NIBIR STORY - LOVE BEYOND LIFE AND DEATH*updated 10/6* *page 133* end - Page 16

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Aap ko jitna rulana hai rula do..😛 Bt I dont want NiBir separation...😡😆🤣 Bt I think Yeh zaroor honewala hai aapke A/N se mujhe aise Feels aa rahe hai.. 😕& Ur Story's Title also hints + First part of this stry where Kabir's behan wants him to be with her 4 lifetime & his hestitation alll r hinting towards dat🥺 Anyway I m preparing MYSELF 4 SHACKKK😵

PS: WL read & UNRES soon on the update..😳

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

saru bhatiji... ready for the shackk den? roegi to tu nhi... ye mjhe pta h...

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

I m prepared 4 NiBir separation...🤢 waise bhi maine abhi tak chap 3 nahi pada.. lemme firat read & UNRES.. 😆 rovugi nahi main...😎(dekho ab main rovu tab bhi nahi deikhegi maine Goggles pehna hai🤣)

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

pehle let them be one... separation door h... tab tk enjoy the emotional ride 😃

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

B4 commenting on this Update I want to confess something Buasi🤗😳

Mujhe aisa q lag raha hai ki aap KHNK repeat karne ka soch rahi hai???😲 Actually Mujhe yeh dbt tab hua wen Kabir had a monologue on car while returning frm beach..🤔 & The Last part just confirmed my guess... Ek aur baath 😉Niyu Mamma ki comment se main bhi sehmath hu...🤣

Now coming to update...👏👏👏 As usual U racked with ur words...👍🏼
I must say It was a happy Update..😃

I loved the start where Nishu dream abt her parents & U wrote it so well dat it touched me..😳

Mere face par😃 aise hasi aayi wen I watched Nishu smiling luking at sleeping Kabira❤️

She tiptoed towards the couch and sat on the floor. <font color="#3300FF">" thank u kabir...
thank u for everything... I will never cry again kabir.. I promise...
thank u for watever u did for me in past one week and what u did
yesterday... thank u for making me meet my parents one last time.. u
truly my angel " she said. Kabir took a turn towards her. He looked
like a small baby in his sleep... so innocent so carefree. She wanted to
place a kiss on his forehead and this time she did what her heart said.
She kissed his forehead and ruffled his hair a bit which made kabir
smile in his sleep. Seeing him smiling a genuine and happy curve
apperead on her face. </font>

@BLUE Soo sweet...👏

K panti of Kabira😉 & NiBir happy moments😊 Superb👏

Finally our Happy Nishu is back...😃

<font color="#FF0000">"shayad do tute hue lgo ko apne khoye hue hisse mil gye.."</font> she said
looking at nisha who was laughing at some kid's antics. saurav
understood what she wanted to say as he saw kabir coming to nisha with a
goofy smile on his face.

I liked this sentence tooo @RED👍🏼👏

NiBir +Tanu Beach Scenes were such a relief & Plesant to watch...

The song added more freshness to the scenes👏

My fav portions frm this part @Violet

<font color="#6600FF">Kabir was watching them as they ran towards the sea and started jumping like small kids on the water.
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<font color="#6600FF">Kabir's trance broke as tanu splashed a handful of water on his face.
" Tanu ki bachhi... ruk" kabir said and ran after her. He picked some
water and splashed on her but tanu ditched it in time so that water got
splashed on nisha's face. "Hawww... kabir" nisha said and ran after him.</font>

<font color="#6600FF">Kabir asked for time please and sat on the sand breathing heavily while
nisha too sat in front of him kneeling, catching on her breath. Kabir
admired her as she was laughing closing her eyes.</font>

<font color="#6600FF">Nisha and tanu bought a bunch of ballons and let them flew. Tanu clapped
happily looking at them while nisha looked at kabir communicating him
through her eyes.
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<font color="#6600FF">t was night by then and a very less no. Of people were present on the
beach. Kabir sat beside a rock with tanu on his left. " Aao nishu di.."
tanu called nisha who had bought ice creams for them. She handed over it
to tanu and kabir settled herself on the right side of kabir. " nishu
di story sunao na... " tanu asked. " tanu... mjhe koi story nhi aati...
kabir u tell her a story" nisha said. " Ha mere bhaiyu ko sab aata h"
she replied. Kabir ruffled his princess's hair and started narrating a
story.</font>

<font color="#6600FF">He looked at his princess who have fallen asleep in his arms when he
felt a weight on his right shoulder. He turned and looked at sleeping
nisha with her head on his shoulder.

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<font color="#6600FF">He looked at her innocent face admiring her beauty in moon light. She squirmed in her sleep and move onto him some more.</font>

<font color="#6600FF">Her scarf fall on his face due to a soft breeze and he can't help but smile at the beauty of the moment.</font>

Thank U Buasi 4 writing these scenes so BEAUTIFULLY...!!!!!!!👏

The Bestest part of this Update Which Made Me Awww☺️ & I had given a KT 4 dat adorable Scene☯️ @Orange Kabhi nazar na lage 🤗
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Kabir encircled his right arm around nisha securing her while the sea
waves touches their feet in a slow rythemic manner making it a blissful
moment. Kabir felt so blessed to have two precious girls of his life in
his arms. He wanted to cherish this memory of them for a lifetime and
more. He slowly put a feathery kiss on tanu's forehead and then at
nisha's hair and closed his eyes in satisfaction. </font>

Sooo... Sooo... Beautiful❤️ it was to watch such a Swweettt Sceneee☯️ Hayeee❤️

Then Kabir's Selftalk as I told My reaction at the start of the comment & abt last scene too😊

Waiting 4 the Most UNEXPECTFULLY EXPECTED Shackkk

Thanks 4 PM😳
Sorry 4 Superlate comments😳

Do write more🤗 Q ki DMM (Happiness..😆)😳😆🤣