😭loved loved loved it 😃

great work yaar👏

thank you so much niha..
it means alot
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Posted: 9 years ago
hello guys...
i know bht late hu...
but kya karu time hi nhi mil paa rha tha
chalo ab aa gyi hu to update lelo..😆


PART 9

KN House...


Kabir - (bedroom se nikalte hue) nisha...nisha...

Nisha - (kitchen se coffee leke ate hue) kya hua kabir itna chilla kyu rha hai ??

Kabir - (angry...sofe pe aake baith jata hai...gusse m nisha ko dekhta hai)

Nisha - (baby face bnake) awweee...mera hubby gussa h kya ?

Kabir - ha gussa hu... subh se tera kuch pta hi nhi... pta nhi kha hai... phone bhi ghar pe hai (angry...n lil irritated)

Nisha - awweee (coffee table pe rakh k... kabir k bagal m baith jati hai... apne hath ko kabir k neck pe encircle kar k apna head kabir k shoulder pe rakh deti h ) sorry...(cutely )

Kabir - ( smiles..) chal coffee pite h...

Nisha - (kabir k cheeks pull karte hue) hmmm...

(nisha n kabir coffee peete hue...)

Nisha - (monolouge...agar mere samjhane ka asar viraj sir pe hua h to wo pakka maa se milne ayenge.. viraj sir aur maa aapas m bat kar paye islie mujhe kuch bhi kar k kabir ko khi bahar leke jana hoga thodi der k liye... Taki ise pta bhi na chale k maa yaha h... warna ye fir bhadak jayega aur fir ise samjhane k liye mujhe iske mood shi hone ka intzaar karna padega)

Kabir - nisha...(patting nisha's shoulder)

Nisha - (apne thoughts k bahar ate hue) haa... tune kuch kha ?

Kabir - (confused ) kha khoyi hui h ??

Nisha - (kabir k left hand ko apne hath m lete hue...) kuch nhi yhi soch rhi thi ki... hum dono ko time nhi mil rha sath m...

Kabir - tu hi to h har waqt ghar se gayab rehti h (sad face bnake)

Nisha - awwweee...sho cute... chal abhi chalte h ?

Kabir - (confused) kha ?

Nisha - khi bhi... (lovingly)

Kabir - (smiles...nisha ko side hug karte hue...) ok wifey

Nisha n kabir leaves...

Viraj House

Viraj - (nisha ko phone karte hue) nisha phone bhi nhi utha rhi hai ?? maa kha hai ye hme kaise pta chalega ?? (worried)...

After sometime

KN house

Vj - (pani ki bottle leke apne room m jaa rhi hoti hai)

(suddenly piche se aawaj ati hai...MAA)

Vj - (shocked...after hearing MAA)(dheere dheere aawaj ka source jaanne k lie uss direction m turn karti hai)(sees viraj...)(smiles happily ...with yes full of tears...)

Viraj - (vj k kareeb ata h)

Vj - (viraj ko dekhte hue...smiles weakly...) s...s...sorry beta...

Viraj - (hugs vj tightly)...(emotionally) n..nhi maa aap sorry mat boliye...aapne humse kai bar maafi mangi par shayad hum hi itne kamjor pad gye the ki hum aapko maafi nhi de paye.. Aapne galti ki par use badi galti humne ki hai aapko bina bat ki saza dekar..(cries)

Vj - (hug break karte hue...viraj k aansu poch k uske face ko cupped karti hai)(crying) nhi viraj... humari galti thi islie humne maafi mangi... aapne gussa kia wo apka haq tha..aapne aapko uss bat ka zimmedar mat kahiye...

Viraj - (criying...) hum zimmedar hai MAA...(weakly) humne aapko kitna bura bhala kha... kitne gussa hue aap pe aur in sab bataon m humne apne gussa hone ki wajah janne ki bhi koshish nhi ki..

Vj - (crying)

Viraj - galti humari hai kyu k humne aapko uss bat ki saza di jiska haq hamara h hi nhi...

Vj - (crying...confused)

Viraj - ha maa... humse galti hui h kyu k humne aap pe gussa kia... jabki aapne hamare sath to kuch bhi galat nhi kia... balki hamare bare m jankar aapne aapni galti ke liye maafi mangi chahi...aur jiske lie aapne bar bar koshish bhi ki... par hum shayad samjh hi nhi paaye... (crying)

Vj - nhi beta...bas ...ab aapne aapko in bataon k zimmedar manna band kariye... aapne hume maaf kar dia humare lie yhi kaafi h...(viraj ke aansu pochte hue)

Viraj - (hugs vj tighly)

Vj - (cries happily)

Viraj - (smiles with tears) maa itne saalon m ek bhi din aisa nhi rha hoga jab humne aapko yaad na kiya ho... humne aap ko kitna yaad kiya ye hum aapko nhi bta sakte...laakhon sawaal liye hamesha yhi sochte the ki aisi kaunsi galti ho gai humse ki maa hume chod k chali gyi.. logo ko khud se door kar diya aur akelepan ko apna sathi bna liya...par un tanhaiyon m bhi humne sirf aur sirf aapko yaad kiya...saal beet te gye par ek umeed thi.. hume ye hamesha lagta tha ki humari maa humare paas wapaas jaroor ayengi.. (cries)

Vj - (viraj k aansu pochi h ...lovingly...uska hath pakad k use couch pe le jake baithati hai)

Viraj - (vj ka hath pakad k unhe bithata hai aur khud floor pe baith jata h...n vj k lap pe apna sir rakh deta hai...cries) par hume kya pta tha ki jis maa ka hum itne saalon se intzaar kar rhe hai unse hamari mulakaat aise hogi (sobs)

Vj - (cries ) viraj... Hum jante hai humari galtiyaan hai... p.. par ye bhi sach hai ki hum aaj bhi aapse utna hi pyaar karte hai... uss waqt aapko chod k jana humari majburi thi..(viraj k sir ko sehlate hue) hume aapko chod k jane se kitna dard hua h ye humse jayada koi samjh hi nhi sakta... Humne har pal aapko yaad kia h.. har pal aapke bare m sochte the.. aapki sare kaam , achievement ...sab ka pta hume newspaper , magazines se lag jata tha aur aapke in kamyabiyon ko dekh k khush ho liya karte the... hum aapko kabhi bhi bhool nhi sakte viraj...

Viraj - ( aansu pochte hue) jo ho gya so ho gya... purani baton ko bhool jaiye (vj k aansu pochta h) ab hum aapke sath rehna chahte hai...aur iss bar aapko khi nhi jane denge (making face like a kid)

Vj - (viraj k hairs ruffle karte hue...smiles) hum aapko chod k khi bhi nhi jayenge...

Viraj - (happily...khade hoke vj k hath pakad k ) to chaliye hamare sath humare ghar

Vj - (smiles...viraj k face pe touch karte hue) ek maa k liye apne sare bacche barabar hote hai.. humare liye bhi aap m aur kabir m koi frk nhi hai.. hum aap dono se hi bht pyaar karte hai... aapne hume maaf kar diya , hume apne sath le jana chahte hai in dono baton se hum bht khush hai... par viraj humara ek beta ab bhi humse naraaz hai (smiles with pain) aur use manana humari jimmedari hai kyu k wo humari galti ki wajah se hi humse naraaz baitha hai...

Viraj - (smiles happily seeing such a drastic change in vj's behavior) maa hum aapki bat samjhte hai... aur hume pura vishwas hai ki kabir bhi aapko jaldi hi maaf kar denge.. jaise Nisha ne hume samjh liya wo Kabir ko bhi samjha lengi... aur jald hi apni sari narazagi bhool jayenge..

Vj - (confused) Nisha ne tumhe samjhaya ??

Viraj - ha maa uss din jb hum yaha se chale gye the to nisha hamare ghar aai thi...(viraj VJ ko apne aur nisha k beech hue pure conversation ko batata h )

Vj - (sadly) humne Nisha k sath kitna bura kia hai fir bhi usne humare liye ye kiya... use humare aansu nhi dekhe gye.. hum puri koshish karenge k hum Nisha ko hamesha apni beti ki tarah pyaar de.(smiles)

Viraj - (hugs vj) ok mom... to ab hum chalet hai... hum aapka intezaar karenge... jaldi aaiyega..

Vj - (with tears...nod her head positively)

Viraj - (leaves...)

Vj - (hand fold kar k...bhagwaan jaise viraj ne hume hamari galti k liye maafi de di ...kabir bhi hame maaf karde..uski narazagi ab humse dekhi nhi jar hi ...cries)

After half n hour...

KH House

( nisha aur kabir haste hue...ek dusre ko chidhate hue ghar pe ate hai..)

Kabir - (ghar ka gate khula dekh k ) nisha tune ghar lock nhi kiya tha kya ??

Nisha - (isshh...tensed...ab kya bahana karu ghar na band karne ka ? ise pta chal gya ki maa yhi hai to fir gussa ho jayega)

Kabir - (nisha k shoulder pe pat karte hue) nisha.. main kuch puch rha hoon...

Nisha - w...w...woo main... k..kabir tub hi na...c..chal ander chal k bat karte h...(n nisha walk inside the house)

Kabir - ( confused) nisha ek minute...

Nisha - (worried)

Kabir - ( nisha k pas jata hai...) tu kuch chupa rhi hai...

Nisha - (shocked...ab sab gadbad ho gya) w...wo...

(as nisha was about to speak... kabir n nisha Vj ko ghar k dusre room(viraj's room) se nikalte hue dekhte hai...)

Vj - (sees nisha n kabir)

Kabir - (shocked...angrily sees nisha)

Nisha - (was about to say sth...but kabir uski bat bina sune gusse m vj ki taraf badhta hai)

Kabir - (angrily) aap yha kya kar rhi hai hai ??

Nisha - (kabir ka hold karti hai ) kabir ek minute meri bat sun..

Kabir - (nisha se apna hath chudate hue age badhta hai..)(angrily)

Nisha - (nisha kabir ko rokne k liye age badhti hai... Aur uska leg mat m fasta hai aur wo table se takra k floor pe gir jati hai) aaahhh...(shouts)

(kabir aur vj dono nisha ki taraf daudte hai)

Kabir - (worried) nisha...tu theek to hai... kha lagi...bht dard ho rha hai...

Vj - (worried) beta tum theek to ho...

Kabir - (vj se)... plss stay away

Nisha - mai theek hu...wo bs bs jhatke se pair mood gya..

Kabir - (nisha k pair ko touch karta hai..)

Nisha - aahhh...

Kabir - s..ssorry..sorry... tujhe dard ho rha h chal doctor k pas chlte hai...

Nisha - n..n..nhi... halka sa hi hai...dawa laga lungi to theek ho jayega...

Kabir - ok...(kabir nisha ko apni arm m uthata hai ..n apne bedroom m leke jane lagta hai...)

Nisha - (thank god iska gussa to shant ho gya... I m sorry hubby iss chot k natak k liye..but maine ye tujhe aur MAA ko kareeb lane k liye kiya hai... Agar m tujhe us time na rokti to tu fir apna mood kharab kar leta...fir unhi baton ko yaad karta... jo main nhi chahti... ab tujhe meri bat sunni hi hogi ...aur maa ko maafi bhi deni hogi...smiles naughtily)



hope you guys like it 😉

kisiko koi galti mile to plss batana 😆

waiting for ur likes n comments 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
awsome chaptr dear
Loved scene b/w viraj & vj
Beautifuly writtn

Plz pm me

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