NIBIR STORY - LOVE BEYOND LIFE AND DEATH*updated 10/6* *page 133* end - Page 34

Originally posted by: Roopsha_98

Yaaay!! Mansi finally aapke story pe comment karne ka mauka mil gaya. I am sooo happy. Now coming 2 ur story. One of d bestesttt story ever. Emotional hai but I like emotional stories. All d parts r just awesome. Mindblowing,superb,outstanding... aur kya kya bolu??N d last update... haye mai to blush karte karte mar hi gayi. It was just awesome. Do continue soon!! Eagerly waiting for d nxt part.Luv u Mansi:-):-):-):-):-)Rupzz!!

😃 thank you ropz... I will update soon

unres ed on pg 46☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Manu this is not done.. Tu itna accha likhti hai ki mujhe mummy se roz daat padti hai net on karne k liye par itni acchi story k liye kuch bhi :)
Btw nisha to superfast nikli, bas ab dono hamesha sath sath rahe jab tak hai jaan nd i jst love them *blush*
Update daily
Mujhse wait nahi hota plz mujhpe thodi to daya karo :p

I read two parts in one time. Nisha ka kabir k baare mein janna nd after effects rula dene waale hai. Tanu ka saach janna and reaction sweet md surprising. Kabir ka confession yaar aansu aagaye . Uske baad toh sirf blush hi kar rahin hoon. Tere liye gify lakme ka kaajal najat na lage tujhe nd to ur writinga.

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Buasi🤗 Saru with her superlate comments😳 Thank U 4 waiting so much patiently🤗

Read three parts in a row😛 & Here is my chotu comment😆🤣

<font color="#3300FF">Part 5:</font>😳

Buasi Excellently penned down all emotions of NiBir...👏

The way U detailed how Nishu & Kabira broke down... is... just...👏👏👏 *Touched*

Want to quote 2 things..😳 @BOLD I liked them😃

The morning bought new rays but it's light never reached to the two souls.

It defined How incomplete is NiBir without eachother...👏👏👏

sauro yaar kaisi hitler biwi h teri... jab dekho mjhe injection lgati rehti h.." kabir hissed. " oe meri biwi k baare m kuch bola h na to saare daant tod dunga mai tere..." sauro said. " ha dno miya biwi mjhe hi maaro... ek injection deti h dusra daant tod rha h" he said making a baby face.

The only Light Moment dat made me Smile...👏

Thank U Dolly...😳Kya hai Kabira ka raaz??😕 Going to read next Part🤣

<font color="#3300FF">Part 6:</font>😳

Finally The Reveleation came...

Meine Heart disease guess ki thi... half sahi nikala mera guess

Beautifulll Update 👏👏👏 Started with Sorrow, Followed By Shackkk & Then...Soothing Happiness👏

har mushkil m ek waqt esa aata h jab sab kuch bikhra sa lagta h... shayad kabir k lie bhi ye vhi waqt h" she said.
jisne apni hasi se sabko apna bna lia... par us hasi k piche ka dard kisine nhi pehchana...

Loved @BOLD👏👏👏 Very true it is😳

" nishu di pls ro mat na... bhaiyu ko bilkul achha nhi lgta jab koi rota h to especially jab aap rote ho to... vo aapko bhot pyaar karte h na" tanu was suddenly giving them surprises.

Dolly looked at the duo and wondered how tanu whom they have considered a child is way more mature than they are.

Tanu U just Shackedd me bacha...😲🤗 & made me Sob tooo😵

My fav Part @PINK

<font color="#FF0099">Nisha kept ruffling his hair while kabir kept weeping clutching onto her waist.

<font color="#000000">Perfect Scenee...</font>

She came back with a small box in her hand and opened it in front of her. " Mjhe mere saare hak de de kabir... mjh par apne saare hak le le... " she said indicating towards the sindoor in her hand.

" to de de mjhe mera hak kabir... mere hisse ki khushi... tera gam sab baat lete h... mjhe mere jeene ki wajah de de..." she said with love. Kabir couldn't believe what this girl was demanding from him. He sighed and his hand moved on their own accord. He picked some of sindoor from the box and filled her hair parting without a second thought about it. Nisha closed her eyes engulfing the feel of his hands on her forehead. A tear of joy escaped from nisha's eyes.

<font color="#000000">Nishu ki har word gave me goose bermss... Perfect Scene againn..❤️ Love is selfless</font>
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NiBir Confession Kiss☺️☺️☺️

Going to read next part ☺️☺️☺️

<font color="#3300FF">Part 7:</font>😳

A Blashingg Part after soo much of torturing Parts...☺️
Buasi Mujhe bhi aapki Imagination par poora bharosa hai...🤣 Imagine My Comment😳

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Thanks 4 All PM's...!!!

Do write More😳 Q ki DMM☺️

thanks saru bhatiji... I imagined ur comment on part 7 ☺️ 🤣

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302

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Mansi...u again made me speechless..wonderful update

And yaar itna trust karti ho hamari imagination powers..ko..don't worry I didn't let u down😆

Ek baad kahunga..aisi updates ke starting me.."Adults only" Kar diya karo..🤣

thanks sarthak... age se yaad rakhungi

Originally posted by: poo10

Manu this is not done.. Tu itna accha likhti hai ki mujhe mummy se roz daat padti hai net on karne k liye par itni acchi story k liye kuch bhi :)
Btw nisha to superfast nikli, bas ab dono hamesha sath sath rahe jab tak hai jaan nd i jst love them *blush*
Update daily
Mujhse wait nahi hota plz mujhpe thodi to daya karo :p

thanks poo... ab kya karu thodi lazy hu na... but update jaldi milega

Originally posted by: nut-kut-86

I read two parts in one time. Nisha ka kabir k baare mein janna nd after effects rula dene waale hai. Tanu ka saach janna and reaction sweet md surprising. Kabir ka confession yaar aansu aagaye . Uske baad toh sirf blush hi kar rahin hoon. Tere liye gify lakme ka kaajal najat na lage tujhe nd to ur writinga.

thanks buddy... thanks for the gift

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

thanks sarthak... age se yaad rakhungi

arrey bura toh nahi..maan gayi..mansi..it was a joke..kyunki yaar tumne kuch...jyada hi..explain Kar diya..tha

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302

arrey bura toh nahi..maan gayi..mansi..it was a joke..kyunki yaar tumne kuch...jyada hi..explain Kar diya..tha

😆Jokes apart..it was a really mind blowing update

nhi bura nhi maan... ek baar pehle bhi daant kha chuki hu... ur is chakkar m... khair chhodo... m ok... i won't write this much again..