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Posted: 10 years ago
šŸ˜‰ hi guys...
here i m with last part..
hope tum logo ko pasand ayega...

Nimissy thanks alot for last part (NIBIR DANCE SEQUENCE) šŸ˜‰



PART 14

Viraj - (mike leke stage pe) hello..hello guys...jiska humlog kaafi der se intezaar kar rhe hai wo dono bas a bane hi wale hai... so all of u get ready for their welcome... saurav , sukku all set ( flowers petals shower kar k liye ishara karte hue)

Saurav - yes sir all set (thums up dikhate hue)

Sukku - special song bhi ready hai ...(dj wale ko side hug karte hue) kyu DJ wale bhaiya...

Viraj - (smiles) good... (vasu ko dekhte hue) maa aap ??

Vasu - (kirti aur jwala ki taraf ishara karti h)

Kirti , jwala - all set sir (vasu ko aarti ki thali dete hue) ye..rhi aarti ki thali...

all - (smiles)

viraj - so...lights...(lights ko dim karne k liye ishara karta hai)

(lights dim ...everyone silent)

(Nisha and kabir comes hand in hand and lost in there own world) ( Niha in her golden lehenga with matching jewellery n kabir in golden sherwani n a mehroon colored sehra or u can say a simple pagadi )(both looking perfect and magnificient.)

Nisha - (coming out of her trance... Palace ko dekhte hue) kabir... Ye..yaha itna andhera kyu h...?? u sure na party yhi hai ??

Kabir - (apna phone nikal k msg chk karta hai) ha...nisha bhai ne address to ye hi send kia tha.. aur tu aise kyu puch rhi hai... Pa ka koi aur palace bhi hai kya ??(suspectedly)

Nisha - (confused) nah... chal..andar chal k dekhte hai...

Kabir - ha...sab ander hi honge...nay bhi light ka kuch issue ho gya hai yha...

(Kabir Nish ka hath pakadta hai aur dono palace jaise hi apna first step rakhte hai...ballon burst hone k awaaj ati hai joor se)

(Nisha dar k Kabir ko hug kar leti hai)

(dheere dheere light tez hoti hai n fulon ki bearish start hoti hai with a song in background)

Dil shagana da chadheya aao sakhiyon bhi (Nibir sees everyone watching them with smiles)

Mera sajana mera sajana ( Nish sees Kabir with tears n hugs him again)

Mileya sajana Milan vadhaayeeyaan ni (everyone shower flowers on lovebirds)

Sajan doli sajan doli leke aana ni mera (kabir break hug n kissed nisha's forehead)

O mera sajana

(songs stops n everyone claps n sukku , bunty , saurav whistles)

(vasu aarti ki thali k sath age jake Nibir k aarti kar k unka welcome karti hai)

(Nibir sits infront of the stage on a royal type sofa)

Saurav - (with mike in his hand) so all the ladies n gentleman... Lets welcome our LOVEBIRDS...aree...inke swagat m zordaar taaliyaan ( in his dramatic way)

Everyone - claps

Nibir - (see eachother) smiles

Saurav - (niBir ko dekhte hue) guys tumhe humlogo ka swagat ka tareeka kais alga ??

Kabir - (hath thumbs up se ishara karte hue) superb

Nisha - (shyly) smiles

Saurav - so..so...apna apna dil thaam k baithiye kyu k abhi bht kuch hai dekhne k liye...(winks) but..but... but... use pahle koi apse kuch kehna chahta hai... So over to her...

(stage pe lights off ho jati hai...)

Aaj humare liye bht hi khushi ka din hai...(a voice comes)

Everyone - (sbhi dhyaan se source of voice ko stage pe dhoodte hue)

(spot light on hoti hai...)(n everyone see vasundra standing in the middle of the stage with mike) (sablog vasundra k bat sunne lgat hai)(silence)

Vasu - ha...aaj humare liye bht khushi ka din hai.. kyu k hum aaj humare bacchon (Nibir aur viraj ko dekhte hue) ko itna khush dekh rhe hai... hume aisi khushi kabhi bhi dekhene ko nhi mili... Ye saari batein humare bacche jante hai... par aaj jo bat hum yha kehne aye hai wo bhi utni hi jaroori hai jitni baki batein...(with tears) Nemi uncle , aunty , Ramesh , laxmi ji aur aap sabhi...hum aap sabhi se apni galtiyon k liye tahe dil se maafi manga chahte hai.. humse jo galti anjaane m hui uske liye , aap sab ka dil dukhane k liye... (apna hath fold kar k ) hume maaf kar dijiye... aur humare bacchon ko apna aashirwaad dijiye...

Dadi - (apne aansu pochte hue) beti... humsab ne tanne maaf kar dia... ab ye dhona chod...are.. bte k shadi ki party hai... wo...kya kehte hai bacche log..enj..oy

Jwala - enjoyment dadi..

Dadi - ha whi...bs wo kar...

Vasu n all smiles n claps... (vasu stage se niche aake nisha aur kabir k forehead pe kiss karti hai...aur kabir k bagal mai baith jati hai.)

Kabir - (idhar udhar dekh k ) mom...

Vasu - ha...

Kabir - mom ...bade bhaiya kha hai ?? jab se ayah u dikhai nhi de rhe...

Vasu - (idhar udhar dekhte hue) abhi to yhi the...

(tabhi song start hota hai...n everyone sees on stage...)

Sunoh ek thi kanch ki gudiya (viraj nisha ko dikhate hue)
Suno ek thi pyar ki pudiya (moves forward)
Sadke
Uss pyar ke

Sunoh ek tha pind da shera (kabir k taraf dikhate hue)
Aaya kaske bandh wo sehara (kabir k sahre k taraf ishara karte hue)
Sadke
Uss yaar ke

Saji thi doli... wo
Chadha tha ghodi.. wo
Khoya jaane kahan inna sona pyar baliye

Jogi maahi heer ranjhana (n he dances in typical Punjabi style)
Sabnu jaake main ye bolna
Baat bolke
Raaz kholna

Dil.. thame hue (viraj sounds thoda sa sad )
Honta khada
Chupake se yun..

Door.. baithe hue (seeing nisha from the corner of his eyes)
Umara gaiya
Jane na tu..

Deewane ne di jawaani (saurav comes n side hugged viraj in dance )
Ke har ghum tu bhula de (sukku comes and hugs him from other side)
Deta hi raha sadaye
Ke dil se tu bula le
Tu chhad de ve
Jidd hun chhaj hute aaja
Dil tuta jaata sun pyaar doliya

Jogi maahi heer ranjhana (they all dance in typical Punjabi form )
Sabnu jaake main ye bolna
Baat bolke
Raaz kholna

Jogi maahi heer ranjhana (all fingers toward NIBIR- THE LOVEBIRDS)
Sabnu jaake main ye bolna
Baat bolke
Raaz kholna

(dance complete all smiles )

Saurav - (excited) maza aa rha hai...r u all enjoying ??

All - yes...(shouts)

Saurav - so maza ko aur badhane k liye let's welcome our VANAR SENA n others

All - claps

Maahi Ve Maahi Ve (kirti , jwala starts...dancing)

That's The Way Maahi Ve (saurav , sukku n bunty joins)
Tere Maathe Jhumar Damke (nisha k jewelleries ko dikhate hue)
Tere Kanno Baali Chamke Hai Re
Maahi Ve
Tere Haatho Kangana Khanke
Tere Pairo Payal Chanke Hai Re

Maahi Ve (all does maahi ve step in synk)
Naino Se Bole Rabba Rabba (saurav , sukku , bunty dances)
Mann Mein Dole Rabba Rabba
Amrit Ghole Rabba Rabba

Tu Soniye (all pointing towards Nisha)

( Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve )...(2)
That's The Way Maahi Ve
O Tere Aankhen Kali Kali
Tera Gora Gora Mukhdha, Hai Re
Maahi Ve
Teri Rangat Jaise Sona
Tu Chaand Ka Jaise Tukda Hai Re
Maahi Ve (sukku and saurav jumps from the stage in front of nibir)
Tere Gaal Gulabi Rabba Rabba (saurav nisha k cheeks k taraf point karte hue)
Chaal Sharabi Rabba Rabba (sukku pulls nisha toward the stage)
Dil Ki Kharabi Rabba Rabba (nisha ko dono apne dil ki taraf dikhate hue)
Tu Soniye

Jind Maahi Ve ... Aaja Mahi Ve ...(2) (stage pe sab sath m maahi ve step)
Barse Rangini Kaliyan Hai Mehki Bhini Bhini (vasu enters indicating towards flower petals ...and all throw flowers on nisha)
Baje Mann Mein Halke Halke Shehnai Re
Jitne Hai Taare Aanchal Mein Aa Gaye Sare (pointing toward kabir , viraj and nisha)
Dil Ne Jaise Hi Li Angdayee Re
Tu Jo Aayee Sajhke Mehndi Rachke (viraj and kabir comes n dance with her mother)
Chal Bachke Oh Soniye
Dil Kitno Ka Khaye Dhajke Oh Soniye
Jind Maahi Ve ... Aaja Mahi Ve ...(2) (all do maahi ve step)

Chanda Meri Chanda Tujhe Kaise Mein Yeh Samjaoon ( laxmi comes ...nisha k sir pe hath rakhte hue)
Mujhe Lagti Hai Tu Kitni Pyaari Re
Khusiyan Jitni Hai Sab Dhoondh Ke Laoon (dadi nisha k cheeks ko sehlate hue)
Teri Doli Ke Sang Kar Do Sari Re
Tu Jo Aayee ... Oh Soniye (saurav sukku...dadi aur laxmi ko tease karte hue)
Jind Maahi Ve ... Aaja Mahi Ve ...(2)

Tere Maathe ... Tu Soniye
Jind Maahi Ve, Jind Maahi Ve ... Aaja Mahi Ve ...(3) (all dances together)

Everyone comes down... sab apni apni place pe baith jate hai...Stage lights again go dim... nisha apne bagal mai dekhti hai...

Nisha - (confused)( ye bander kha chala gya ??) (bagal mai baithti jawala se dheere se puchti hai) jawalu kabir kha gya ??

Jwala - (confused) pta nhi nishu bro abhi to sabke sath hi the achanak kha chale gye...

Nisha - surav ya sukku se puch unhe jaroor pta hoga...(tabhi stage se kabir ki awaaj sunai deti hai)

Kabir - ahem..ahem...Mrs. Nisha Kabir Singh Rathore...

Nisha - (turant stage ki taraf dekhne lagti hai)

Sab stage ki taraf dekhne lagte hai...

Kabir - (lovingly...to nisha ) wifey 2 min gayab kya hua tum to bechian ho gai...

Saurav n sukku- whistle n hoot

Other - claps

Nisha - (smiles n blushes)

Kabir - (smiles n blushes) wifey want to say something... For you...

Tujse hi har subha ho meri,
Tujse hi har sham,
Kuch aisa rishta ban gaya tujhse,
Ki Har saaso mein sirf tera hi naam.

(kabir stage se niche ata hai...nisha k samne kneel down kar k uska hath apne hath mail eke)

Nisha - (blushes...smiles shyly)

Apni nigahon se na dekh khudko
Heera bhi tujhe patthar lagega,
Sab kehte honge chand ka tukda hai tu,
Meri nazar se dekh chand tera tukda lagega.

Everyone - claps...

Kabir sat on his knees...like a true gentleman ...looking intensely in her eyes he asked her to dance with him in their sign language by forwarding his right hand while she smilingly gave her right hand to him...he then stands...still looking in her eyes...

Dhoop se nikal ke
Chhaanv se phisal ke
Hum mile jahaan par
Lamha tham gaya


(both head towards stage)
he holded her both hand with his still looking into her eyes and pulled her towards him with a jerk...she gasped with a sudden jerk he then turn her around resting his chin on her shoulder...both closes their eyes to feel that warm touch and the world stops for them there

Aasmaan pighal ke
Sheeshe mein dhal ke
Jam gaya to tera
Chehra ban gaya


he then pointed his index finger towards sky and then again turn her towards him so that she can face him...he then touches his nose with his...pointing towards his face through his eyes

Duniya bhula ke tumse mila hoon
Nikli hai dil se ye duaa


He then took his step backward spreading his both hands looking towards her

Rang de tu mohe Gerua
Ranjhe ki dil se hai duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua


She then runs towards him and hugs him tightly...and then both of them rhyming in beats still standing in same position

Haan nikli hai dil se ye duaa
Ho.. Rang de tu mohe gerua


she then took her step backward she then joined her thumb and index finger then kisses it then touches it through forehead and leave it in air and then again came running in his arms

Ho tumse se shuru.. tumpe fanaa
Hai Sufiyana yeh dastaan
Main kaarwaan manzil ho tum
Jaata jahaan ko har raasta


he then holded her waist while her both hands encircled his neck they were moving to and fro looking in each other's eyes

Tumse juda jo
Dil zara sambhal ke
Dard ka wo saara
Kohra chhan gaya


He spin her round and round...while spinning their hands slips accidently...which made them away from each other...seeing each other in distance their eyes clearly reflects that without each other their life is blank and useless

Duniya bhula ke tumse mila hoon
Nikli hai dil se yeh duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua
Ho.. Ranjhe ki dil se hai duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua


He then comes towards her and took her in his safe embrace...which is solace for them...while their heart want to colour each other with colour of their pure love

O.. veeraan tha, dil ka jahaan
Jis din se tu daakhil huaa
Ik jism se.. ik jaan ka..
Darza mujhe haasil huaa


she looks at him emotionally saying through her eyes that the day u enter in my life ...u gave my life reason to live ...to love

Haan.. pheeke hain saare
Naate jahaan ke
Tere saath rishta gehra ban gaya


She then back hugged him both were still looking in each other's eyes...she then said him through her eyes that nothing is more important then u still rhyming in beats of music

Duniya bhula ke tumse mila hoon
Nikli hai dil se yeh duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua
Ranjhe ki dil se hai duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua


He then scoop her in air holding her waist and started moving round and round while she spread her both arms like a free bird

Haan nikli hai dil se ye duaa
Ho.. Rang de tu mohe gerua


he then made her stand on her feet both were still looking in each other's eyes forgetting the whole world...the world of love...


sorry for late update...

Waiting for ur likes n comments...😃


Edited by naina.majik - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous update šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
Nibir entry
All the dance sequence was fantastic šŸ‘
Do write epilogue 😳
Niyati_T thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
A very cute love story it was 😊
Do write more😃
Sujayricky thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mind blowing nishta šŸ‘
Loved it
Viraj ka dance šŸ˜†
Vaner sena šŸ˜‰
Nibir dance 😳 i loved it
Really it was a superb story šŸ‘
Do write more
Please update an epilogue please pretty please please 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
Unres
Superb update nishssy😊
The way viraj cousins n vasu says each other all set was perfectly written😊
Nibir ki entryā¤ļø
Then their aarti with superb songā¤ļø
U describe the song very well...
Love birdsā¤ļø
Then heer ranjhna song n mahi ve song...tune bahut superbly likha h yr... šŸ‘ šŸ‘
Kabir ki shayari was tabahiā¤ļø
Perfectly fitted with the situationšŸ‘šŸ¼
Nibir danceā¤ļø
Superb story nishssy...will miss reading dis
Jaldi nhi story start kr😊
Edited by itznimi003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update nishtha di..
Luved it soo much..
Dance sequences n all d songs n d
Way u narrated jst awsm
U ended d story z d saddest part..
Bt plz do write d epilouge..
I'll b w8ng 4 dat..
Once again I wud say u did commendable
job..Tysm 4 dis..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb ending to ur story
Plz write an epilogue to ur story
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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry for d late comment..
but it was a fab ending to a lovely story..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nishi yaar
very beautiful update
and a perfect one

Missing you a lot yaar😭

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