NIBIR STORY - LOVE BEYOND LIFE AND DEATH*updated 10/6* *page 133* end - Page 14

awesome update... happy happy wala... 😊
nisha daily wait karti h kab sham ho air wo ccrc jaye...
awww 😳

masti on beach... choo cute...
lovely update...
but end...
kabir wasn't acting I think... 😲
kuch gadbad h!!! koi kadi h Jo chut rhi h!!! car me v he suddenly got upset thinking something!!! year ab kabir ke sath kya tragedy h?? 😕

Superb mansi..this time also u were absolutely perfect...👏

Mujhe rulaane mein sabko itna mazaa kyun aata hain..???

AN NOTE- guys I know u all like my stories and I truly appreciate that with all my heart. and I always look forward to ur comments and ideas u give me through them. this story is actually very close to my heart actually way closer than my first story. The basic idea was itself its tragic yet surreal end which had popped up in my mind and the other things... I have just woven them around the end and it is indeed a tragic sad story. but looking at most of your comments, I have figured out ki k khaandaan doesn't want to read a tragic story or want it to progress it that way. on one of saru's comment in which she has said that she won't cry here I have told her that she don't need to because I have cried enough while writing this... but I can't keep ur request this time because I can't write it that way it actually won't give me the satisfaction as it will loss its essence and neither I can make u guys read it because of my sake... I want all of u to read it because u want to not because I want u too... so the only way I know now is ki should I abandon this story... that doesn't mean I won't complete it... I will... for myself... but I don't want to bother u all and make u read what u don't want to... its up to u guys to decide whether I should continue it or not... m in a dilemma from last nite and I can't figure out a solution plus I don't want to hurt you people...

Mansi I didn't mean anything wrong...it's really true that some stories don't have happy endings yet they are beautiful... Such a story is yours..!!

End it the way ypu want.. I am ready to take it... Har cheez ki addat honi chahiye na insaan ko 😆

Mansi...plzz continue..it...

mansi i don't cmnt cmnt on t story

plz don't discontinue it even if it's tragic it is amazing
I myself didn't wanted a sad ending bt it's also true that some stories are beautiful even if it's sad
this story can touch anyone's heart
plz write it the way you thought
even if it makes me cry I vl love to read it

lovely update mansi