a nibir story- TU JO MILA *updated 7/9 on page 35* - Page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Suhani_12

Superb update Mansi

Bed scene was🤣🤣

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Posted: 10 years ago
🤣 🤣 😆
Posted: 10 years ago
awww... 😳
nishu ne kabiraa ko mana liya...
kabir ki k-ness and nishu ki j-nesss 🤣
they sooo cute 😳
nishu ko phirse chakkar ... 😲
hua kya h use??? 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago

TJM - 6


Kabir was scared seeing her like this he remembered how nisha fainted on the previous night too. He cursed himself for not taking care of her in his anger. He immediately took her in his arms and kissed her forehead mumbling a sorry to her. " m sorry nisha... " kabir said taking her to the hospital. He raced his car in full speed and gave it a halt in front of the hospital. He took her in and got her admitted immediately.


Nisha's head throbbed badly as she opened her eyes. " kabir... " she said trying to recognise her surroundings. " mrs nisha... how are u feeling" a nurse asked her. She nodded and asked for kabir. " he had gone to bring ur medicine... he will be back soon" she said and left. " Offo ye to btao ki hua kya h mjhe" she asked as she closed her eyes again.


" Nisha... kaisa lg rha h" she heard her name in a sweet melodies voice. She smiled and replied with her eyes closed " achha lg rha h kabir ". " nishu mjhe na tjhe ek bhot imp baat btani h" kabir said in a serious tone. She opened her eyes and looked at him. " Kya" she asked. " vo ye ki... ki... ki mjhe na.. kisi se bhoot pyaar ho gya h... ur mai ab uske bina jee nhi sakta ur ab tjhe uske sath adjust karna padega" he said looking down in such a serious way. Nisha slapped kabir " kya bola tne kabir ek to mai yha bimaar padi hu... upar se tu esi baat kar rha h.." she said and started beating him. " U donkey monkey duffer idiot gadha..." she was in her jhansi ki rani mode. " are are nishu ruk na... hospital m to violence mat kar... ruk" kabir said trapping her hands behind her head. Nisha looked at him angrily. " tjhe jaana nhi h ki vo kaun h" he asked huskily. " bta k to dekh... fir btati hu" she hissed. He smiled wickedly and placed her and his hand on her belly. " ye hai... jisse mai bhot bhot bhot pyaar karta hu..." he said looking in her eyes lovingly. Nisha took some fractions of second to understood what he meant. " sach.?" She asked. " much.." he said placing a kiss on her forehead. A tear of happiness rolled down her cheek and she hugged kabir. " ur pregnant nisha...u gonna be the best mother nishu..." kabir said hugging her back. " and u gonna be the best k father" she said hitting his arm. " u scared me" she said. " nisha... m sorry" kabir said and wiped her tears. " but m angry too... pehle kyu nahi btaya nisha ki teri tabiyat thik nhi h... doc ko bhi nhi dikhaya... ur itna door chali aae" kabir faked anger. " Tere pass ana chahti thi kabir... fir mai kis haal m hu ye mayne nhi rakhta.." she said making him look into her eyes. Kabir looked at her who was looking back at him with all the love in herself for him. Kabir leaned and kissed her juicy lips softly mumbling a thank you. " thank u nisha... mjhe meri zindgi ka best gift dene k lie". Nisha immediately responded and kissed him back hungrily. " Thank u kabir mjhpe itna pyaar lootane k lie" she mumbled. They kissed each other with the high end passion for each other.


"Ahmmm...ahmmm" some voices broke their moment and they parted away to see the full cousin gang standing at the door with hands on their eyes. " aap dno ka hospital romance ho gya ho to hm aankhe khole" kirti asked teasingly while others giggled. " ji sali sahiba... khool lijie... waise what a timing ha" kabir said and frowned. Nisha blushed pink while others giggled some more. " CONGRATULATIONS WOULD BE PARENTS" they shouted turning nisha in a shade of darker pink. " thank u " kabir replied " waise sab mere romance k dushman h... koi na koi beech m aa hi jata h" he said. " mister agar tmne romance na kiya hota... to ye yha hospital m na hoti samjha " dolly said teasingly. Kabir made a cute baby face. " awww... kabir stop making baby faces... now to grow up... u two gonna have a baby soon" umesh said hitting kabir's head playfully. Kabir and nisha gave them silly smiles while all of them shook their heads.


" kaisi tabiyat h nishu" dolly asked patting her head. " ekdum thik nhi h... madam ne apne aap ko itne mahine se itna stress kar ke rakha h ki inka bp low ho jata h... islie she fainted" kabir complained even before nisha could open her mouth. " nishu... u r mad or what" dolly squealed. " sorry dolly di" she said in a small voice. " waise... the fault isn't entirely hers... maine bhi iska dhyaan nhi rakha... m sorry too" he said guilty. Nisha looked at him and nodded in a no saying he wasn't at fault. "Awww... how cute u too are" kirti said looking at them.


" chalo lets go home... bakio ko bhi to good news sunani h na" sukku said. Kabir helped nisha and they headed towards gangwal house.


The night bought celebration for the big family and everyone was so happy for kabir and nisha. Everybody blessed the couple while kabir was on cloud nine. After the party he took nisha to the terrace.


" nishu... " kabir said. " kabir... u don't need to say anything... I understand" she said giving him a side hug. " nhi nishu... kh lene de kuch baatien jo hmesha se kehna chahta tha" he said. " Pta h nisha... ek time tha jb mjhe ye lagta tha ki aakhir mai itna akela kyu hu... kyu koi nhi h mere pass... kabhi nhi socha tha ki mai kisi se itna pyaar karunga ki khud ko hi bhool jaunga... ye pyaar ur shadi hmesha mjhe filmy ur bekaar ki baatien lagti thi... fir jabse tjhse mila... tere sath ladte jhagdte... prblms ko tackle karte karte pta nhi kab... kab tjhse itna pyaar ho gya ki ab tu ur mai alag nhi lgte mjhe... ur ab jab hmara baby is dunia m aane wala h... to itna complete mehsus ho rha h ki... " kabir choked. " ki jaisa pehle kabhi nhi lga... hai na kabir..." she asked softly. Kabir just nodded. " itna sab kehne ki koi jarurat nhi thi... bus ek baar mjhe apne seene se lga leta to mai sab samaj jati kabir" she said. Kabir looked at her with tears.



Aashiyana mera saath tere hai na

Dhoondte teri gali mujhko ghar mila

Aab-o-daana mera haath tere hai na

Dhoondte tera Khuda mujhko Rab mila

Tu jo mila lo ho gaya main qaabil

Tu jo mila to ho gaya sab haasil haan!

Mushkil sahi aasaan hui manzil

Kyunki Tu.. Dhadkan.. Main Dil...


Kabir took her in a tight bone crushing hug and nisha reciprocated with the equal intensity.


Rooth jaana tera

Maan jaana mera

Dhoondhte teri hansi

Mill gayi khushi

Raah hoon main teri

Rooh hai tu meri

Dhoondhte tere nishaan

Mill gayi khudi



Kabir cupped her face and touched her forehead with his. Nisha let her tears fall at the moment of joy they were sharing.


Tu jo mila.. ho gaya main qaabil

Tu jo mila.. to ho gaya sab haasil

Tu jo mila.. aasaan hui manzil

Kyunki Tu Dhadkan.. Main Dil...


She kissed his hands and then his forehead wiping away his tears and gesturing him not to cry but just enjoy their new found happiness.



Fiqrein sabhi dhuaan hui

Farkon se dil darta nahin

Chaaha tujhe iss tarah

Chahat se dil bharta nahin


Seedhi lage tirchi dagar

Chalne se dil thakta nahin

Meetha lage aisa safar

Rukne do dil karta nahin


He assured her through his eyes and kissed away her tears too. " u gave me everything nisha... jo maine shayad kabhi socha bhi nhi vo bhi" he said.


Tu jo mila.. aa..

Tu jo mila.. ho gaya main qaabil

Tu jo mila.. to ho gaya sab haasil.. haan!

Tu jo mila.. aasaan hui mushqil

Kyunki Tu dhadkan.. Main dil...


Nisha smiled at her loving husband as he bent down and kissed her belly whispering " I love you too baby...". She felt so complete and overwhelmed. Nisha too bent down on her knees and kissed him softly " I love my baby's father" she whispered. Kabir encircled her waist and kissed her back while nisha took support of his arms kissing him to oblivion.


Edited by mansi_as18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Epilogue -


Present


Nisha's eyes were moist again remembering the night when she felt someone's hand on her shoulder and she saw kids sleeping in front of her in each others lap while only nishank was awake.


Nisha - kabir... tu kab aaya..


Kabir - ( came in front of her) jab tu hmari sabse khoobsurat yaad hmare bachho k bachho k sath share kar rhi thi..


Nisha - m sorry kabir...


Kabir - kya nisha ab us baat ko kitne saal guzar gye h ye bhi yaad nahi ur tu fir bhi mjhe har baar sorry bolti h...


He wiped her tears.


Nisha - tere sath bitaya har pal hmesha meri aankho k saamne rehta h kabir... waqt kitna bhi guzar jae... tera pyaar waisa ka waisa hi h...


Kabir - hmara pyaar nisha...


Nisha smiled at him and he bend and kissed her forehead. She blushed and made him look towards the kids.


Nisha - kabir... kuch to sharam kar yaar


Kabir - poori zindagi sharam nhi ki ab kya karu...


He said and kissed her cheeks again.


Nishank - dadu dadi... aap dno ki love story best h...


Kabir hugged nishank while nisha kissed his forehead. Kabir looked at nisha and they both felt blessed to witness this moment in their life where after all these years they were still together and forever.


Shayad this is what people call happily ever after... where love never ends nor the magic.





hush... guys finally its finished... i hope niha jaisa tjhe chahie tha ye waisa hi ho... 😳
Edited by mansi_as18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Kabir is certified besharam 😆
Moral of the story...
Kabir K tha, K hai aur K hi rehga 🤣
Age jaye bhaad main 🤣
And yup this what when we say.. Happily lived after
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
fir se res🤣
unres
loved d way kabira tells nishu abt dat news🤣

kabira k kahin ka 🤣

nishu is preggy😊

loved der kiss❤️😳

ye cousins hmesha galat waqt pe hi tapakte h🤣

congo would be parents😊

loved d way kabir told dolly abt nishu's carelessness n in nxt sec. he says dat m too responsible for dis aww my kabira

loved nibir's terrace scene it was so emotional n romantic❤️

loved d way he kissed his baby awww

epilogue

kabir abhi bhi nhi sudhra...🤣 k kahin ka

loved der romance as dada dadi❤️

nishu abhi b kabira ko us baat k liye sorry bolti h...

nishank awww

Shayad this is what people call
happily ever after... where love never
ends nor the magic.


@pink dis line takes my ❤️ just loved it
Edited by itznimi003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mansi superb...loved the ending part and epilogue...
Although a standing ovation is also less..but 👏
U r...simply perfect when it comes to writing...
Super happy ending...
Thode tips writing ke mujh jaise amateur ko bhi dedo
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Posted: 10 years ago
res
unres
beautiful update mansi 👏 👏
perfectly n magically described
I felt as if I was watching nibir
I could feel their emotions
I was just lost in the story
u r a perfectionist
no one can write it the way u did 👏
Edited by crazyvaishu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res again 😃
Unresed on pg 38
Edited by Piya1199 - 10 years ago

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