Revival : Conquering The Past - A Joint Venture updt scene 15 pg 41 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi

Anuuu🤗 You perfectly captured Nisha's thoughts ,reactions and emotions...

First everyone claps for this concept bcoz show main they didn't show anything like this 👏

Originally posted by: A-N-G-E-L-I-N-A

Loved the update ... you have written it very nicely ... Nisha's feeling, her confusion, her helplessness , her inner turmoil .. everything... 👏 👏 👏
Continue soon n thanks for the pm ... 😃

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome update👍🏼...

Originally posted by: maniwood

First everyone claps for this concept bcoz show main they didn't show anything like this 👏

If media created so much hype everyone were bound to recognize nisha

Now for papaji 🤗

Awesome yaar kaise likh lete lo itna acha

Perfect use of words to describe her emotions

While reading it i was feeling like nisha only

Originally posted by: -Lachu-

Beautiful anu! nothing more to say👏

beautifully conveyed, excellent.

i loved how you made her divert her mind to her family...and the people gossipping...beautifully written anu...no words to convey how good it is...keep up the good work😃

Awww Anu man, your chapter made me really sad. Bechari Nisha. Frick, you've portrayed her mental anguish so well! I could totally feel all her emotions.

Originally posted by: lovely_lady

Awww Anu man, your chapter made me really sad. Bechari Nisha. Frick, you've portrayed her mental anguish so well! I could totally feel all her emotions.

Although I do think it's a little bit of a stretch with almost everyone recognizing her so quickly from the PC. Perhaps that's the way things are in India I guess, idk.

Amazing chapter -- extremely well done!

Originally posted by: gpuneet

Amazing Yaar👏

unres😉😆

15th post I m unres ng Aftr my come back..😲Phewww😆🤣

First lemme give u a Clap👏 & a hug🤗 4 this thought... !!! We ll done yaarom👏👏👏
Another joint venture.. & Another plot... All the best wishes... 👍🏼Keep Writing more Q ki DMM😃

Read all 3 parts in a row...😉

I was just touched by each part... Each part was Emotionally filled & It really touched me..👏👏👏

Part 1 - Lachu

Liked the way u portrayed how society treat the victim without any mercy👏👏👏
They r only interested in blaming evnthough there is no fault at victim's part.. Sad But Truth😒

Nisha remembering the PC part was nicely written👏

Her father's defeated and broken look flashed before her eyes. Dadaji's state as he witnessed his family getting humiliated in front of the media. Her family and the trouble they had to go through.

These lines was too emotional yaar..😭 felt bad 4 Nisha..

Loved Nishu-Ramy Phone Convo..😊👍🏼
Father-Daughter Bond very well portrayed👏👏👏 Ramesh understands Nisha well...😳

Her voice cracked and she was finding it difficult to speak. Ramesh's heart fluttered thinking of Nisha's state. His daughter was trying hard to conceal her sorrow from him, he understood that much.

See this line proves My point..😊

A gud Update Lachu... 👏👏👏

Part 2 - Anu

As I always says "Anu U r best in writing emotional scenes..👍🏼 U play with words so well dat it wl directly get connected with reader's heart"👏👏👏👏

This part proves it once again...!!!!!😃

In ur part there were less dialogues But Yet it managed to give dat heart to heart connection yaar..
its Definitely Ur Talent & for dat extra clapsss👏👏👏👏👏

Nisha closed her eyes and tried to concentrate on something better...She tried to remember the smiling face of her father...her father who endured it all for her,her father who battled against the world for her.She tried to remember the cheerful yet tensed face of her mother...the sweet and simple soul who kept worrying about her ... whose sole mission in life was to see her happy...

She tried to remember the happy faces of her cousins who are the closest to her heart,the ones who understood her better than herself.She tried to remember the family members...the ones who supported her through her thick and thin.

Beautiful Yaar Anu... Juss Beautiful... Loved these lines 👍🏼
Nisha remembering her family & again remembering the PC & the whole frustations, Battle with her mind & brain all were excellently penned down..👏👏👏

She opened her eyes,only to see people staring at her...as if she was a criminal...as if she was at fault. She didn't wish to stay here any longer...she didn't want to become a ragdoll for everyone to play and tease...She wanted to get away from the prying eyes of the people...unnoticed...as soon as possible.

How helpless she wl be feeling dat time.. aww...😭 again I cud feel dat state yaar..👏👏👏
She is wandering for peace & every passing minute she feels so bad 4 herself & Nisha Gangwal feel ashamed of herself.. Aww..😭 Juss think A girl with so much self confidence & self proudness has been shattered... totally shattered...😭 & Anu portrayed it so well..👏

Last Nisha's outburst was soo... 👏👏👏 real & was gud👏👏👏

"YES I AM!!!I AM THE GIRL WHO WAS THERE IN THE PRESS CONFERENCE!"She shouted out ,her voice cracking due to the intensity...

This line frm Nisha made me more & more sad...😭😭😭

"I am sorry pappa..."she mumbled..."I am..."her voice trailed off...

Excellent writing Anu...👏👏👏

Part 3 - Shwetss

Another Emotional update...👏👏👏

The consequences of PC at GF was nicely showed by Shwetss👏👏👏
My fav part was Ramesh Supporting His Daughter & saying the right things to Viren & Dadaji..👏
I am quoting my fav part below as I cant chose any one in particular.. Loved all...👏👏👏

"NISHA IS THE VICTIM HERE!" countered Ramesh,

"She has been framed into all this. Don't you all see that? You all think Nisha wrote those mails to conspire against Viraj? To get back at him?" asked Ramesh bemused.

Ramesh ran his hand across his face desperately trying to keep his anger in check. "Yes! She loved Viraj...Is that wrong? She wrote those mails in innocence, to get closer to Viraj...to help him...

"I beg you all to please stop this..." pleaded Ramesh. "Nisha needs support now, at least from her family. She needs hands to help her stand and not feet to stamp her down even more..."

"So? What do you want to do Bauji?" asked Ramesh refusing to succumb. "Sacrifice Nisha so that your family name will be regained? Nisha is the daughter of this house...instead of thinking about her wellbeing...you are thinking about the family..."

"Then I don't need this identity...Nothing is more important to me than Nisha..." answered Ramesh with resolute.

"Bauji! " started Ramesh in a calm voice. "Nisha will come back only when she feels like it. I won't or let anyone force her to come back. She is my daughter...and I know what's good for her...If I cannot make decisions for my children in this house, then..." Ramesh left the sentence to be understood.

@Red Most Fav one...😊👏👏👏

I also liked the part where Nisha came & Ramesh gave her support & hw she jus slowly break down in his father's arms... 😭 how Beautifully U Wrote Shwetss.. Itss Juss PERFECT👏👏👏

Quoting again dat scenes..👏👏👏

"Nishu!" was the only thing he could get himself to speak. His shoulders drooped in resignation.

The moment the voice of her father reached her, she looked up to see worry written all over his face, concern visible in his body. She tried hard not to cry. She didn't want to break down in front of her family, in front of her father. She didn't want to show her pain and her struggle to anyone. But every step her father took to get to her, she could feel her defenses crumble.

Ramesh could see his daughter slowly breaking down. He could feel his own strength crumbling inside. The one thing he could never bear to see was his daughter in tears. He had failed to protect his daughter.

As soon as he reached her, Ramesh gathered Nisha in his arms. He could see his daughter had no strength left in her. She held him tight. She wanted to feel safe and no one apart from her father could make her feel that.

"Papa!" croaked Nisha.

"Ssshh!" silenced Ramesh. "Nothing happened. I am here with you. I won't let anything happen to you...Ok?' He put all his strength on those words.

@Red Literally I saw dat scene b4 my eyes...😭 Very well written👏👏👏

Last But Not Least Lekshmi's Outburst👏👏👏 It was essential..👏

"Bauji! Please...please try and understand. Nisha is not in a state to listen or talk. She needs support and strength. Yes. Whatever happened was bad. But Nisha is the one who is affected the most. You are all worried about the name Gangwal, please think about Nisha too. If you can't, at least leave her alone."

Lakshmi spoke politely, but her words and attitude sent out the message clearly. Unable to control her emotions seeing her daughter in this state, she started crying.

Well Wriiten Part👏👏👏

Do write more..🤗 Q ki DMM😳
Do PM me if possible..😳😊

Finally Finished with my Comment...😆 Nw going 4 Unres ng other posts..😆🤣