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Posted: 10 years ago
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WRITTEN BY- mansi





Epi - 337


Scene - 1

Dolly's office


AR was in his cabin thinking about what just dolly said. " itni wajahe kafi h khush rehne k lie..." her voice ringed in his head.


Aisha ( AR'S sister) - kya baat h raj... aaj itni der tk office m kyu ho...


AR - are di aap... aap yha kyu aae... mai to aa hi rha tha ghar


Aisha - raj... apni behen se jhoot bolna band karo... ur ye btao ki kya soch rhe ho...


AR - vo di... aaj miss gangwal ne kuch baatien kahi... unhi k baare m soch rha hu...


Aisha - esa kya kh dia usne...


AR then told aisha about his and dolly's conversation.


Aisha - (smiling ) to isme itna sochna kya h raj... sahi to kha usne... tm khud socho aaj tk tmne khud ko traumatise karke kya haasil kiya h... na tm chain se so paate ho na haste ho na muskurate ho... tmne bus khud ko khoya h...


AR - par di...


Aisha - par kya raj... tm khud btao jis tarah tm jeete ho kya use jeena kehte h... tm khud ko saza dete ho ur sath m mjhe bhi...


AR - di aap esa kyu kh rhe ho...


Aisha - kyuki ye sach h raj... kya aapko lgta h aapko ese dekhke hme khushi milti h... hmara raj jo hmesha hasta rehta tha vo ab ek muskurahat se bhi darta h... hme hmara bhai de dijie raj please.


AR - di... par mai vo sab kaise bhool jau... bhoolna chahta hu par...


Aisha - raj... aapne dolly ko dekha h na... dekha h unhe apne lie ladte hue... vo jitna bahar dunia se ladi h... utna hi khud se bhi... ur aap ko to bus apne aap se us yaad ko door karna h... kya itna nhi kar sakte aap...


AR looked at aisha with tears while aisha just hugged her little brother patting his head.


Scene - 2

Viraj's house


Nisha - (trying to lighten the mood) agar aap dno bhaiyo ka bharat milap ho gya ho to kya hm log dinner kar sakte h... aapki behna intzaar kar rhi h.


Viraj and kabir looked at nisha who was standing at the door smiling.


Kabir - tjhe kyu itni prblm ho rhi h...


Nisha - kyuki mjhe bhook lgi h... ur maa ne kheer bnai h to...


Viraj - maa ne kheer bnai h.?


Nisha - ha par mjhe lgta h aap dno ko to kheer m koi interest h nhi to mai ur alisha hi kha lenge... aap log carry on karo...


She said and walked towards dining table.


Kabir - ( with most serious look) bhaiya yeh sab to thik h par ek ur bhot imp. Baat btani h...


Viraj - kya hua kabir


Kabir - vo baat ye h ki... kheer khatre m h... nisha ki bachhi ek no. Ki bhukkad h sab kha jaegi...


Viraj took a min to understand what he said so seriously and when he understood he started laughing like anything.


Viraj - aap kabhi nhi sudhrenge kabir...


Kabir - never... are bade bhaiya vo chodiye... kheer ko bachana h...


Kabir said and ran outside like a small kid. Viraj kept smiling seeing his antics and promised himself that he will take utmost care of his brother now.


Scene - 3

Dolly's room


Dolly was making her bed when she heard her door opening.


Dolly - ( without turning) tu is time yha kya kar rha h saurav


Saurav - (amazed) tjhe kaise pta ki mai hu


Dolly - ( smiling ) tere alawa is time ur kaun aa sakta h... waise bhi I knows ur presence.


Saurav - not bad ha dolly... I m impressed...


Dolly - shut up... ab bta yha kya kar rha h... papa ne dekh lia na to bhot gussa honge...


Saurav - dolly mai tjhse baat karne aaya tha yaar... chhat p chale?


Dolly looked at him who was looking a bit emotional and nodded in a yes.


On terrace


Dolly - kya baat h saurav...


Saurav - dolly... vo... mai... court se aane k baad jo hua... tu thik h na...


Dolly - m totally fines saurav... ha waapas aake thoda emotional ho gyi thi par ab bilkul thik hu... kyuki mjhe kisi baat ka koi darr nhi h...


Saurav smiled looking at her. They sat on the bench.


Dolly - saurav... tujhse kuch puchu...


Saurav - ha dolly... isme puchne wali koi baat h kya... jo dil m h bol de...


Dolly - saurav... mera baby... mai use achhe se...


Saurav - shhh... dolly first thing... hmara baby... dusri baat we will raise him together... and don't keep any doubt on urself... u will be an amazing mother... u got that?


Dolly just smiled and rested her head on his shoulder while saurav cherished this moment.



Scene - 4

Viraj's house ( kn room )


Nisha entered her room after completing her work and found kabir at the window. Nisha walked upto him and stood with him resting her head on his chest in a half hug.


Nisha - missing papa?


Kabir smiled at her and looked at her deep orbs.


Kabir - no... just thanking god... mjhe mere bade bhaiya waapas karne k lie... ab shayad papa ki itni yaad na aaye...


Nisha - m so happy kabir... u got what u deserve... love of ur family...


Kabir completed the hug.


Kabir - u know why I got all this...


Nisha - ( drowning in his eyes) why...


Kabir - because I have you... jabse tjhse mila hu na... jo jo chaha h sab mila h mjhe... ur sabse badkar tu mili h... I luv u nisha...


Nisha - ur jabse mai tjhse mili hu... maine khud ko paya h... I luv u kabir...


Nisha said placing a feathery kiss on his cheek. Kabir tightened his grip around her.


Kabir - irada kya h madam...


Nisha - mera to koi irada nhi h mr. Hubby...


She said winking...


Kabir - achha...par mera to hai... dear wifey...


Nisha saw the naughty glint in his eyes and started moving backwards while kabir turned and started moving towards her.


Nisha - dekh kabir door rh


Kabir - ohho wifey... ab irada bnaya h to poora karna to banta h na...


Soon nisha got stuck between the wall and her smirking husband who was hell bound on teasing her senses.


Nisha - kabir... dekh maa...


Kabir smirked and pulled her on himself.

Kabir - wifey... tmhare bachne k koi chance nhi h... koi ur bahana socho...


Kabir bend on her started placing soft feathery kisses on her face. She just couldn't do anything but melted in his arms. He looked at her as she encircled her arms around him tightly. He just stared at the half parted rosy juicy lips of hers and took a sharp breath before tasting the heaven behind them.



Scene - 5

Viraj's house ( kn room )


Kabir woke up as he felt a weight on his chest. He turned and looked at the most beautiful site of his morning. Nisha was in a deep sleep and kabir lie there admiring her blissful beauty. How blessed he felt to have her in his arms. He just cuddled her and pinched her nose adorably. Nisha woke up and looked at his handsome face on which a sweet smile was playing.


Nisha - kya hua hubby... uthne ka irada nhi h kya...


Kabir - tha to... par ab soch rha hu raat wala irada jyada achha tha... kyu?


Nisha blushed and hit him.


Nisha - subah subah k panti chalu... chal ab tayar hoja... academy nhi jana... kal competition h yaad hai na...


Kabir sighed and nodded.



Scene - 6

Dance academy


Alisha - are sukku... aaj sabse pehle aa gye...


Sukku - ha vo socha thoda ur practice karlu... tmhe match karne k lie practice ki jarurat to h na...


Alisha - kya baat h sukku... I like ki tm apne career ko itni ahmiyat de rhe ho...


Sukku smiled at her.


Sukku - tm thik ho na alisha


Alisha - hmmm... kind of... I mean...


Sukku - alisha... u know what... u r lucky ki tmhe itni achhi opportunity mili h... just go and grab it na... kya pta yha se kismat tmhe khi ur le jae... ur tm bilkul fikr mat karo... tmhe koi bhi prblm ho to we are just a phone call away...


Alisha - I know sukku and thanks for being such a great friend of mine.


Sukku and alisha smiled.


Sukku - achha bhai tmhe to job mil gya... par kam se kam mera to khayal karo... chalo practice karte h...


Alisha nodded and they started practicing.


Scene - 7

Viraj's house


Kabir and nisha entered the hall bickering as usual.


Vasu - kabir... ye kaunsa time h kaam p jaane ka... see how late u r


Kabir - ye sab aapki is bahu ki wajah se hai maa... ek to raat bhar mjhe sone nhi deti ur fir upar se subah subah mjh par apna 100 kg ka weight daal deti h... kumbhkaran khi ki...


Vasundhara looked at him with mouth wide open while kabir looked here and there embarrassed as soon as he realised what he said. Nisha wished that somehow she became invisible to hide her face.


Vasu started laughing while kabir and nisha turned tomato red.


Kabir - m..m...m...mai jata hu bhot late ho rha h...


Kabir literally ran outside the house.


Nisha - m...m...m...mai abhi aati hu maa...


She too ran inside hiding her crimson red face.


Vasu still stood there laughing and shooking head at the two lovebirds.






A/N- lo aaj ka maha epi... kal ka compensation 🤣


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Posted: 10 years ago
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EPISODE -338(by shibu)

Scene 1



Kabir entered the rehearsal hall to find Sukku and Alisha rehearsing.

Kabir- Itni bhi rehearsal mat karo ki haddiyan toot jaayegi...

Sukku- Kuch toh shubh-shubh bolo yaar...

Kabir- Ok sirf Suketu...

Alisha- Kya baat hai Bhai? Aaj acche mood mein ho aap? Lagta hai Bhabhi ne...

Kabir- (interrupting her) rehearsals continue karo... (in mind)Har koi mere aur Nisha ke peeche haat dhoke pade hai...

They rehearsed continuously for 4 hours

Sukku- Main kal ke liye bahut jyaada excited hoon...

Alisha- main bhi...

Kabir- Aaj ke liye I think itni rehearsal kaafi thi...

Alisha- Sahi kaha aapne...

Alisha and Kabir went to Viraj's house while Sukku went to Gangwal House. Vasundhara was talking with Priyanka on the phone.

Vasundhara- Aap kab waapas aa rahe ho?

Priyanka- parso tak aa jaaungi main...

Vasundhara-aapka wait karungi main...

She hanged the call.

Vasundhara- Kabir, parso Priyanka Delhi se waapas aa rahi hai...

Kabir-(happily) Wow! That's nice! Nisha ki training bhi jaldi shuru ho jaayegi, humara competition aur Priyanka bhi parso waapas aayegi... Waise Nisha hai kahan?

Vasundhara looked at him with mischief in her eyes.

Kabir- Main aise hi puch raha hoon...

Vasundhara- Woh Gangwal shop pe gayi hai...

Kabir-(to avoid any more teasing) Main change karke aata hoon...

He went in his room. Alisha was quiet all along and Vasundhara noticed this.

Vasundhara- Arrey Alisha, kya hua?

Alisha- Kuch nahi aunty... woh mujhe Delhi mein choreographer ki offer mili hai...

Vasundhara- (happily) Yeh toh kitni acchi khabar hai...

Alisha- Kitne saalon baad mujhe ek family mili thi aur unhe chod ke jaana...

Vasundhara-Beta, ek baat yaad rakhna... Chahe jitni bhi ho Dooriyan ...Dil ke rishto mein hoti hai nazdikiyaan... Agar aap humse door gaye bhi... toh mat bhuliye ki rehte hai aap humare dil mein hi...

Alisha smiled.

Vasundhara- Ab yeh rona-dhona band kijiye...Nisha aur Viraj aate hi honge... aap aaj yahin ruk jaayiye...

Alisha- ji...

After a few moments Kabir came and they started talking when Nisha came.

Nisha- Hey everyone...

Vasundhara- Nisha, aaj Alisha humare saath hi ruk rah hai...toh tum fresh ho jaao... Hum Alisha ko humari team work ka magic dikhate hai...

Kabir- (shocked) Matlab aaj Nisha ke haat ka khaana...

Nisha gave her a steern look and Kabir mouthed a "Sorry" Alisha giggled.

When Viraj came home, he was surprised to see family waiting for him with smiles on their faces. They decided that they would have lunch together.



Scene 2



Kabir- Waah aaj trideviyon ke haath ka khana khane milega..bas isse khane ke baad hum zindga bach jaye..

Alisha made a face ad Vasundara pulled his ears..

Kabir- Sorry Sorry...

Nisha came back from the room and joined her family at the table. They all noticed that Viraj was in a tensed mood.

Vasundhara- Kya baat hai Viraj? Aap todhi pareshaan dikh rahe hai...

Viraj-Do hafte baad Jaipur Sports meet hone waali hai, aur humare academy mein se 2 ladkiyan jaane waali thi, par ek ka kal accident ho gaya and she has fractured her hand.

All were shocked.

Kabir- Bhaiya, yeh sports meet toh aapke liye bahut important hai naa?

Viraj- Haan Chhote...

Nisha- Main kuch bolu?

Kabir- Abhi pakka mat... Serious discussion chal raha hai...

Nisha rolled her eyes and continued.

Nisha- Kya main participate kar sakti hoon?

All were surprised.

Vasundhara- (After recovering from the shock) Bilkul beta...

Viraj- Agar aapko koi problem nahi hai toh, please do so...

Kabir-(happily) Wah wifey! Kitne dino baad hoshiyaari ki baat ki hai tune...

Nisha-(annoyed) Tu chup ho jaa, samjhe? Kuch bhi bolta rehta hai... Subah bhi... (she kept quiet remembering the morning incident)

Vasundhara-(mischievously) Haan, kuch bhi bol dete ho tum Jojo...

NiBir blushed and Viraj was confused.

Viraj- Ab aapne kya kiya Chhote?

Alisha(Teasing them)- Bhai aisa bhi kya keh diya.. Hume bhi bato na...

Vasundhara- (giggling) Hum aapko batate hai Viraj...

Kabir got a call and he excused himself

Nisha- Main kitchen mein se paani laati hoon...

And by mistake, Kabir pushed Nisha, while Vasundhara,Alisha and Viraj tried to control their laughter. The youngsters then went to Gangwal house to chill with the cousins and returned late night, all tired. Vasundhara was happy to see her sons, daughter-in-law and daughter like figure all together... After all, that was her dream, wasn't it?


Scene 3



*Next day*

Nisha woke up to find Kabir still sleeping. She woke him up and reminded him about the competition. After getting ready, they had breakfast with Alisha, Vasundhara and Viraj.

Alisha- Bhabhi, all the best, aaj aapka first day hai naa Lakshya Academy mein...

Nisha- thanks Alisha...

Vasundhara- Beta yeh lo dhai cheeni...

She fed her some yoghurt and Nisha took her blessings. Viraj and Nisha left for Lakshya Academy, while Alisha and Kabir left for the academy.

Nisha was excited. After so many months, she was going to practice shooting again. She went on the grounds and all present there were surprised when Nisha didn't miss her aims for three consecutive trials.

Viraj- Lagta hai, iss baar Lakshya Academy hi jeetegi...

Nisha- thank you sir...

The rest of the day was spent practicing.

Scene 4

All the participants of the dance competition were gathered at the venue. Sukku, Alisha, Kabir and the team were all excited. Nisha joined them.

Comparer- And next, we have on stage Mr. Suketu Gangwal and his partner Alisha, from Jaipur Dance Academy. The venue was filled with applause. After everyone wished them, Sukku and Alisha stepped on the stage.

Tu hi ye mujhko bata de
Chahun main ya naa
Apne tu dil ka pata de
Chahun main ya naa (x2)

Itna bata doon tujhko
Chaahat pe apni mujhko
Yun ton ahiikhtiyaar
Phir bhi yeh socha dil ne
Ab jo laga hoon milne
Poochhu tujhe ek baar

Tu hi ye mujhko bata de
Chahun main ya naa
Apne tu dil ka pata de
Chahun main ya naa


Aisi kabhi pehle hui naa thi khwaahishein
O.. kisi se bhi milne ki
Naa ki thi koshishein
Uljhan meri suljha de
Chaahun main ya naa
Aankhon aankhon mein jataa de
Chaahun main ya naa

Mere chhote chhote khwaabhain
Khwabon mein geet hain
Geeton mein zindagi hai
Chaaha hai, preet hai
Abhi main na de khoon khwaab woo
Jin mein na tu mile
Le khole honth maine
Ab tak the jo sile

Mujhko na jitna mujh pe
Utna iss dil ko tujhpe
Hone laga aitbaar
Tanha lamhon mein apne
Bunti hoon tere sapne
Tujhse hua mujhko pyaar o o..
Poochungi tujhko kabhi naa
Chaahun main ya naa
Tere khaabon mein ab jeena
Chaahun main kyun naa!

Tu hi ye mujhko bata de
Chahun main ya naa
Apne tu dil ka pata de
Chahun main ya naa

After all the performances ended.

Comaprer- And its time fro the results. In the "Tashan" category, which was for the dance teams, Jaipur Dance Academy has won, and not only that, Jaipur Dance Academy's Suketu Gangwal and Alisha also win the Duet competition. Congrats to the academy and the winners.

Kabir, Dance team, Alisha and Sukku stepped on the stage and received the award, while the crowd was echoing with praises and claps. Nisha smiled as she watched her husband, sister-in-law and brother dance in joy at their victory.
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TSC Episode 339

By Niya

Scene 1

Everyone was really happy because of Kabir , Sukku and Alisha's victory but at the same time they were sad too because Alisha was supposed to leave in a few days. They all went to Gangwal house to celebrate their victory.

The elders were also happy after hearing the news. Ramesh and Laxmi were proud of their son. Sukku was happy because today he was the reason for this smile on their faces.

Dadi went to Sukku and blessed him...

Dadi : Main na kehti thi.. Mahare sare baache khub hosyaar hai.. te lok kham kha inn ki kabiliyat pe sakh kare ho...

Dolly : Haan Dadi.. aaj toh humare Sukku ne bhi kamal kar diya..

Sukku : Par yeh Kabir ke bina possible nahi tha...

Sukku went to Kabir and thanked him..

Kabir : Arey waah saale sahib.. aap toh thanks bolna bhi jante hai...

Everyone laughed.. Kabir can never change...

Alisha : Mujhe bhi toh wish karo..

Nisha came to Alisha and hugged her...

Nisha : Tumhe kaise wish nahi karenge.. tumne itne ache se Sukku ki help ki dance karne main.. warna aaj yeh jeet hi nahi pata...

Sukku : Oye tujhe kya lagta hai main acha dancer nahi hun ?

Nisha : Lagta nahi yakeen hai... aaj tu sirf Alisha ki help ke wajah se jeet paya hai..

Sukku( dreamily) : Haan vo toh hai...

Ramesh , NiBir and cousins didn't fail to notice the change in Sukku's smile when he looked at Alisha...

Ramesh : Acha baccho abh aise hi celebrate karoge ya party bhi karoge..?

Umesh : Ofcourse Chachu party toh hum karenge .. par yeh ek farewell party bhi hogi..

Dadi : Farewell party ? yeh kya hove hai ?

Aman : Dadi jab koi humse thode time ke liye door jata hai toh hum uske liye ek choti si party dete hai.. usse hum farewell party bolte hai...

Dadi : Bhali thari.. tum baache bhi na jane ke ke kare ho... abh yeh toh batado kon kahan ja raha hai ?

Kirti : Dadi vo Alisha Delhi ja rahi hai.. Usse wahan job offer hui hai as a choreographer

Dadi : Yeh toh bohut achi baat hai...

Alisha : But Dadi mujhe nahi jana...Mujhe aap sab ke saath time spend karna hai...

Alisha became sad and looked down.. Kabir was about to go to her but Laxmi signalled him that she will talk to her...

Laxmi : Alisha.. tumhe bura kyun lag raha hai ?

Alisha : Aunty mujhe itne time baad kiska pyaar mila hai aur abh mujhe jana pad raha hai.. issliye sad hun..

Laxmi : Bas itni si baat ? Alisha humne kya tumhe aisa kaha ki tumhare jaane ke baad hum tumhe bhul jayenge ?

Alisha nodded her head negatively...

Laxmi : Toh phir .. tum hum se door rehke bhi hamesha humare saath hi rahogi.. Abh aise sad hoke jaogi toh phir hume bhi bura lagega..

Alisha didn't speak anything she just kept looking down.. Laxmi came to her and effulged her in a hug.

After a long time Alisha had hugged someone who reminded her of her mother and she couldn't control her tears..

Everyone got emotional seeing them ..

Ramesh : Laxmi , tumne toh isse rula hi diya...

Alisha and Laxmi broke the hug..

Laxmi : Arey maine kya kiya.. Ramesh tum hamesh mujhe tang karne ke bahane hi dhundte ho..

Ramesh : Acha baba maaf karo mujhe..Bacchon tum sab mujhe bato ki tume kuch maddat chahiye kya party ke liye ..?

Nisha : Nahi Papa.. hum sab manage kar lenge..

Kabir : Haan aap bas Dadu ko mana lo... Waise vo hai kahan ?

Dadi : Thare Dadu kisi kaam se bahar gaye hai aur main toh party ke liye kabhi mana na karu jao ache se party karo..

Alisha : Vo sab toh theek hai.. par hum party karenge kahan ?

Nisha : Humare ghar pe.. Maa ka phone aaya tha ki unhe unki college ki koi friend milgai toh vo late aayengi aur Viraj sir ko Academy main late hone wala hai toh party hum apne ghar karenge..

Kabir : Toh hum yahan kya kar rahe hai chalo phir ghar jake taiyaariyaan kare...

The cousins took the permission and left for Viraj's house..

Scene2

Within 2 hrs the cousins had arranged for everything.. They tried to crack jokes and do stupid things to make Alisha laugh and they were successful in it.. Kabir was also sad that his sister is going away from him but he tried to hide it because he didn't want Alisha to become more sad but Nisha had noticed that even Kabir tired to be happy and she knew how to divert his mind.. when everyone was busy trying to divert Alisha's mind Nisha went to her room quietly and started doing some preparations...

After sometime Alisha and Sukku started feeling tired as they were exhausted after the dance.. everyone thought that they needed to rest thus they decided to leave.. Sukku said that he will drop Alisha and then come home but Kabir refused because Sukku looked too tired to drive and said that he himself will drop Alisha.. Sukku felt sad but he agreed to it...

Dolly noticed that Nisha was missing..

Dolly : Arey Nishu kahan hai ?

Kabir : Shayad vo room main hogi.. main bulata hun..

Dolly : Arey nahi rehndo.. hume chalna chahiye .. mujhe bhi bohut tired sa feel ho raha hai..

Kirti : Di hum chalte hai shayad aapko bhi rest chahiye..

Everyone left without informing Nisha .. Nisha was in her room when her phone beeped and she saw Kabir's message..

"Dear wifey,

Vanar sena ghar ja chuki hai aur Main Alisha ko chodne ja raha hun apna khayal rakhna ..

"

She smiled reading the message and continued her work

Scene 3

Kirti was in her room when Rupan came inside

Rupan : Aaj toh Sukku ne bhi kamal kar diya.. mujhe nahi pata th ki usse bhi dance aata hai...

Kirti rolled her eyes at her mom's taunt

Kirti : Mom aap kabhi nahi badal sakti na ?

Rupan : Arey abh maine kya kiya ?

Kirti : Abhi abhi aap Sukku ko taunt kar rahi thi..

Rupan : Main usse taunt nahi kar rahe thi tumhe bas itna bata rahi thi ki tumahre sare cousins apne aap ko prove kar rahe hai tum kab prove karogi khud ko?

Kirti : Jaldi hi kar dungi...

Saying so Kirti left the room in anger..leaving a shocked and confused Rupan

Scene 4

Kabir came home after dropping Alisha and he staright away went to his room and was surprised when he saw that the room was simply yet beautifully decorated with a few candles and there was his favourite dinner on the coffee table ... He smiled at Nisha's gesture .. Nisha came from behind and hugged him...

Kabir : Yeh sab kis liye wifey..?

He pulled her infront and wrapped his arms around her waist

Nisha : Aaj mere patidev ne bohut bada kaam kiya hai issliye ek chota sa celebration

Kabir : Oho.. par mujhe toh laga tha ki hum sab ke saath celebrate kar chuke hai...

He asked in a mischievous voice and Nisha replied in the same tone..

Nisha : Haan but ek chota sa celebration toh banta hai na.. special wala...

Kabir was getting excited hearing this..

Kabir : Kya special hai ?

Nisha caught his hand and made him sit on the bed and bought him his special dinner Bread Butter Jam...

Nisha : Yeh raha aaj ka special celebration ka special dinner

Kabir cribbed

Kabir : Sirf yehi special hai ?

Nisha : Haan

Kabir : Maine toh kya kya socha tha.. He pouted and Nisha understood what he was trying to say..

Nisha : Haan aur kuch special bhi mil sakta tha par uss din jo tune subah kiya usski punishment ki tarah tujhe aaj sirf yehi milega...

Kabir made a sad face and agreed after all he had no other option left.. they had their special dinner and then went to sleep cuddling eachother

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A/N : Please ignore the errors not proof-read the epic

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Hey Kabootars!!!!!🤗 and all the new members whom I've not met😳😆
I'm Lekha (for those who don't know me...or have forgotten me😆)
I'm writing an epi after around 45 epis. Plese forgive any mistakes made😳. I hope you enjoy this epi. I'l definitely write a better one net time.

Do Like the epi if you feel it deserves it😳

Episode 340

Sukku was pacing in his room as he called Nisha. She finally picked up.
"Hello", she said," Tell me sukku. I'm a little busy. "
"Today is your competition right?", sukku said.
"Yeah", Nisha said. Sukku could sense the nervousness in her voice.
" All the best Nishu", he said, " I know you'll do well. "
Nisha smiled.
"Thanks Sukku. I need it", she said.
" I'll be there in a while. There's traffic here but I'll do everything I can to reach there before the competition starts. Bye Nishu. "
"Bye", Nisha said and cut the call. She could feel her hands sweating.

She looked towards the audience for the one face she wants to see but she couldn't find the excited pair of chocolate brown eyes anywhere.
" Kabir where are you? ", she said.

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Sukku was getting impatient. His pace increased.
" Mom faster " he shouted, " Saurav said there's traffic. If we don't leave now we'll be late."

Just then his mobile belief and a notification popped up. It was a mail with his offer letter attached. Sukku opened the attachment and stared at it not able to bribe that his career is finally moving forward.

Lakshmi can't running with her handbag dangling from one finger.
"Sukku let's go. I'm ready."
Sukku was shaken from his trance.
"Yeah let's go", he said

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Kirti sat in silent as her father drove the car her mother noticed her not so excited face.
" Kirti ", her father said, " What's bothering you? "
Jwala, who was lost in her own thoughts jerked her head towards her sister.
"Nothing papa", Kirti said as she looked at her mother.
She didn't want to discuss her difficulty with her mom. She was scared that her mother will interfere and try to do something about it. Kirti felt that this was her chance and if she wanted to prune herself she needs to do it on her own.

They had almost reached when they got caught in the traffic.
" I need to buy something to drink ", Rupan said.
Surprisingly she didn't tell her husband to get it. Instead she took jwala's hand and got out of the car.
" There's a shop nearby. I'll buy simmering for the others also. ", she said.
Jwala understood that her sister needed to talk to their father and left with Rupan.

" Now tell me ", Mohan said.
" Papa", Kirti started, "I actually got a job offer through the institute."
"That's great news", Mohan said as his face lit up with pride.
" Not exactly ", Kirti said with a frown, " I didn't contact them since Saurav offered me a partnership with him and Dolly di. So now... "
"You want to accept the offer but there company already chose someone else", her father completed for her.
" Yeah ", she said with disappointment.
" It's not easy Kirti ", Mohan said, " That's why your mother keeps writing about you and your sister... well mainly about your marriage but she also worries in general. "
"That's why I didn't want to tell you before", Kirti admitted, " What do I do now. They won't give me the job. "
"You can try one thing", her father said, " I know that you are good with people. You can convince them to give you an interview. "

Kirti's face lit up.
"Yeah", she said, " That might actually work. If they give me an interview I can show them my portfolio and maybe then they'll consider hiring me."
Mohan smiled at the excitement that he brought back in his where daughter.
"You are there best dad", she says and hugged him lightly.

In a while Rupan and Jwala returned with juice and a few snacks and the traffic started moving.

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It was Nisha's turn. She walked up in front of the judges and bowed her head lightly to show her respect to them. Her eyes then wandered towards the audience. She couldn't find any familiar face.
" Nobody is here ", she says to herself as her heart sank.
" It's okay Nisha. Concentrate on the shooting ", another voice in her head said.

Nisha took a deep breath before taking her stance. She felt her mangalsutr with her hand and closed her eyes. Kabir's face appeared in her mind instantly.
" I believe in you ", he said, " All the best wifey."

She opened her eyes and kissed her mangalsutr. One thought of Kabir was all she needed to make herself feel better. She lifted the rifle and focused on the target. The gunshot echoed throughout the field and the audience broke into an applause. She good here a particular group of people applauding harder.

She turned towards the source of the loudest classis asking the audience to find everyone from Kabir and Dadu to Jwala and Bunty. Her face instantly lit up and her heart was spring with happiness. In one corner of the crowd she saw Kabir.
"I love you", he mouthed as he clapped harder.
Her smile grew wider and she blushed.

" They made it ", she thought.
" Of course they did ", says the other voice in her head," After all they are your family. "

So that's the epi. Sorry that it doesn't have much Nibir. Hope it was readable😳😆

IMP NOTE: As of now we have only two regular writers and me. I'm cathcing up too. Anyone interested in writing please PM Niyu, Mansi, Annie or me.


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TSC Episode 341

By Niya

Scene 1

Competition venue

Nisha came to her family as soon as she her turn got over... All the cousins came running towards her and hugged her ... after a good 5 mins hug they broke the hug..

Nisha : Dolly Di .. aapko iss condition main bhagna nahi chahiye ..

Dolly : Uff Nishu.. mujhe lecture baad main dena .. Main itni excited hun.. tune apna aim miss nahi kiya..

Nisha looked at Kabir who was standing right behind Dolly and replied

Nisha : Aim kaise miss karti Dolly Di , Mere saath mera lucky charm tha na...

She touched her mangalsutra for a fraction of second and Kabir understood that she was taking about him.. he smiled and winked at her in response..

Bunty : Wow Nishu Di, mujhe bhi ek lucky charm chahiye taki main bhi exams main answer na bhul saku...

Everyone laughed hearing his statement and Bunty made a sad face.. Kabir came to him and ruffled his hair..

Kabir : Bunty har kisika apna khud ka ek lucky charm hota hai tera bhi ek hoga.. time aane pe mil jayega tab tak tu padhai pe dhyaan de...

Bunty nodded his head...

Nisha : Agar tum sab ka hogaya ho toh main jake Dadaji aur baki sab se mil lun ?

She went to her family and saw everyones smiling faces ...

She took blessings from her other elders and went to her Dadaji

DadaJi : Mujhe garv hai tum pe Nisha.. Tum itne samay baad bhi apna nishaana nahi chukki...

Nisha : Dadaji aapki poti hun.. kabhi aisa kaam nahi kar sakti jis se aapka garv kaam ho .. aur agar aaj main nishaana sahi nahi lagati toh aap ka garv kaam ho jata aur main aisa kaise hone deti...

Dadaji : Pagal ho tum puri..

Nisha smiled and hugged him... she then went to her parents... Ramesh kissed her forehead and blessed her..

Ramesh : Mere happy wale geet ne aaj mujhe wapas happy kar diya...

Nisha looked at Laxmi who was having tears in her eyes.. she rolled her eyes and said ..

Nisha : Maa aap kabhi bhi rona kyun start kar deti ho ? Chalo abh smile karo...

Laxmi smiled and hugged her daughter...

Vasundara and Viraj also wished Nisha.. Kabir was about to go and congratulate her but by then all the participants were called on the stage as they had to announce the winner..

Both of them became sad that they couldn't talk but Kabir signalled her to go...

Nisha went and stood on the stage clutching her mangalsutra tightly ..

"And the winner is Nisha Kumar from Lakshaya Academy "

Nisha's heart skipped a beat when she heard her name as the winner ... and Kabir literally jumped in Joy...

Nisha tooked the award and gave a small thanks speech

Nisha : Thank you so much for this award, Main kisi ek insaan ka naam nahi lena chahungi jisne mujhe yahan tak aane main help ki, meri puri family ne meri help ki hai aur main apni family ke har member se equally pyaar karti hun issliye main kisika naam nahi lungi.. Thankyou

Everyone clapped for her as she got off the stage and went to her family... she gave the award to Viraj..

Nisha : Sir yeh award sirf mera nahi hai yeh Lakshaya Academy ka award hai.. issliye aap isse rakhiye..

Viraj : Nahi Nisha.. yeh haq aapka hai ki aap isse khud apne haathon se Lakshaya Academy main rakhe ..

Nisha smiled and nodded her head positively.. once again everyone congratulated her . After about 30 minutes everyone went home

Scene 2

Gangwal House

Dadaji was sitting in his room and he had a small smile on his face..

Viren, Mohan and Ramesh who were talking about something and passing by his room saw him and were surprised to see their father like this.. they went inside and sat next to him

Viran : Kya baat hai Bauji aap muskura kun rahe hai ?

Dadji : Aaj bohut garv ho raha hai mujhe aapne pote potiyon pe.. ek ek kar ke har koi apni kabiliyat sabit kar rahe hai.. aise main mere chere pe apne aap ek muskaan aajati hai..

They smiled hearing him..

Ramesh : Sahi kaha aapne bauji.. humare baache itne bade hogaye aur hume pata bhi nahi chala...

Dadaji : Aisa hi hota hai Ramesh.. mujhe bhi toh pata nahi chala ki mere baache kab itne bade hog aye ki unke baachon ke wajah se aaj Gangwal parivaar ka naam roshan ho raha hai...

Mohan : Bauji aap aise bol rahe hai jaise hum sab bhi bhuddhe ho gaye hai..

They all laughed at his statement ... since he had some work he asked them to go and rest and they obeyed him and went to their respective rooms

Scene 3

Viraj's house

Kabir went to Vasundara and Viraj and asked for something which surprised them ...

Viraj : Par chote aap aisa kyun keh rahe ? Appko yahan koi takleef hai toh aap humse keh sakte hai...

Kabir : Bade Bhaiya aisa kuch nahi hai.. yahan hume koi takleef nahi hai... Vo baat yeh hai i.. erm.. vo...

He was fumbling with his words making them confuse..

Kabir : Abh main aaplogon se kaise kahu..

He started scratching the back of his neck and blushed slightly.. Vasundara looked at his expressions and guessed what he wanted to say she started laughing making Kabir blush more and Viraj more confused

Viraj : Maa aap has kyun rahi hai ?

Vasundara : Hum samajh gaye ki Kabir kehna kya chahta hai issliye hum has rahe hai... Jojo humne nahi pata tha ki aap aise hai..

Viraj was also understanding now what his mother was trying to say and his brother's expressions were saying him that he is thinking correct.. even he joined his mother in laughing making Kabir blush harder but to hide his blush Kabir started cribbing

Kabir : Aap log haste rahe mujh pe main jar aha hun meri baat hi nahi suni kisiko ..

He pouted and was about to go when Viraj stopped him and gave him something...

Viraj : Yeh lijiye

Vasundara : Kabir.. abh aapko koi disturb nahi karega...

Saying so she started to laugh again and Viraj joined her too Kabir ran outside the room to avoid more embarrassment

Scene 4

Kabir asked Nisha to get ready as he was about to take her somewhere to celebrate their success.. she wore a white ball gown which Kabir asked her to wear and was waiting for him in the parking area but Kabir was no where to be seen.. suddenly someone came from behind and blindfolded her.. Nisha could sense that it was Kabir so she didn't get scared but she got confused about what he was doing..

Nisha : Kabir kya kar raha hai..?

Kabir : Blind fold aur kya ?

Nisha : Kyun ?

Kabir : Kyunki main tujhe surprise dena chahta hun..

Nisha : Surprise ? Kya hai surprise...?

Kabir : Nisha surprise hai batunga thodi.. aur ek aur question nahi puchna.. warna tera muh bhi bandh dunga..

Nisha was about to argue but she knew that Kabir would indeed tie a cloth on her mouth too if she spoke anything so she just kept mum...

Kabir guided her to the car and then himself drove the car.. after a while he stopped the car..

He went and opened the door for Nisha and helped her stand .. he closed the door and scooped her in his arms and started walking...

Nisha : Kabir kya kar raha hai ? Chod mujhe..

Kabir : Nisha chup reh na...

Nisha : Par Kabir...

Kabir bent down and made her stand again.. Nisha thought that he is angry on her thus he put her down..

Nisha : Kabir I am sorry tu please gussa mat ho...

Before Nisha could speak anything she heard the sound of a door getting opened...

Nisha : Kabir hum pohunch gaye kya ?

Kabir : Haan...

He came behind her and again scooped her in his arms...

Kabir : Nisha.. apna blind fold khol le..

Nisha did as he said and as soon as she opened her eyes she was pleasantly surprised ...

Nisha : Kabir.. hum wapas aapne ghar aagaye ?

She asked in excitement and Kabir nodded his head positively.. Nisha hugged him and placed a soft kiss on his cheek..

Nisha : Pata hai main iss ghar ko kitna miss kar rahi thi..

Kabir : Main bhi apni privacy ko bohut miss kar raha tha..

He stressed on the word privacy making Nisha blush...

Nisha : Kabir yahan andhera kyun hai ??

Kabir : Kyunki aaj ke special night ki arrangement Terrace pe ki hai...

He took her to the terrace in his arms...

Nisha was mesmerized by seeing the decorations...

There was nothing else but just white flowers and white balloons ...

Kabir let her down and she started walking slowly and admiring the entire place... all of a sudden it started to rain... Nisha opened her arms and enjoyed the rain...

Kabir stood there admiring her .. that innocent smile on her face when she tried catching the drops in her hand and failed to do so... her wet hair coming on her face disturbing her when she was playing in the rain and she was flipping them behind ...

Suddenly Nisha turned and due to the wet floor she was about to loose her balance but Kabir came and held her in time .. she clutched his shirt tightly...Kabir wrapped his arms tightly around her waist and pulled her in himself ...

Both stood there drenched in rain , lost in each other's eyes for a long time ... a thunder sound bought them out of their dreamland...

Nisha started shivering in his arms as she felt cold.. without wasting anymore time Kabir scooped her in his arms and took her down to the room...

All the while he couldn't take his eyes off Nisha's face .. there were few water droplets on her lips... he wanted to capture her lips right then and suck those droplets...Nisha noticed this and her cheeks turned red .. she tried to hide her face in his chest...

He took her to the room and made her stand on her feet... He took a few steps behind and stood there admiring her.. the gown seemed like second skin now... Nisha clutched the side of her gown and looked down shyly.. she looked up for a second and she noticed that Kabir had worn a white shirt and now since it was wet it was completely transparent... she never thought that he would look so hot in this wet look.. she turned red at her own thought.. Kabir started taking small steps towards her and Nisha started walking backwards..

There came a point when Nisha was stuck in between Kabir and the wall.. she knew that there was no way to escape .. she leaned on the wall and closed her eyes...

The water was dropping from her fringes that made it way through her eyes and it settled on her lips.. Nisha slightly parted her lips and that was it for Kabir... without warning her he captured her lips and started sucking each droplet of water on her lips .. Nisha wrapped her hand around his neck and started ruffling his hair roughly...

The rain that drenched them completely had awaken a desire in them and now the passionate kiss made them desire for more...

After a few mintues both broke the kiss ... Kabir rested his head against Nisha's and both tried getting hold of their breath

Kabir : Kal maine sirf bread butter jam ke special dinner se kaam chala liya tha.. aaj main apna special desert taste kiye bina manane wala nahi hun...

Nisha blushed and before she could react or say anything he again started kissing her...

Nisha also kissed him back with the same passion...

She started playing with the collar of his shirt...

Kabir started unbuttoning his shirt and threw it somewhere in the corner of the room...

Nisha smiled and blushed at the same time at his impatience ...

Kabir took a few steps backwards and Nisha started ogling his bare chest and Kabir smirked seeing the effect he had on his wifey.. He again went to her and took her to the bed.. he started placing soft kisses all over her face and soon they reached another level of passion

After a long time they spent another beautiful night full of love in their lovely house...

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A/N :

Maha Episode... again 😆

I hope you guys like the NiBir scene, I don't how I wrote the scene ... ☺️

Waiting for your likes and comments ☺️

Ignore the mistakes.. I haven't proof read the episode as usual 🤣

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