Revival : Conquering The Past - A Joint Venture updt scene 15 pg 41 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Anagha.

WHAT?!!!😆

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

I am serious yar...First time when I read it...I was like..."What has she done" 😆 I was already confused what to write for my scene...and you give me this...😆

Originally posted by: Anagha.

yaar😆i am flying now😆

i need isha's criticism now😆to balance it😆

i am sure there are a lot of grammar mistakes😆

my mind was totally blank after reading lachu's part😆

so i am sur u will write😉

once we strt,the words will just start flowing😉

Originally posted by: Teogapi

bol beta bol... i am so confused right now... i am like should i start writing now?? aur abhi toh shweta ka part baaki hai..

Originally posted by: Teogapi

bol beta bol... i am so confused right now... i am like should i start writing now?? aur abhi toh shweta ka part baaki hai..

Originally posted by: Shwets1502

@Rema Start after I post...😆 Else you will get confused..😆

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi

This is the advantage of joint venture ,right? 😆 You don't need poor reader's comments only 😃 Thread is full of Author discussions only. To be frank - your discussions are also not less interesting to read..😆

Originally posted by: Niya_789

I wish they showed something like this in the show.. but phir Kabir ki entry nahi hoti😆

but Biwi.. you have written it so well... all her emotions are so well written...👏

I am proud o you Biwi👏