Nibir ff - Mystery( part 9 updated on page 58)

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Anya

@elysianights

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#321

Superb update...

Please continue soon...

Waiting for yor next update...

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poornima_15

@poornima_15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#322

happy to see an update from u ... it was another mysterious update ... few parts got solved few yet unsolved ... and the major mystery to abhi tak unsolved hi h "7 saal pehle kya hua tha ??" jldi updaye karo next part 😊 and i defenetly want part 7 .. 😊 update soon..

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mishrialways

@mishrialways

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#323

Yipee update mil gaya

awesome sarthak

the team work was nicely displayed

still they are not very near of solving the case

tu 7 Years phele wala raaz kab khol rha hai why do I feel ki koi connection hso dono cars mein

waiting for next

thnx for pm

Ritika

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mishrialways

@mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#324

Sarthak of possible investigation mein hun interrogation ko include kar

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Sarthak

@Sarthak0302

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: mishrialways
Sarthak of possible investigation mein hun interrogation ko include kar

matlab😕

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mansi

@mansi_as18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#326

This is getting more n more intersting... i liked the way kabir thought about the new make up man... the plot is going smoothly... and it is actually intriguing that what had happened 7 yrs ago that affects viraj till this time...

I havent seen any flaw till now... and m a very bad observer when it comes to reading as i m too much in taking the info then going by words or type... so sorry cant help on that... 😳

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mansi

@mansi_as18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302
matlab😕

convo with guard was interrogation for now isnt it... as there is no suspect so interrogation cant be possible... hain na 😕

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Sarthak

@Sarthak0302

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: mansi_as18
convo with guard was interrogation for now isnt it... as there is no suspect so interrogation cant be possible... hain na 😕

right mansi Jo bhi interrogation scenes te I have written all of them😆

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Sameeha

@Sameeha151

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Posted: 9 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302
no I don't feel bad at criticism actually it feels good that people r thinking so much and reading the story so attentively.
But what u pointed out is wrong because there is no suspect its just a mystery man...so jiska impersonation nahi hua uske emotions describe nahi ho sakte😆

Ohh